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by forgetmenot
Mon Mar 31, 2014 10:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rin's Arc/Miki's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 115
Views: 69525

Re: After the Dream—Rin's Arc (Part 3 up 20140401)

Whaaaaaaaaat.

Please tell me these are just the machinations of Rin's overactive imagination.
by forgetmenot
Mon Mar 31, 2014 3:48 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Obviously the game won't ever have VA, buuuut...
Replies: 47
Views: 12198

Re: Obviously the game won't ever have VA, buuuut...

Munchenhausen wrote:I still want them all voiced by Jason Statham, though
At the very least he should do Shizune's voice.
by forgetmenot
Mon Mar 31, 2014 3:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rin's Arc/Miki's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 115
Views: 69525

Re: After the Dream—Rin's Arc (Part 1 up 20140331)

Ah, and so Rin's arc begins. Looking forward to what you have in store. One small stylistic thing I'd like to comment on, if I may: When was the last time you had a f—ing meal? See, I'm not sure what Miki is actually saying when you write her dialogue as such. It comes off one of two ways: either sh...
by forgetmenot
Tue Mar 25, 2014 4:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573149

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Hm. What to say, what to say. Metafiction has its time and place, but you have to play pretty extensively with Katawa Shoujo universe in order for it to mesh well. Consider Groundhog Day , if you will. There's a similar premise, but Bill Murray's character isn't aware he's the subject of a sort of "...
by forgetmenot
Mon Mar 24, 2014 6:15 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Achievements
Replies: 980
Views: 185470

Re: Katawa Shoujo Achievements

Gift of the Nakai
  • Rig the Secret Santa gift exchange so Shizune gets earphones and Rin gets mittens.
by forgetmenot
Mon Mar 24, 2014 1:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 100069

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

A lot of small things, but most of all this line: ["Hello, Mom and Dad,"] I greet them with a smile, while signing for Shizune. They briefly glance at each other in surprise at the sight of me using sign language, but look on in stoic silence. ["I'd like to introduce my girlfriend, Shizune Hakamich...
by forgetmenot
Thu Mar 20, 2014 2:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 18061

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)

Herma123 wrote:Wow, it's really been awhile since I got on the Renai. Is anyone still interested in me finishing this?
That's technically a request, which isn't allowed on the fan works boards here. If you want to finish it, do so because you want to.
by forgetmenot
Tue Mar 18, 2014 9:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573149

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Hmm. KS: Bloodline. When I originally read it, my chief complaint was that it felt forced. The premise, the writing, the remarkably Gary Stu-ish main character... everything felt awkwardly shoehorned in. Going back and reading it again pretty much confirms - if not strengthens - my original assesmen...
by forgetmenot
Tue Mar 18, 2014 12:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565836

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 36 up 3/

I wouldn't dare use (or even ask to use) a character in someone else's ongoing fic anyway, but she'd be up near the top of my list if I could. I don't know about Leaty, but in my case at least, a number of people have asked to use Kagami in various works of their own (come to think of it, nary a on...
by forgetmenot
Wed Mar 12, 2014 3:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573149

Re: Yamaku Book Club

So, any other thoughts on the story rather than the punctuation in it? Hmm, hmm, what to say that hasn't already been said. I feel like pieces like this are easy to think up, and difficult to execute. This being the quintessential example of when this process works correctly . The premise isn't muc...
by forgetmenot
Wed Mar 12, 2014 11:20 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Achievements
Replies: 980
Views: 185470

Re: Katawa Shoujo Achievements

Munchenhausen wrote:Steve Hawkins' Pro Wheelchair
  • Hijack Emi and her wheelchair and go for a ride
I think you mean Steve Hawking's Pro Wheelchair.
by forgetmenot
Tue Mar 11, 2014 4:18 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Achievements
Replies: 980
Views: 185470

Re: Katawa Shoujo Achievements

WTF am I playing:
Somehow make a coherent sequel to Katawa Shoujo that includes all the achievements in this thread.
by forgetmenot
Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:37 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4044
Views: 968081

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

The world could always use more Lilly.

Image
by forgetmenot
Tue Mar 11, 2014 10:54 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 428870

Re: The "feels" bazaar.

Hisao The Hedgehog, the dark, edgy sequel where Hisao has a gun and swears a lot and can choose whether to side with Kenji or the feminists through a series of boring, poorly thought out missions that will have you twisting the camera around in ways you didn't think were possible. Thanks for remind...
by forgetmenot
Mon Mar 10, 2014 9:40 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2405
Views: 538840

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

abislpknt wrote:...You go out and spend ~$400 on a digital piano and a few accessories just so you can learn to play the music from the game..even though you've never touched a piano in you life..

Yep..
Never a better time to learn than right now! Stick with it!