Adolph von Pinochet.Leaty wrote:And even though he's an American, his name is Adolph von Pinochet.
American
I think i see some secret meaning here
Adolph von Pinochet.Leaty wrote:And even though he's an American, his name is Adolph von Pinochet.
Yeah, I've noticed some myself when i was reading itTheCatBeyondSpace! wrote:I'm not very good with critiques (Just ask lorsquirrel for confirmation.), So I'll just say that it was enjoyable with a couple of spelling errors.Comrade wrote:That aside, how good/bad/horrible this chapter was?
Also must be feministOscar Wildecat wrote:Needs to show up at school in a Hawaiian Shirt. Don't forget that.Comrade wrote: I should write one with all of the above traits just to piss off everyone.
Who's five bucks?TheCatBeyondSpace! wrote:Five bucks says he just killed Hanako.
I might wait until I've made more "Zombies" chaptersTheCatBeyondSpace! wrote:*Giant crowd* DO IT! DO IT!
having a super generic, perfect sort of protagonist from what i recall.TheGoatman wrote:Pardon my ignorance, but what is a mary sue fic?Mirage_GSM wrote:Sadly a Mary Sue-warning would amount to a valuaion, which is not allowed...
If you simply discount all OC fics out of hand, you'll miss a few very good ones.