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by Omicronus
Tue Jun 09, 2015 9:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can you move past the past?" -- Updated (7/11)
Replies: 37
Views: 9880

Re: "Can you move past the past?" -- An OC story

Thanks for the shout-out! Always feels good to have made a contribution. You've written something pretty powerful in its own right so far, and I'm looking forward to much more. At the end of the hospital scene, however, I thought of this: it's more along the lines of "Can you SEE past the past?" ;)...
by Omicronus
Tue Jun 09, 2015 9:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can you move past the past?" -- Updated (7/11)
Replies: 37
Views: 9880

"Can you move past the past?" Prologue Scene 2

Prologue Scene 02 -- Lack of Perception ***** My throat hurt. It felt raw, hoarse. My forearms were itchy and sore, too. The fact that I was still alive to feel my throat and arms hurting was a surprise. I opened my eyes. Rather, I tried to open them. Vision slowly cleared in my left eye and I coul...
by Omicronus
Tue Jun 09, 2015 6:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can you move past the past?" -- Updated (7/11)
Replies: 37
Views: 9880

Re: "Can you move past the past?" -- An OC story

Wow… That was really good, well written, engaging and left me wanting more. I don’t think I can think of an explanation for those. Only a small thing, but this didn't make much sense to me in the context. I might just be stupid though. :lol: No, you're not stupid. I didn't realize I omitted somethi...
by Omicronus
Tue Jun 09, 2015 6:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can you move past the past?" -- Updated (7/11)
Replies: 37
Views: 9880

"Can you move past the past?" Prologue Scene 1

Prologue Scene 01 -- The Sins of the Father ***** “...Wherein...zahell havoo bin?” I left the question unanswered as I slipped my shoes off. The way he slurred it already told me all that I needed to know. “I ask yoo a ques-chin!” I heard the sound of a beer bottle being thrown and shattering again...
by Omicronus
Tue Jun 09, 2015 6:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can you move past the past?" -- Updated (7/11)
Replies: 37
Views: 9880

"Can you move past the past?" -- Updated (7/11)

Hello, everyone. I'm Omicronus, long time lurker, first time poster. After reading so much fanfiction here, I was inspired try my hand at writing my own KS fanfic, an idea that I had sitting in my hard drive for over a year. It's not much coming from me, but there are so many people I have to thank ...