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by forgetmenot
Wed Oct 22, 2014 2:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Before Yamaku - the events leading up to KS
Replies: 8
Views: 1509

Re: Before Yamaku - the events leading up to KS

This is actually pretty good. You have some issues with keeping tenses consistent, but since you only seem to switch after section breaks, I suppose it's not really a mistake so much as a weird style choice. The content is solid, the dialogue doesn't seem stilted, and your take on Iwanako is believa...
by forgetmenot
Wed Oct 22, 2014 2:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 296127

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.52 posted 10/

"Yeah, actually, she's with one of my classmates, helping her get ready for some date or something. I didn't even know she did that kind of thing, but then I didn't know her until a couple days ago, and...well, I don't know that many of my classmates, really." I swear this group of authors is so in...
by forgetmenot
Wed Oct 22, 2014 12:51 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Drawing: Rin~
Replies: 6
Views: 3370

Re: Drawing: Rin~

Yeah, that did go some to help explain it :) So, in effect (and I don't want to sound like I'm oversimplifying it) it becomes a grand scale dot to dot? That's pretty neat! It's a neat format because it scales extremely well - you don't have to worry too much about pixellation if you want to make a ...
by forgetmenot
Tue Oct 21, 2014 12:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/28)
Replies: 1039
Views: 278962

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/17)

So, I think that everyone who writes a route, or at the very least a larger piece of fiction where Hisao is with an OC (I consider any character in the game that doesn't have many things about them established as an OC, so that would include characters like Saki, Rika, Miki, Suzu, etc.) probably ha...
by forgetmenot
Wed Oct 15, 2014 6:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')
Replies: 283
Views: 81138

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (04—Curiosity) (20141015)

Hoo man. And the shopkeeper complains that he doesn't have as much fanfic as other side characters. Glad to see you took a step in rectifying that.

It's a fun little one-shot; admittedly, I'm not sure it would have worked as anything else. Quite well done.
by forgetmenot
Tue Oct 14, 2014 3:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Brownie of Yamaku, -snippets-
Replies: 15
Views: 3231

Re: The Brownie of Yamaku (One Shot)

This is well-written. I'm not entirely sure what purpose it has as a one-shot, since it does nothing more than introduce a new character, but that's neither here nor there. It was entertaining, and short enough where we don't really have to ask bigger questions.
by forgetmenot
Sat Oct 11, 2014 9:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 95942

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 5/8]

How is exactly is Kagami's Amnesia? Is she not able to create new memories and catches up with her whole life in the morning or is she able to remember bits and pieces and fills in the gaps through her notes? It's probably somewhere in the story but I must have forgotten, maybe I have amnesia :shoc...
by forgetmenot
Wed Oct 01, 2014 5:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Waitaminute... Misha HAS to be bisexual.
Replies: 220
Views: 30196

Re: Waitaminute... Misha HAS to be bisexual.

Steinherz wrote:
forgetmenot wrote:*snip*
Blehh, I'm not funny

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by forgetmenot
Wed Oct 01, 2014 2:57 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Waitaminute... Misha HAS to be bisexual.
Replies: 220
Views: 30196

Re: Waitaminute... Misha HAS to be bisexual.

Blehhh. Human sexuality is not, by any means, a discrete characteristic that falls into neat little categories. "Gay", "Lesbian", "Straight", "Bisexual", etc. are all terms that are used in society at large to categorize groups of people that fit a majority of the groups' respective characteristics ...
by forgetmenot
Tue Sep 30, 2014 11:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Library Anniversarie Collection
Replies: 99
Views: 21068

Re: The Library Anniversarie Collection

I seem to recall an anniversary story I wrote a few months ago being hailed as depressing by none other than Mirage. Pot? It's the kettle. Turns out, you're black. As one might guess from the title, I was trying for a story that alternated between happy (or at least positive) and sad between the ch...
by forgetmenot
Tue Sep 30, 2014 12:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 252158

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Library Anniversaire Stuf

Tormound wrote:
Sea wrote:Mriage's story is up, get over to the thread
What story?
Here's a direct link to the post in question.
by forgetmenot
Mon Sep 29, 2014 5:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Library Anniversarie Collection
Replies: 99
Views: 21068

Re: The Library Anniversarie Collection

I seem to recall an anniversary story I wrote a few months ago being hailed as depressing by none other than Mirage. Pot? It's the kettle. Turns out, you're black. All kidding aside, that's about as much sentiment as can be packed into such a small space. I think the fact that you left out the ident...
by forgetmenot
Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:50 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 251565

Re: Random KS Discussion

I just completed KS. My route order was Emi, Rin, Shizune, Hanako then Lilly. Now I don't know what to do with my life. Welcome to the forums! If you're still hankering for more KS-related material, there's plenty of good stuff on the fanfiction board . If you're looking for a specific kind of stor...
by forgetmenot
Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 95942

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 5/8]

No, it's not finished. As of 8/8, Ah, sheesh, thanks so much! I realize there hasn't been an update in a while, but I took a little break to write another story involving Saki and Rika , and I haven't really gotten back into the swing of this one just yet. There's about half of the next chapter wri...
by forgetmenot
Mon Sep 29, 2014 1:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')
Replies: 283
Views: 81138

Re: Alternate Dreams (Three Witches!) (20140929)

Neat.

Must have been a hell of a revision if the first version just flat-out didn't work. This definitely does.