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by SemisoftCheese
Mon Feb 18, 2013 6:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "On Patrol"
Replies: 4
Views: 1458

"On Patrol"

A little different from my normal style. Tap. Tap. Tap. Tap. Your cane sounds a bit like this rain, Lilly. The rain reaches everywhere here. It taps down in big, fat drops, soaking my skin, chilling me to the core. I can remember you. I can remember you. I can remember every aspect of your face, yo...
by SemisoftCheese
Mon Feb 18, 2013 3:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 23583

Re: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 2/17)

Hmm. Far too many phrases in brackets for my liking. I'm not entirely sure what you mean by brackets. Do you mean parenthetical () or quotes ""? No need to linebreak successive sentences of speech by the same person, especially when the same format is used elsewhere with mulitple speakers. Oops, th...
by SemisoftCheese
Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Titanium (a Miki story)
Replies: 10
Views: 3957

Re: Titanium (a Miki story)

I just wanted to say I enjoyed this to an unhealthy degree.

Sweet work, Meadows.
by SemisoftCheese
Sun Feb 17, 2013 9:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 23583

The Breakfast Club

Fartlek. What a funny word. It’s what I’m doing right now on the track with Miki. She’s stolen me away from Emi this Saturday morning, claiming that she needs to “check up” on my training. Anyway, back to the Fartlek. Swedish for “speed-play,” a fartlek is an interval workout in which you run set in...
by SemisoftCheese
Sat Feb 16, 2013 9:59 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: FDA approves new "blindness curing" glasses
Replies: 92
Views: 7643

FDA approves new "blindness curing" glasses

Not sure if there can really be a thread about this, but I thought people in the forum, especially fans of Lilly, would enjoy this news. http://www.fda.gov/NewsEvents/Newsroom/PressAnnouncements/ucm339824.htm Currently, it wouldn't work on someone like Lilly (who was genetically blind from birth), b...
by SemisoftCheese
Fri Feb 15, 2013 3:35 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Valentines Day wishes
Replies: 30
Views: 3846

Re: Valentines Day wishes

Retoasting from the HBHC. I wrote this a while back, but it's valentines day and I'm sad, so I thought I'd share. I miss you, Nina. I hope I'll see you soon. ----------------------------- I met her over this past summer. It was a classic--I was on a cruise of the mediterranean with my family, and wh...
by SemisoftCheese
Fri Feb 15, 2013 1:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 23583

Re: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 2/14)

Excuse me what? You shouldn't be turning or lapping in a 100m race. Each straight arm of a running track is 100m long by itself. Haha, you're absolutely right. I guess this is why I play tennis in the spring, not run track. Corrected, and thanks for noticing. Wait, how? Also that's rather suggestiv...
by SemisoftCheese
Thu Feb 14, 2013 7:36 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4861
Views: 406947

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

SUMMARY : 5 years in a high-travel job, detached, no life, and with grown depression. Just had 2013 performance review, I told my boss that I hate the job. Awaiting free therapy, change is fucking scary. My uncle's a bit like you. He got out of college, landed a job in Russia as a high-paid GM, and...
by SemisoftCheese
Thu Feb 14, 2013 7:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 23583

The Egg and I

The timer blinks off in my hand. 00:00. Wait. That’s not a lap. People can’t go that fast. A voice calls over from the other side of the track, noticing the apparent time of 00:00 on the scoreboard. “Hisao, you dolt, you hit reset, not lap!” drawls out what could be a Californian surfer. Another voi...
by SemisoftCheese
Tue Feb 12, 2013 10:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Sides Of The Same Coin
Replies: 17
Views: 3581

Re: Two Sides Of The Same Coin

My first thought after reading this was... Harvey Dent from the Dark Knight. Nananananananaa.... Batman! Your english for not being your first language is pretty good. It's a little start and stop in some places, but overall pretty good--you just want to make sure your sentences have a "cadence," in...
by SemisoftCheese
Sun Feb 10, 2013 8:52 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Emi inspired running/workout
Replies: 2700
Views: 277422

Re: Emi inspired running/workout

Ran into some trouble with my plans D: Had been doing Emi's '100 pushups challenge' up till W3D1, but I encountered quite some tense muscle strain on my left arm and thought it was wiser to stop >.<, was afraid I might tear something. Hey Lloonnee, i don't know about your musclar history, but if yo...
by SemisoftCheese
Fri Feb 08, 2013 10:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 23583

White Nights

You can’t eat your feelings, and gazing at the soggy lump of cafeteria curry bread in front of me, attempting to do so would probably be harmful to your health. I need to get away. I need to get away from her, I need to think of something else, anything but her, anything but now. It’s been two days ...
by SemisoftCheese
Fri Feb 08, 2013 9:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Walking Forwards (tentative title)
Replies: 29
Views: 7051

Re: Walking Forwards (tentative title)

With the letter now in a safer place, I placed the book somewhere where I can get at it a bit quicker the next time and let out a sigh of relief as I'd finally made amends for my actions during the week. Whew. There's a lot of angry stuff in this thread. I'm not the greatest writer around here, but...
by SemisoftCheese
Thu Feb 07, 2013 12:21 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Birthday!
Replies: 927
Views: 105574

Re: Birthday!

happy birthday, lils
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Feb 06, 2013 9:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 23583

The Corellian Blood-Stripe

This bed is not mine. The blissfully sleeping form next to me is not mine. This teddy bear is not mine. Saki’s arms are wrapped around me in a death grip. They slacken. She’s noticed me waking. A brown haired figure pops up from the bed. Her brown eyes shine like rays of the ocean. Good morning, bea...