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by SemisoftCheese
Wed Jul 17, 2013 7:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 25834

Out Getting Ribs

Early to bed, early to rise. Makes a man stupid and blind in the eyes. I showed up at the Yamaku track early on this Saturday morning. Far too early, it appears. The sun isn’t even out and the sky is a pale gray. The nurse told me when I first came to Yamaku that I should start running to stay in sh...
by SemisoftCheese
Thu Jul 11, 2013 5:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hide and Seek (Rin)
Replies: 4
Views: 2134

Hide and Seek (Rin)

>write a fic about rin's parents The voice calls down from the hallway. “Rin, are you ready? Dinner’s waiting.” A tall, lithe, woman hangs in the doorway, but she’s young. She can’t be more than 19 and her body does extremely pleasant things to the loose shirt and jeans she’s wearing. Her hair, a t...
by SemisoftCheese
Thu Jul 04, 2013 2:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 25834

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 7/1)

first off, thank you for everyone who read/replied. i'm immensely flattered by the fact that people care enough to read let alone comment on my work. thank you all. I'm loving this, although I do feel like you're moving along rather quickly here. This chapter gave me some feels, but they could've be...
by SemisoftCheese
Mon Jul 01, 2013 6:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 25834

Costume Party

It's Thursday morning at Yamaku Academy for the disabled. I have in my hands, courtesy of the kind Kenji Setou, two cups of warm, black, coffee. Among his many survival supplies for the apocalypse rests a coffeemaker, and after stumbling into me in the hallway, he offered to make me a cup or two. We...
by SemisoftCheese
Sat Jun 29, 2013 1:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira x Miki oneshot (explicit)
Replies: 8
Views: 2085

Re: Akira x Miki oneshot (explicit)

yes req

top miki game
by SemisoftCheese
Sun Jun 16, 2013 11:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 25834

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 6/14)

You're moving Hisao and Ritsu along quite fast, aren't you? That's not a bad thing, though. Just different. I definitely enjoyed it! thanks! i think you're right, i'll try and keep an eye on the pacing Well, the personality you've given her is definitely something different. I like the story so far...
by SemisoftCheese
Fri Jun 14, 2013 4:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 25834

Closing Time

"You know, Hisao, I'd never thought I'd spend the festival like this." The lean figure next to me gives me a casual look, a deep smile on her face. I give her a smile and give the stuffed monkey on her neck a tug. "The monkey, or the festival?" She just gives me a smile and looks up at the night sky...
by SemisoftCheese
Fri Jun 07, 2013 12:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]
Replies: 68
Views: 12877

Re: Miki Psuedo Route [New work, added 6/5/13]

I had my doubts about another Miki route, but it seems like you're doing just swelly. It's not my favorite Meadows-flavoured Miki, but I'm willing to wait (cough cough cough).

Very nice work so far.
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Jun 05, 2013 1:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 25834

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/26)

If you look at the info screen you can see its an extra.
by SemisoftCheese
Wed Jun 05, 2013 3:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 25834

Clair de Lune (Extra)

For Michael R. McClintock We're back on the hill again. It was a summer afternoon and I had been studying for a few hours. I needed a break. Only problem was, I had no idea where to go. I left the room… and my feet just took me here. The same familiar figure is there, wrapped in a blue cardigan on ...
by SemisoftCheese
Tue May 28, 2013 9:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 25834

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/26)

time for a marathon reply post. first off, a sincere thank you to everyone who's taken the time to read or reply. it means alot, and keeps me going. I really like your Hisao more than anything else. That's not to say I'm not enjoying reading Ritsu as well. Will definitely read this to the end! thank...
by SemisoftCheese
Sun May 26, 2013 8:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 25834

Alive

sorry for the wait The walk into town passes rather quickly. Ritsu sets a fast pace down the hill, her steps quick and sure as she descends. It seems like she's made this trip more than a couple of times before. From the back, she's got a weird style of walking. Most people bob up and down when the...
by SemisoftCheese
Sat May 25, 2013 2:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: K-Shounen!
Replies: 294
Views: 24214

Re: K-Shounen!

okay i'm going to go out on a limb here and say what most people haven't said. your writing needs work. a lot of it. what you write often doesn't make sense and doesn't even follow the logical form of prose. sentences like "What Are You Doing Here?!", my finger is pointing at the Student Council Pre...
by SemisoftCheese
Sun May 12, 2013 2:16 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa Shoujo 1.1 beta
Replies: 31
Views: 18331

Re: Katawa Shoujo 1.1 beta

Works perfectly on a 2009 MBP 2.53 Ghz running 10.8.3. Boots slightly faster than normal, however seems to take up a little more processor.
by SemisoftCheese
Sun May 05, 2013 7:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 25834

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/5)

first off, thanks to everyone who read/replied. i definitely didn't expect so many replies errors got 'em, thanks dude. the use of bemused is intentional, the repetition isn't. as for the name thing, it's meant to sound patronizing--ritsu's teasing hisao and focusing attention on him. T Far be it fr...