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by pip25
Mon Jun 10, 2013 3:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 579
Views: 212298

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 5/26)

I just finished reading Act Two; I know part of Act Three is already available, but I figured I might as well review this part first, since it can stand on its own to an extent. :) I only skimmed through the comments up to the end of the act, so please forgive me if some of what I intend to bring up...
by pip25
Fri Jun 07, 2013 5:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

There was no such storyline in the beta. Oh, my bad then. I think I've read something like that on TvTropes, maybe. Perhaps it was an even earlier iteration? Oh well... I know this is off-topic, but could I have a link to one or both of these? I would be interested as well, if you could give us the...
by pip25
Fri Jun 07, 2013 4:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

Again, thank you very much for the feedback. :D This is really, really good. I wish you were going to do more KS-related stuff. :( Thanks! While I don't have any immediate plans, that doesn't rule out more KS fics completely later on, if I find the time. We shall see. :) Fantastic story. I love stor...
by pip25
Tue Jun 04, 2013 8:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

Wait... was he still going to do the water balloon thing in the good path or just rub it in her face that he cheated on her while they were together? Because that's what I thought he was on about with the whole 'truth' he keeps mentioning. The water balloon thing was for the bad end only. For the g...
by pip25
Tue Jun 04, 2013 5:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

Mutou would have been a perfectly legitimate character to be there in this situation to help Hisao, but: He wasn't there in the bad end! And that's a entirely valid point, made even more obvious by how Hisao himself admits in the bad end that if Hanako went to one of the teachers, he would have bee...
by pip25
Tue Jun 04, 2013 3:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

Thank you very much for the great feedback! :D It's pretty scary seeing the Hisao we know being driven to something like that. Thanks, that was roughly what I wanted to show, although perhaps the buildup leaves something to be desired still. As with other routes, the heroine-specific question ("Can ...
by pip25
Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

Music track: Generic Happy Music "Happy Birthday, Misha." I sign my words as well, and Shizune quickly follows my lead. [Happy Birthday. We wanted to do this after the party and the cake, but I guess there's no harm in giving you your present a bit early.] Yeah, like she says, the original plan was...
by pip25
Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

"Just a sec, Misha, I'll be right there!" I call out, and then make my way to the door with loud but absurdly slow steps, like some humanlike robot in a cheap sci-fi movie. I also try fiddling around with the lock as long as I can, even "accidentally" dropping the key to the floor once. Still, the t...
by pip25
Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

Music track: The Student Council [Hey… Are you sure we didn't go overboard a little?] I sign hesitantly to Shizune, my gaze sweeping across the student council room and its newest additions once more. As expected, she looks entirely unfazed as she adjusts her glasses in a businesslike manner. [Not ...
by pip25
Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

Wha…What…? My brain struggles to comprehend what I just heard. Why would she even bring up such a thing? Was it something I said…? No, that has nothing to do with it. I could feel that something was off from the very beginning; Misha has been trying to find a way to get this off her chest ever since...
by pip25
Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

Music track: Romance in Andante II I can hardly call this a "once in a lifetime" event. I probably have seen the sunset from the rooftop before, even if I can't recall anything about any of those occasions. But one thing is for sure: no matter how many times I've seen it so far, it has never been a...
by pip25
Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

Music track: Lullaby of Open Eyes Shizune rises from her seat when she notices me, and… and nothing. There's no one else here but her. But if Misha wasn't in the room when Lilly dropped by, how could they… Oh. So they really do have some way of talking to each other. It's not that I doubted Misha's...
by pip25
Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

All it takes is a couple of seconds, and I'm standing in front of the door leading inside the council room. I have no idea why I'm hesitating. I know the door isn't locked; they told me they'll wait for me to catch up with them once I'm finished with my after-class duties. Still… I haven't been in t...
by pip25
Mon Jun 03, 2013 6:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

Music track: Afternoon It's already well into Saturday afternoon when I finally manage to leave the classroom. Mutou specifically drafted me into cleaning duty, which I normally get a pass on, and even made me help him with some paperwork afterwards. He didn't say a word about it, but I suppose thi...
by pip25
Mon Jun 03, 2013 6:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)
Replies: 91
Views: 43902

Re: Blame (Post-Shizune Bad End Misha route) (Complete)

10. Together Music track: Nocturne I am shocked awake by my phone's blaring ringtone. I reach out and try grabbing it without having to climb out of bed, but my arm is just a couple of inches too short. With a yawn I get to my feet, throwing a sleepy glance at the clock: it's 1:30 in the morning. M...