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by Mader Levap
Sat Mar 16, 2013 12:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Replies: 186
Views: 33423

Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness

First of all, no matter how many times I read it, I didn't understand the point of this chapter. There might be some American humor that made this chapter enjoyable to the others, but if so, I didn't get it. Most people were out of character, and the sudden arrival of the military was, in my opinio...
by Mader Levap
Sat Mar 16, 2013 6:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Replies: 186
Views: 33423

Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness

I don't think there is need to over-analyze piece that is clearly comedic. No one cares if it is realistic as long as it is funny.
by Mader Levap
Sun Mar 03, 2013 8:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 395393

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/2]

Nice, short filler. Next part should be content-heavy? Aw, appetite just grew even larger. One question, do you intend to split this at some point into a good/bad end or no? There is going to be a split into a neutral end near the end of this act. In my personal opinion, you can do away with whole "...
by Mader Levap
Mon Jan 28, 2013 6:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 395393

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 1/24]

That was fun to read. Notching much happened, actually, yet it is interesting. This is how slice of life should be written. And UST is already visible. :twisted:
by Mader Levap
Thu Jan 24, 2013 8:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 222871

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 01/23/2013

And it is rather easy to guess which one will be bad. I suggest just to do away with choices and write one path. Fanfic format is not very suitable for VN-like routes anyway.
by Mader Levap
Fri Jan 11, 2013 9:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 37479

Re: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)

Muphrid wrote:"So, Nakai, I heard you blew something up. Congratulations. You're a real scientist now."
This made my day. :)
by Mader Levap
Sat Jan 05, 2013 9:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 2/4)
Replies: 42
Views: 7272

Re: Gazing from different eyes (Updated 1/2)

Yeah, this is going in interesting direction. What about Yamaku? This will be BIG problem. Long distance relationship?
by Mader Levap
Fri Jan 04, 2013 7:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 233589

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/3)

Yeah, excellent read. I wonder what next conflict will be. I feel this will have something to do with "eternal debt of gratitude". Hilarity ensues?
by Mader Levap
Fri Dec 28, 2012 8:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 233589

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 12/20)

Right. That monstrosity. Candid photographs of every girl on campus, many in various states of undress, connected by colored string and pushpins. Each photo has ton of hastily scrawled notes, including height, weight, blood type, measurements, likes and dislikes. Nothing about disabilities, surpris...
by Mader Levap
Fri Dec 21, 2012 10:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 233589

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 12/20)

ChrisTheCat wrote:
Mader Levap wrote:If Hisao has half a brain, he should talk to Shizune, and both of them to Misha.
Fixed it for you.
PM is enough for this. :roll:
by Mader Levap
Fri Dec 21, 2012 9:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 233589

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 12/20)

If Hisao has half of brain, he should talk to Shizune, and both of them to Misha.
by Mader Levap
Tue Dec 18, 2012 9:19 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: I can't wait.
Replies: 24
Views: 3407

Re: I can't wait.

Xanatos wrote:That 4chan thing makes no sense. As if internet connections will ever be lost while civilization hasn't collapsed yet. :lol:
Premise being very, very improbable (or even impossible) is not same as nonsensical premise.
by Mader Levap
Tue Dec 18, 2012 9:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 94902

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 13/11/2012)

Negativedarke wrote:I figured you'd probably give all the endings a shot. As to which you'd use for cannon...
All endings in VN are canon.
by Mader Levap
Mon Dec 17, 2012 8:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Direction (post Rin neutral ending)(complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 37479

Re: Direction (post Rin neutal ending)

Muphrid wrote:I'm happy for her.takes Rin by the hand
...
That seems reasonable, I think.takes Rin by the hand
I do not think it is supposed to be like that.
by Mader Levap
Mon Dec 17, 2012 7:04 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: I can't wait.
Replies: 24
Views: 3407

Re: I can't wait.

Fanart in many variants is sufficient to satiate my desire to see more of this story. So I don't wait for anything, but move on. To search for another rare pearls among infinite ocean of internet crap. Game, novel, movie, anime, music, anything. Thing that will be another masterpiece. They are so ra...