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by Zykes
Fri Aug 31, 2012 7:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 26730

Re: Staggering Harmony - (Updated - Act 1, Scene 4)

Just a minor update here. I had originally planned to release Act 1, Scene 5 tomorrow. However several issues have come up which has halted my writing. It's roughly 1/3 complete so far. I will try to get it out after labor day. Oh, and a new art will be released with it (That is already completed).
by Zykes
Tue Aug 28, 2012 6:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 26730

Re: Staggering Harmony - (Updated - Act 1, Scene 4)

Mirage_GSM wrote:Try variating your sentences a bit. Almost two thirds of your sentences start with "I".
Alright
by Zykes
Tue Aug 28, 2012 10:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 26730

Re: Staggering Harmony - (Updated - Act 1, Scene 3)

Scene 4 – The Correct Pace? Most of the students are already in the class as I step in. I turn my focus to Shizune and Misha, but they don’t react to my presence. I can’t really put together what they could be so upset about. I take my seat, placing my things on the desk. I focus on my notebook, bu...
by Zykes
Sat Aug 25, 2012 11:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 26730

Re: Staggering Harmony - (Updated - Act 1, Scene 3)

Shizune and Misha notice the time as well. Signing to each other, I miss most of what they are saying or doing, still in my thoughts. “So, how was the tour Hiroshi? I am sure you liked two cute girls showing you around, Hahaha~!” Misha’s excitement had something more to it, though I’m still on dist...
by Zykes
Fri Aug 24, 2012 12:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 26730

Re: Staggering Harmony - (Updated - Act 1, Scene 3)

Scene 3 – Bitter Taste. Shizune grabs our work from our desks. My paper is about as filled out as Shizune's. I sigh in relief, turning my head to the side. Many students seem to leave at a slow pace, one girl stands out. She has long purple hair. She bolts out of the class. I wonder what her issue ...
by Zykes
Fri Aug 24, 2012 11:25 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Staggering Harmony - Extras (3/10/15) Beta Needed!
Replies: 18
Views: 11126

Re: Staggering Harmony - OC Character(s) and Art (Updated)

Echo-Lin wrote:its so weird seeing my art online....Dx
Not really :o
by Zykes
Wed Aug 22, 2012 8:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 26730

Re: Staggering Harmony - (Updated - Act 1, Scene 2)

Well I must say I found that not nearly as interesting as the first part. Mostly because of how much you took from the VN. I've had some issues with getting through this scene. I tried not to be word for word with the VN as best I could, though In a lot of areas it did anyways. Once I get out of th...
by Zykes
Tue Aug 21, 2012 6:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 26730

Re: Staggering Harmony - (Updated - Act 1, Scene 2)

Scene 2 – Clean Slate. The hall inside the main building is quite spacious, something that accommodates for the students here I suppose. I notice a tall man standing nearby, his attention directly on me. I almost freeze in place, feeling awkward. “Are you Yamashita?” The man asks. His tone was inte...
by Zykes
Sun Aug 19, 2012 9:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 26730

Re: Staggering Harmony - (Updated - Act 1, Scene 1)

griffon8 wrote:Their relationship should be unusual. If Hiroshi is in high school and Katsumi is a doctor, she should be at least 12 years older.

Your right, she is 28, going on 29.
by Zykes
Sun Aug 19, 2012 5:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 26730

Re: Staggering Harmony - (Updated - Act 1, Scene 1)

“Feeling nervous Hiroshi?” My sister had placed her hand on my shoulder, sending a small jolt through my body; it felt a bit odd for that moment. “…Should I not, Katsumi?” It seemed like an odd question to me in the first place. But I am sure she meant it with good intention. This is just a nit-pic...
by Zykes
Sun Aug 19, 2012 1:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 26730

Re: Staggering Harmony - (Updated - Act 1, Scene 1)

ACT 1 – Slow Beats [/i][/u] Scene 1 – Setting the Threads. The early morning sun beams down through the car window, into my eyes. It’s quite an unpleasant feeling to say the least. I don’t know how to feel about this trip; It feels like I’m being put somewhere I won't cause any trouble. I glance to...
by Zykes
Sun Aug 19, 2012 1:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 26730

Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)

Updates 12/30/2015 - Act 2, Scene 15 Released. 12/29/2015 - Act 2, Scene 14 Released. 12/27/2015 - Act 2, Scene 13 Released. 12/25/2015 - Act 2, Scene 12 Released. 12/25/2015 -All Scene Revisions (A1,S1 to A2,S11) 8/14/2014 - Act 2, Scene 11 Released. 8/18/2014 - Act 2, Scene 10 Released. 8/07/2014...
by Zykes
Sun Aug 19, 2012 1:19 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Staggering Harmony - Extras (3/10/15) Beta Needed!
Replies: 18
Views: 11126

Re: Staggering Harmony - OC Character(s) and Art (Updated)

Name: Yamashita, Katsumi
Age: 28
Height: 174 cm/5'7"
Weight: 60 kg/132 lbs
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Violet


Act 1, Scene 1 - Hiroshi and Katsumi

Image
by Zykes
Sun Aug 19, 2012 1:16 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Staggering Harmony - Extras (3/10/15) Beta Needed!
Replies: 18
Views: 11126

Staggering Harmony - Extras (3/10/15) Beta Needed!

This thread is where I will post Character information for any OC out of my fanfic, Any artwork for my fanfic and for Questions and Answers that people might have about the story. Fan ficiton - Staggering Harmony - Name: Hiroshi Yamashita Age: 18 Birthday: Feb 18th Zodiac: Aquarius Blood Type: O+ He...