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by Trivun
Sat Sep 28, 2013 2:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 11
Views: 1354

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Tell me about it. Oftentimes you read about Doomish's crazy stuff just to find out he's deleted it all. Mind you, if the author doesn't want to have his work available publicly (any longer) then I fully respect that. So a list like that may not be the right thing to do. Fair point, though I did men...
by Trivun
Sat Sep 28, 2013 12:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 11
Views: 1354

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One day we'll have to have a special thread set up where (with permission, obviously) all the deleted or just plain bad thread opening posts (whether fanfic or otherwise) can be kept and archived, for our viewing pleasure. I actually feel very disappointed that I wasn't online in time to see this......
by Trivun
Wed Sep 25, 2013 4:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 18/08/2013)

By the way, can anyone guess the inspiration behind the latest chapter titles, and how they tie in to the story and its themes: For reference, the titles of the past four chapters are, in order:

Halcyon
Roots Before Branches
Dissonant Serenity
Nothing Left To Say
by Trivun
Wed Sep 25, 2013 4:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 18/08/2013)

Is that a song lyric by any chance? If so, where from? I've not heard it before and I'm curious... Never seen Drive ? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9K7rmxjk5RQ I've not actually seen Drive yet, but it does look good, and that is an awesome song :). Words. :D No problem. :) If you ever need a proof...
by Trivun
Thu Aug 29, 2013 5:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 18/08/2013)

I can't eat, I can't sleep, though I can't stay awake, and whatever I do I find myself reminded of him. He keeps her under his spell, he keeps her under his spell... :P *last two chapters* Well, that escalated quickly. Not to say it's bad , but you seems determined to quickly get this out of the wa...
by Trivun
Tue Aug 20, 2013 7:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 18/08/2013)

I don't wish for my own humble interpretation to be mistaken for whatever the author intends, but it is my opinion that Hanako's self-esteem issues and general mental instability have been repeatedly shown and built up during the course of this story. I do agree it feels sudden if you read this in ...
by Trivun
Sun Aug 18, 2013 4:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 16/08/2013)

I know it's heartbreaking, but it has to be done... Act 4 – Chapter One, First Branch: Nothing Left To Say I can't be there. I just can't. We're one day away now, I'm one day away from it and I just can't be around anybody, but he's the last person I want to see. I never said anything to him about ...
by Trivun
Fri Aug 16, 2013 4:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 05/08/2013)

[Words] Only cats can sufficiently communicate the depression that I've entered after seeing this. It's not even a chapter, it's a punch to the face. Why must all writers be evil? :( The good news is that it's only a short path to the bad ending, a slightly longer one to the neutral, and then the g...
by Trivun
Fri Aug 16, 2013 3:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 05/08/2013)

This is the shortest chapter of the whole thing so far now. The next chapter is forthcoming, so expect it within the next couple of days. Act 3 – Chapter Ten, First Branch: Dissonant Serenity “So, what do you want to do?” Hisao's question catches me off guard. I answer as honestly as I can - “I... ...
by Trivun
Mon Aug 12, 2013 4:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 05/08/2013)

Amazing stuff here. Great job. It's nice to see your take on what goes on in Hanako's head. It's giving me a whole new perspective on Hanako. I gotta replay her route again sometime. Keep up the good work. A shorter interlude this time, but an interesting on nonetheless. What with it dealing with L...
by Trivun
Mon Aug 05, 2013 5:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 11/07/2013)

It's been a long time coming for a very short chapter, but we all know what it's leading to after all... :) Act 3 - Chapter Nine: Roots Before Branches We gather the next day for Lilly and Akira's departure. “Right then,” asks Hisao. “Are you taking the bus, Lilly?” We're standing in the corridor o...
by Trivun
Fri Jul 19, 2013 6:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 11/07/2013)

Also, on another note - who has managed to notice the symbolism or meaning in the chapter titles so far? I'll be especially proud of anybody who can figure out the meaning of the titles for The Mirror or Halcyon. Or even for En Passant, or any of the other chess-based titles... ;)
by Trivun
Fri Jul 19, 2013 6:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 11/07/2013)

I've been following this one for a while (as a long-time lurker), and I must say I like the concept. A simple POV flip, and suddenly Hanako's route is fresh again. Any constructive criticism I may have had (this fanfic's been running for almost a year, so my memory's fuzzy) has been long addressed ...
by Trivun
Fri Jul 12, 2013 2:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 11/07/2013)

Ah, the Jazz Club scene. To me so, important. We learn so many things. And later scenes cast a different light on what was happening there. I think you handled this rather well Trivun. Although it's been long enough I can't remember what diaoluge choice led to what ending :oops: . Is the next chapt...
by Trivun
Thu Jul 11, 2013 5:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 87006

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 11/07/2013)

I've been looking forward to this chapter for a long time. The next one will be incredibly short, but there are reasons for that and I hope those reasons will make perfect sense to those who have already completed Hanako's arc in the original game. For now, this is a pretty lengthy chapter compared...