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by CptSalsa
Sun Feb 24, 2013 12:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 56242

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 21st Feb)

Leave it to BlackWaltz to make everyone love Hisao.
by CptSalsa
Sun Feb 24, 2013 12:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Feel so Lucky-(Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 9
Views: 2207

Re: To Feel so Lucky-(Post Hanako Good End)

You forget periods after some sentences in quotations. finding a job designing the layout for a local magazine. I’m glad Hisao recommended a long shower, Well that was awkward. as it is quite reveling and despite all of the progress I’ve made, Should be spelled revealing. But I would be reveling fro...
by CptSalsa
Sun Feb 24, 2013 12:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 391160

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/18]

You type better with your toes than I do with my knuckles. I've never said it before but I like the titles you give your chapters, Thanatos.
by CptSalsa
Sat Feb 23, 2013 11:57 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Emi Horatio Caine One-liners
Replies: 373
Views: 108388

Re: Emi Horatio Caine One-liners

I couldn't resist.
EmiHoratioLILLYBLIND.jpg
You think this isn't funny? Well I'll have you know that all the good ones were taken! It's not like I came late to the party!
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by CptSalsa
Sat Feb 23, 2013 11:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 91551

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 2/23

Ah, a shameful display. I done goof with their meaning. I guess you could call me a kleptomaniac. But in all seriousness, :wink: to quote my favourite editing tool, Grammar Girl: It's actually pretty straightforward. The majority of the time you use affect with an a as a verb and effect with an e as...
by CptSalsa
Sat Feb 23, 2013 11:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Kijo
Replies: 146
Views: 56352

Re: Katawa Kijo

From the depths of the realm of the shadowed areas of the place they call many names, couldn't think of one a story lies in wait for a traveler to seek out its knowledge and tell the world how much they loved it, and in doing so bring it back from the dead. That traveler was called StudyofWumbology,...
by CptSalsa
Sat Feb 23, 2013 11:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 91551

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 2/23

Is this really the last one? :cry: “Kids have that affect on you,” I'm pretty sure it should be effect. Don't cop-out and say it's how he talks. I just think it looks bad when I read through and a science professor should never get those two words wrong. “Uh-huh,” I as getting really tired of organi...
by CptSalsa
Fri Feb 15, 2013 8:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 25531

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Valentine's Day Update

I think I'm losing my mind. I was sure I saw incorrect usage somewhere. A shameful display for me. Must restore my honour. “you couldn’t of just signed up for this because of me. Spill, what’s she blackmailing you with?” "you couldn't have just signed up for this because of me. Spill, what’s she bla...
by CptSalsa
Fri Feb 15, 2013 6:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 25531

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Valentine's Day Update

A lot of "you're"s are supposed to be "your" and vice versa. Maybe when I stop using my phone and use a computer I can point them out to you. Also for some reason when I heard the second linked song I burst out laughing.
by CptSalsa
Fri Feb 15, 2013 6:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 219606

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 02/14/2013

Organ harvesters. Organ harvesters... organ harvesters. Organ. Harvesters. Is that a reference?