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Can't wait for next part. But, wow, never thought Miki could talk so much to herself. Thank Umber for that :lol: Originally Scene 3 had much less "Miki" thoughts until Umber pointed out that a lot of shit happened fairly quickly, and needed some "breathing room". Enter the massive amount of Miki's ...

Actually my point is Its totally spoiled the use of the word in the story. For example, I can't write a scene in a fic where Hisao thinks about how much he wants to comfort a crying Hanako without hearing imagined snickers from the reader. Oh, well, there's that. All I can say is that it depends on...

A special shout out/thanks to Umber. Not only is she helping me with ideas/punctuation she's also the reason why Scene 3 became Scenes 3 and 4 :lol: Essentially I sent her scene 3, asked for opinions... and well it's now two scenes. When I sent it it was only around 1,800 words. Before the second h...

skin head attack I'm sorry, but what? One of my friend was attacked by a group of skinheads, he was beaten with a chain, it was pretty bad. Its kinda absurd, you know, skinheads on a country that celebrates racial diversity. Country that celebrates... *looks at your location* OH. Now I see what you...

Tomate wrote:skin head attack

I'm sorry, but what?

Scene 5: Distracted (An Aside with Hayato) I get no farther than halfway back to the dorms before I hear someone running up behind me. I stop and turn, thinking the Big Guy forgot something. Unfortunately it wasn’t as I see bright pink hair. “Hello Misha, you need something?” I say as she runs up t...

School friends are temporary. That's just how life works out for most. I wouldn't know firsthand though. Its easy to keep in touch if your high school mates, you just need some kind of anchor to keep everybody together over the years. I have a group of friends from school, we know each other for 16...

SpecimenSix wrote:

win746 wrote:Yeah terribly sorry, I shouldn't even try to talk about something else.

I don't think it's that so much as talking about non-KS related anime could easily lead to dozens of pages having nothing to do with the thread. I know quite a few good ones if you're interested though, just PM me.

Likewise.

branchingnarrative wrote:Rin turned to look hard at him. "I think you would have noticed them by now, Hisao." She glanced at her posterior. Hisao's jaw dropped. Rin painted a few more strokes, then put down her brush. "Are you hungry?"

OHMYGOD I'M DYING!
I needed that laugh

So many true statements here. Theres really nothing I hate worse than that whole macho "Real men don't cry" bullshit. Crying is probably the best sanity valve there is. I don't know how often things have seemed so much better after a good cry. As opposed to keeping it all in so it just gets worse, ...

Xanatos wrote:

TehLandshark wrote:Rin would not give a shit. If you cured her fanmade Aspergers first, then yes.

FIFY.

Xanatos, it's not really fanmade. The devs basically went great lengths to avoid saying it. But Rin has every single flag for having it.

I've never noticed that playing the game, but I know how easily a writer can repeat themselves without meaning too. ... Or maybe that's just a phrase Hisao likes. No, Hisao likes combing phrases in the form of "Bread, Eggs, Breaded Eggs." She looks like a statue. Or a zombie. A statue of a zombie. ...

Umber wrote: Rin. On the spot, I was reminded of Rin.

And Hisao is the one singing? Definitely

When writing my fanfic, I've found myself unintentionally using common phrases multiple times, so I know where the writer is coming from. I'll have to go back and change some things... I do that as well. But it's basically become one of my character's verbal tic I guess. (if you look at my first fi...

Dream wrote:... And then they eat her?

Yes, they eat her.... out.