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by Carighan
Mon Dec 02, 2013 10:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 51765

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 1st Dec)

That was absolutely amazing, and I really love the way it ends. Considering that this started as a one-shot, this is even more impressive. If I had to critique anything it'd be that even with the point being how much she (and Emi) changed, Hanako still feels quite out of character in the very last p...
by Carighan
Sun Nov 24, 2013 11:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 363181

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/20]

Ah, interesting way to write him.
It's also a bit weird, because you wrote Jigoro in the way I'd imagine him to be if he wasn't used for such a caricature in KS, OTOH Thebigboss is grotesque unfriendly and egoistic here.

Enjoying this. A lot. :D
by Carighan
Sat Nov 16, 2013 3:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 296066

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

I'd be really disappointed if you chose that path, though. All the conflict with Emi and Hanako you've built up so far would just fizzle and be for nothing^^° I feel this resolution would only be acceptable if Emi/Hanako either end up lovers or ideally very close friends. After that line of one-sho...
by Carighan
Tue Nov 12, 2013 5:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 363181

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/10]

Don't push it.
Worse than months without new chapters would be you writing when you don't want to write.

Just wait for your muse to return then. I think we'd all much rather have an awesome story which shows that the author loves writing than the equivalent of a yearly CoD release. :P
by Carighan
Tue Nov 05, 2013 11:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 296066

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 23 up 11/3]

Obviously this will end with Hisao's death and Hanako and Emi later moving in together while they go to university and slowly get over it. Right? Right? Right? :P
by Carighan
Sun Oct 20, 2013 3:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 296066

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 20 up 10/19]

TacticalBacon wrote:So what's going to happen to Lilly?
She's busy sexing some awesome Scottish guy? (or girl)
I mean, Scotland! That accent! :O
by Carighan
Wed Oct 09, 2013 9:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 363181

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 8/31]

Happy fanfic-birthday! :D
by Carighan
Mon Sep 30, 2013 5:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 363181

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 8/31]

To expand from that, Hisao is very different between the paths. For easy examples compare the one from Hanako's to the one from Emi's story. And it makes sense like that. Different paths which happen in parallel (alternatively universes setups) cannot all be properly canon with each other. The consi...
by Carighan
Sun Sep 29, 2013 4:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 363181

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 8/31]

The fact that Akira seemed happy with her relationship before, reluctantly broke up with her boyfriend to start a new life in Scotland and said boyfriend later accompanied her to Europe are all canon events. That means they have to be kept in mind, even during alternative routes. You can't just dis...
by Carighan
Mon Sep 23, 2013 1:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 296066

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 16 up 9/22

I like this a lot.
The constantly changing perspective couples well with the fact that you're hiding just about anything which will happen with the plot on a greater level from the reader.
by Carighan
Sun Sep 22, 2013 11:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 363181

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 8/31]

Thanatos02 wrote:I've been writing lewd for a while now, [...]
*raises eyebrow*
by Carighan
Tue Sep 17, 2013 5:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Hisao's Gift (a short story)
Replies: 29
Views: 10053

Re: Rin: Hisao's Gift (a short story)

Ah, the Rin-version of Reunion! ... ... ... Feels ;_; Anyhow, very nicely written. It gives away the punchline very early, or so I thought, but when Emi shows up on the hill and gets Rin back to the house is when it becomes clear how broken Rin's state of mind is. Didn't check for grammar/spelling m...
by Carighan
Tue Sep 10, 2013 5:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 296066

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 13 up 9/8]

There's some really sweet Emi x Hisao stories, too. Hence my first idea from a few pages back was Emi x Hanako, for variety. :)
by Carighan
Mon Sep 09, 2013 9:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 296066

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 13 up 9/8]

I'm going to feel bad for Emi when this develops. :'(
by Carighan
Thu Sep 05, 2013 5:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 363181

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 8/31]

Very awesome chapter, thank you. :)