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Chapter 1: Lenses Tak. Tak, tak tak. Takkity-tak-tak-tak. “No, wait. That's spelled wrong.” “Just fixed it, Naomi.” Tak-tak. Tak -- “Are you sure that's fixed?” “Yes. I'm sure. I think I'm sure.” Tak. Tak-tak-takkity-tak – “Ow, ow.” “Are you okay?” “I'm fine. Fine. It's just the usual.” “...Is your...

notice, [07/27] : revisions are fun, aren't they? *** My opening act as a first-time writer of fanfiction. There isn't much to add to that, really, without completely making a fool of myself. But I can say that the main character of this story is Natsume Ooe, a student in Yamaku who sits in the ver...

We've all been focusing on what Hisao is going to get Hanako. But this is meant to be a anniversary party, so wouldn't Hanako be getting Hisao something? I wonder what? Nudge, nudge. She turns her head to face me. "A-Almost. Lilly w-wants to go into the city to shop tomorrow." "Oh? Gonna buy a dres...

Xanatos wrote:Or a bordello if you're fancy. ("Bordello" is a great word. Boooordello.)

Sounds Italian, or like some catchy advertisement jingle, when you put it that way.

[back to college hunting]

Not sure if I should like or dislike the incessantly flippant attitude of your OC... ...But I like it anyways. The main thing that was a little irksome was how short and extraneous the fourth part of the fourth chapter felt (though that might just be me). Otherwise, it's a good story, and I'm awaiti...

Went for Rin, got with Emi. Ended up loving Shizune the most.

My, how things work out.

HarvestmanMan wrote: It's figurative even in that case: having sex with Kenji is like falling off a building.

You break your back, get your head pounded on, and black out. All of this happens while you're in a drunken stupor, I'm assuming.

Sounds...intense.

You know, omitting the few minor grammar mistakes, it's not that bad. Good luck against the curse.

Awaiting next chapter.

KeiichiO wrote: I'd still anal with that Emi.

Because whether or not she likes it, she'd still be smiling.

Har har.

KeiichiO wrote:

Umber wrote:

pandaphil wrote:She's so damn cute!

Debatable. [/shicchanbiased]

Why would one debate about whether or not Emi is cute? You're just wasting your time.

Shicchan is always cute. Emi...

...Eh.

pandaphil wrote:She's so damn cute!

Debatable. [/shicchanbiased]

Sk3tch wrote: Anyone else run with a friend or do most of you guys fly solo?

I try, but most of them lose the motivation to keep going after a day/week or two. They prefer that I just run to their house instead.

... I'm not seeing anything about this topic that would get it locked or zapped. ...And I was so hopeful, too. (dramaticsigh) Also, Taro is an original character. He might be based on some other character, but if he is, nobody has come out and said it yet. Well, he shares his name with a Filipino f...

Just for the record, me and the other admins are trying to keep OOC drama in check by monitoring the threads and stopping it before it has a chance to even form. It's not a perfect solution, but so far, it has worked - not a single person has left the forum because of drama yet, and everyone's gene...

It's kind of a dead thread, it wouldn't really go anywhere past a posted answer. Depends on our dictator/admin.

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