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by Heartless Wanderer
Fri Nov 16, 2012 5:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 234867

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 11/15)

I think Rin's character is open for a pretty wide range of interpretations. I'm not sure even Aura "gets" her completely ;-) So while this interpretation may be an unusual one, I don't think it is that much off the mark. That said, the way she acts is pretty easy to remember, at least when you're l...
by Heartless Wanderer
Fri Nov 16, 2012 5:43 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Lilly's Route
Replies: 518
Views: 92805

Re: Lilly's Route

Heartless Wanderer wrote:EDIT: ...You know, we really should use spoiler tags for this stuff.
...I would like to reiterate...
by Heartless Wanderer
Fri Nov 16, 2012 5:18 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Lilly's Route
Replies: 518
Views: 92805

Re: Lilly's Route

EDIT: ...You know, we really should use spoiler tags for this stuff. What about Lilly's parents? They won't stand still knowing this--she's still the daughter of the Satous afterall. It's rather blandly implied that they aren't happy, when Akira references them as being "out for her blood." I got th...
by Heartless Wanderer
Fri Nov 16, 2012 4:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 234867

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 11/15)

A little out-of-character-ness on Rin's side of things. Not exactly something I blame you for since Rin's character is hard to "get" in the first place, so occasional bad notes are bound to happen. That said, bringing up the lunch with Emi that Hisao skipped out on was a good idea, and you used it t...
by Heartless Wanderer
Fri Nov 16, 2012 4:49 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Lilly's Route
Replies: 518
Views: 92805

Re: Lilly's Route

EDIT: Spoiler tags added. Would appreciate similar tags being added into quotes of these posts, please. I'm afraid I got caught up in the heat of making a point and forgot to account for people who haven't finished the path yet. It does sound like indoctrination theory, doesn't it? I'm not saying th...
by Heartless Wanderer
Fri Nov 16, 2012 4:23 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Is there such a thing?
Replies: 64
Views: 6173

Re: Is there such a thing?

Well, I was married at the age of twenty two, and thought I was absolutely in love. The woman was dedicated, even though my work in the military had put a strain on our relationship. We never had kids, though we wanted to. One day she had come to me and had apparently got sick of it all. She gave m...
by Heartless Wanderer
Fri Nov 16, 2012 2:50 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Lilly's Route
Replies: 518
Views: 92805

Re: Lilly's Route

Isn't the epilogue an indication that Hisao actually bite the dust at the airport scene with all that surreal image of a 'perfect happy ending'? That sounds like Indoctrination Theory, dude. >_> Also, I wouldn't call it a perfect happy ending, per se. Hisao still has a heart attack, and like the ot...
by Heartless Wanderer
Fri Nov 16, 2012 1:45 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 171473

Re: What's so bad About the Feels?

Boppin wrote:I know not all fan fiction is as absurdly written as Full-Life Consequences,
Most fanfiction at that level of fail is intentionally bad. It's a form of trolling, really. The "real" bad fanfiction is usually neither funny nor remarkable.
by Heartless Wanderer
Thu Nov 15, 2012 4:11 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 171473

Re: What's so bad About the Feels?

To that end, fan fiction has always been uninteresting to me. Unless a story is canon, I don't feel as though it is worth telling; it's forged. All fiction is forged. And so is a good chunk of "non-fiction," but that's another discussion entirely. The point is, it's fiction. The fact that it's fake...
by Heartless Wanderer
Thu Nov 15, 2012 3:34 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Telling friends and/or family?
Replies: 200
Views: 31295

Re: Telling friends and/or family?

Huh. Well, it looks like the first guess was right after all.
by Heartless Wanderer
Thu Nov 15, 2012 2:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Walking Forwards (tentative title)
Replies: 29
Views: 7552

Re: Walking Forwards (tentative title)

Right, which is why trying to imagine her approaching a complete stranger and getting their attention by grabbing that stranger's arm makes my brain hurt. The idea that Hanako might want to do so is beside the point; it would take her a very long time to work herself up to attempting it and even the...
by Heartless Wanderer
Thu Nov 15, 2012 1:43 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Telling friends and/or family?
Replies: 200
Views: 31295

Re: Telling friends and/or family?

...America? *bad-dum-tsh*

Serious guess: Italy?
by Heartless Wanderer
Thu Nov 15, 2012 1:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Nonchalance (11/15 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scenes)
Replies: 14
Views: 1931

Re: Nonchalance (11/14 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scene)

Like Catgirl said, there's not much to say on the story yet. I'm not even sure if your OC is supposed to be likeable or not - at the moment I'm tending to "not" He's not supposed to be likeable, no. He may have his occasionally amusing moments for people who like black humor but he's a rather unple...
by Heartless Wanderer
Thu Nov 15, 2012 3:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 205
Views: 74054

Re: Shower Scenes

I initially passed this over because I mistook the title as meaning it was a smutfic, then I found myself possessed by a morbid curiosity of how a shower-scene smutfic would even work in text form anyway, so I took a peek and found a hilarious humor fic instead of a shitty smut fic. So needless to s...
by Heartless Wanderer
Thu Nov 15, 2012 2:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Nonchalance (11/15 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scenes)
Replies: 14
Views: 1931

Re: Nonchalance (11/14 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scene)

though I didn't understand the hamsters and their kittens thing. Ryota has weird inner monologues. In this case he's implying that hamsters have had babies with cats as a deadpan twist on the old "everyone and their great aunt Sally" type expression. Consider this your only point-blank warning that...