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by SemisoftCheese
Sun Mar 03, 2013 4:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS in JAGS wonderland
Replies: 1
Views: 577

Re: KS in JAGS wonderland

crossovers are a little rough to write, because they combine two things that are completely different. more often then not, if a reader hasn't read both, then it doesn't really work. i haven't personally heard of JAGS, but it sounds a little difficult to crossover. also, what's your first language? ...
by SemisoftCheese
Sun Mar 03, 2013 1:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scar Crossed Lovers (OCXHanako) (Update 3-15-13- CH 2)
Replies: 15
Views: 2849

Re: Scar Crossed Lovers (OCXHanako)

There are a couple of things I would say. This is a little long so I've put a tl;dr for those who hate reading long replies. Apologies for harshness in advance. I'm not a terrible guy, I promise. I'm not as much as a grammar person/detail person as other people here, but there are a significant amou...
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Feb 27, 2013 1:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 386731

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)

http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lx8byfsShd1qhdbjo.gif Thanks so much for writing this, Scissorlips. I can't possibly express how amazing the writing of this story was. Every time I read a chapter I was happy, sad, enlightened, every possible emotion. Except for bored. That never, never, ever, happen...
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Feb 27, 2013 12:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 23429

Re: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 2/26)

Quick question though, are you adhering to the previous fan-fic's 2400 word summary of the plot? Or is the ending going to be an all new creation? http://i.imgur.com/wVLZ9P2.png Can't give up the ending now! To be honest, I'm not even sure. Each time I write a chapter of this, I end up doing exactl...
by SemisoftCheese
Tue Feb 26, 2013 7:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 23429

But There's No Sense Crying Over Every Mistake

Thanks very much to centurion911 and BlackWaltzTheThird for proofing this ============== Apparently, they discovered the Higgs Boson today. The Higgs Boson is interesting because it initially fails to meet Pauli Exclusion conditions for particles, which pretty much governs all the particles floatin...
by SemisoftCheese
Tue Feb 26, 2013 3:01 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Emi inspired running/workout
Replies: 2700
Views: 274996

Re: Emi inspired running/workout

I knew deep down in my heart that it was a silly idea to start of as hard as I did. Shin splints... yay :( Sucks really hard that i have to cut down on my training until my leg have gotten better, but I have learned my lesson to not go all out from the start. Hi Bubbleman, You can fix your shin spl...
by SemisoftCheese
Mon Feb 25, 2013 7:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 96926

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 2/25]

This is sick. Hit me up if you need a proofread or anything, I'm def excited for the next chapter!
by SemisoftCheese
Sun Feb 24, 2013 9:39 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: FDA approves new "blindness curing" glasses
Replies: 92
Views: 7528

Re: FDA approves new "blindness curing" glasses

I just stumbled across this and thought those who liked this thread would also find it interesting.

The "Brainport" vision device.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xNkw28fz9u0
by SemisoftCheese
Sun Feb 24, 2013 4:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "On Patrol"
Replies: 4
Views: 1433

Re: "On Patrol"

Also why do they do that if they could just shoot her. This has to do with the basic mechanics of being held up. If someone's pointing a gun at you, and you don't have your gun pointed directly at them, or even if you do, you run the risk of a "draw," or them shooting you at the same time you shoot...
by SemisoftCheese
Sun Feb 24, 2013 4:01 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4860
Views: 402416

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Why? If you want something shouldn't you try to look for it? Whatever you want in life, you should go after it. There's no other way to live. Finding a girl like Rin might be tough, but if that's your thing, go for it. I think what Xanatos was getting at (I'm never quite sure) is to keep an open mi...
by SemisoftCheese
Thu Feb 21, 2013 12:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
Replies: 145
Views: 43850

Re: Miki Route (updated 7/17)

Meadows wrote: things are falling into place that the time has come for me to try again.

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good to see you're back in action, Meadows.


mmmiiiikkkiiiiii
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Feb 20, 2013 12:30 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4860
Views: 402416

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Your posts suggest that if you started hanging around that woman (or even saw her again, given the rather extreme wish not to), you'd end up doing something incredibly stupid and potentially ruin your current relationship, as if even having a coffee with her would prove too much temptation. You're ...
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Feb 20, 2013 12:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 4/3)
Replies: 67
Views: 23429

Re: A Saki-Pseudo Route Continuation (Updated 2/17)

Color me excited for the next chapter =) Glad you liked it, man! Sorry for taking so long to respond, I missed it when I was scrolling the thread. I'd actually fix that by dropping the closing double-quote at the end of the second, third, and fourth lines. That's how you indicate that the same spea...
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Feb 20, 2013 12:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "On Patrol"
Replies: 4
Views: 1433

Re: "On Patrol"

Carighan wrote:Oh I like this, this is really nice. :D
Glad you liked it, dude! This piece was a little out there for me, so I'm pleased that it hit the mark with someone.
by SemisoftCheese
Mon Feb 18, 2013 10:46 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: FDA approves new "blindness curing" glasses
Replies: 92
Views: 7528

Re: FDA approves new "blindness curing" glasses

Speaking of 'cures', I spotted this on Facebook this evening. Question is, would Rin use them? http://www.redorbit.com/news/health/1112786108/new-bionic-hand-can-feel-021813/ I think, after watching this thread degrade into a violent argument about fixing disabilities, is that it really depends on ...