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by CptSalsa
Sun Mar 17, 2013 10:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
Replies: 52
Views: 10620

Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]

Also try to make better titles. Unless you were going for that, please note that I almost died laughing reading that title and I almost expected satire. Because your title was really, really blunt. But I guess this story was really blunt too I guess. I guess a lot, as you might have guessed.
by CptSalsa
Wed Mar 13, 2013 2:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Sides Of The Same Coin
Replies: 17
Views: 3886

Re: Two Sides Of The Same Coin

Nice to see this was updated. To tell the truth I was starting to miss this.
by CptSalsa
Wed Mar 13, 2013 1:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 91551

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update

I'm always late to the best parties. :x I liked the ending, it kind of reminded me of the ending to the Max Payne video game series. Wait! I have an idea for some fan-art. Be right back, this might take a while. I will actually do this, I can art too. Feel free to start on Hisao and Kenji College St...
by CptSalsa
Wed Mar 06, 2013 2:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 91551

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 3/5 Update

First off let me say this was an excellent addition to the story. And now let me say that I hate when one person keeps labelling characters with many variations. ( like what Hisao did with each syndicate leader) It was made more confusing with you having two of them. But at least it was only for a r...
by CptSalsa
Sun Mar 03, 2013 2:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scar Crossed Lovers (OCXHanako) (Update 3-15-13- CH 2)
Replies: 15
Views: 3187

Re: Scar Crossed Lovers (OCXHanako)

For your information a fedora, when worn properly makes for a cool guy. Maybe it's just that there are words on it. Oh yes, tense switching is a very big problem here.
by CptSalsa
Sun Mar 03, 2013 2:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 391159

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/2]

Wheee! I'm tired. I like how you got Hisao onto the roof for that conversation. Although I think it happened after the exams though. But you talked about Lilly and the mafia. So all is forgiven.  who don't know Ms. Ibarizaki, as she's our star runner.” Spelled Ibarazaki wrong. Emi asserts, setting a...
by CptSalsa
Sun Mar 03, 2013 1:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 403102

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)

Enjoyed this story as a lurker. Memories of the first chapter are still in my head. I felt your ending perfectly emulated those of the actual VN so I salute you for that. Words cannot express. I also immortalized your story into an eBook. As long as I don't make it available to the public, right? :|
by CptSalsa
Sun Mar 03, 2013 1:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scar Crossed Lovers (OCXHanako) (Update 3-15-13- CH 2)
Replies: 15
Views: 3187

Re: Scar Crossed Lovers (OCXHanako)

Late to the party. It seems all burnt OC males wear hats.
Also
Emi Izabanaki!
That reminded me of a YouTuber who pronounced everyone's name in the VN wrong. Brings back memories.
by CptSalsa
Mon Feb 25, 2013 11:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lotus Child
Replies: 26
Views: 3678

Re: Lotus Child

Funny thing that you referenced Shining in the Sky, I actually brought myself to assemble my (out-of-tune) upright to finally finish learning it (and a few other songs) a day before you posted that. Also, what you said in your last chapter of your last post, if you could call it that, does that mean...
by CptSalsa
Sun Feb 24, 2013 12:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 91551

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 2/23

I spent five minutes trying to find H&K: University students who seriously need to watch less action movies. I wisely gave up. Also what's with the censoring? In your little font I'm sure this 'man' was actually someone called made you look . :wink: I hope that makes us even. At least in another uni...
by CptSalsa
Sun Feb 24, 2013 11:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 391159

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/18]

i ate my own head
now youve seen everything
pics or fake
by CptSalsa
Sun Feb 24, 2013 1:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "On Patrol"
Replies: 4
Views: 1572

Re: "On Patrol"

I liked it, but I couldn't like it to its full potential because I didn't really understand it, you know what I mean? �Pick up whatever food ration�s you�ve got an slide them over! Fast!� rations, an' or and Also why do they do that if they could just shoot her. Maybe in another life, you and her co...
by CptSalsa
Sun Feb 24, 2013 12:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Persistence (OC Story)
Replies: 6
Views: 2487

Re: Persistence (OC Story)

That is a very beautiful picture.

Also why "Shocchan"? Now that I think of it I actually can't think of a different one.
by CptSalsa
Sun Feb 24, 2013 12:43 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Guitar Tab - Post them here.
Replies: 22
Views: 9867

Re: Guitar Tab - Post them here.

So far I can only play Passing of Time. :?

Could you try to do Red Velvet?

Also you spelled both instances of 'Wiosna' wrong.
by CptSalsa
Sun Feb 24, 2013 12:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS After Story: Shizune Edition
Replies: 4
Views: 1110

Re: KS After Story: Shizune Edition

I like it. An interesting development, I would never think of Misha living with them after all that's happened.

You have a bunch of errors, but I need to go to sleep soon so I will get to it later.

I've always remarked at how Kenji manages to get in fan fictions like these. He's like John McClane.