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by LordDarknus
Fri Nov 16, 2012 7:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Who Goes There?
Replies: 14
Views: 3296

Re: Who Goes There?

Umm, not sure I understand you Heartless Wanderer, I'm not very good at understanding people,

But Thanks.

Hope you like this horror "mash-up".


Thank You.
by LordDarknus
Fri Nov 16, 2012 6:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Who Goes There?
Replies: 14
Views: 3296

Re: Who Goes There?

I don't know why we don't return to the science lab, I'm not sure if Kenji's room is the smartest place to be, but the moment I nearly lost Hisao, I started to think like him again, it used to be because I like him a lot, but now it's just so I'll never lose him. For a while, I thought it was Hisao ...
by LordDarknus
Fri Nov 16, 2012 6:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Who Goes There?
Replies: 14
Views: 3296

Who Goes There?

...w-wh-who goes there? Snow slaps softly against the windows, as my mind snarls with the Chess game against the computer on my laptop. Hisao and Shizune are busy playing.. well, Arguing, over a game of Risk. I look to them and let my mind relax from the strain. Hisao says that a peaceful coexistenc...
by LordDarknus
Sat Nov 03, 2012 5:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take
Replies: 12
Views: 4006

Re: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take

I'll just keep my foot in my mouth from now on then. (this takes place near the end of act4, before the part Hanako meets Rin again) ------------------------------ Playing the piano isn't a difficult propect, it's a mathematical matter of melodies to dance my fingers on the keys. "My name is Hanako ...
by LordDarknus
Thu Nov 01, 2012 9:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take
Replies: 12
Views: 4006

Re: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take

Not to be rude, but it sounds like you think that "improving my writing style/skill my looking at things that aren't working or maiming it's potential, and fixing them" neccessary implies "abandoning who i really am" (Whatever the later means, but that is a whole separate matter) It's really not as...
by LordDarknus
Thu Nov 01, 2012 9:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 204
Views: 66180

Re: Shower Scenes

My first thought upon reading that was this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WhwbxEfy7fg so... a Love Ballad by Tony Stark featuring Hisao Timberlake? Hanako: "GIMME THAT CHRISTMAS-BOX HISAO!" yes. this smile... on my face... it's not coming off. Thanks Helbereth, now I know what to do for Hallowee...
by LordDarknus
Wed Oct 31, 2012 12:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 204
Views: 66180

Re: Shower Scenes

It's a good thing I've got the ending to this coming up in a few days. Everybody's starting to notice my old plot holes. What are you talking about? I'm helping Explain and Validate your plot holes. Free-of-Charge! Where's my Marvel No-Prize? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/No-Prize The very least I c...
by LordDarknus
Wed Oct 31, 2012 12:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 204
Views: 66180

Re: Shower Scenes

I now entertain the idea of "Hisao Clause" and Hanako herself in an elf costume, together, in a room. "Sharing Gifts". My first thought upon reading that was this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WhwbxEfy7fg so... a Love Ballad by Tony Stark featuring Hisao Timberlake? Hanako: "GIMME THAT CHRISTMAS...
by LordDarknus
Wed Oct 31, 2012 11:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take
Replies: 12
Views: 4006

Re: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take

Hey, Many Thanks for posting again Oddball! You have some tense issues, seemingly slipping from past tense to present quite often. I'm bad at that myself though, so I can't complain too much there. Ah, that's okay. Wait what? It's meant to be like that, it's not going down the Stream of Time drop-by...
by LordDarknus
Tue Oct 30, 2012 11:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 204
Views: 66180

Re: Shower Scenes

"They've got a bit more trust in you than I do," Miki said with a shrug. "Only reason I was the one to rush in was because I drew the short straw," Miki said. I wondered about that. I too wonder... http://profile.ak.fbcdn.net/hprofile-ak-prn1/50332_318033206868_2354556_n.jpg What did they use for S...
by LordDarknus
Mon Oct 29, 2012 12:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take
Replies: 12
Views: 4006

Re: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take

you know what? One more try. I am not giving up on this; I've got blisters on my fingers, but I Will pull this fic out of the horse's arse. At least let the ideas in this one be acknowledged. Re-Take (Synopsis) Prologue -Betraying One's Being After Hisao's sudden heart attack and subsequent revelati...
by LordDarknus
Sun Oct 28, 2012 1:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take
Replies: 12
Views: 4006

Re: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take

I'm sorry for the major suck... I did tell you it's not too good. but if some bit of explanations would help; prologue; Iwanako's perspective act 1; Emi's perspective (that was a bit of a dream sequence where she "introduces" herself, sorry, bad idea) act 2; Rin's perspective act 3; Lilly's perspect...
by LordDarknus
Sat Oct 27, 2012 12:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take
Replies: 12
Views: 4006

Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take

This is my fan fic, it's big, it's not too good, and they are probably many much better than it,

http://www.lorddarknus.blogspot.com/201 ... -take.html

but this one's mine.

(disclaimer: not proof-read)

P.S. : I did not sleep for a few weekends, writing it.