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by Mader Levap
Sun Sep 01, 2013 7:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tripping
Replies: 89
Views: 24630

Re: Tripping

I hope it will continue. This kind of format (string of mini-chapters, every one from POV of next person) is refreshingly different from usual.
by Mader Levap
Sun Sep 01, 2013 5:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Redshift - Rika Route [10/2]
Replies: 101
Views: 21495

Re: Redshift - Rika Route [7/27]

Now thats good to read fanfic. With big, fat, scary foreshadowing right in title. :o
by Mader Levap
Sat Aug 31, 2013 9:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Of Secrets and Scandals (an OC pseudo-pseudo-route)
Replies: 9
Views: 2751

Re: Of Secrets and Scandals (an OC pseudo-pseudo-route)

Well, what we have here? Something that starts out interesting. Hopefully, it will stay like that.
by Mader Levap
Fri Aug 30, 2013 9:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27317

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier

Liked story. It was nice to see how it wovens around canonical events known from VN (whole Cold War thing and reason for this scene). While it is indeed strange that Yuuto would wait so long not doing anything (he does not look like someone that would just ignore it like that), I have no problems wi...
by Mader Levap
Fri Aug 30, 2013 8:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 12985

Re: Once More [Update: 8/29]

Now that's one sad guy. Hopefully, it is story about how he gets better. Character development and all of that.
by Mader Levap
Thu Aug 22, 2013 5:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 95832

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Finally. :)
by Mader Levap
Tue Aug 13, 2013 6:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 576
Views: 208905

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 8/7)

More germane to the point, the VN never said either way. Yes, VN is deliberately vague, but there are some hints indicating that in canon Misha may have no disability at all. The most popular reference for the "no disability" camp is: "I didn't know you wanted to be a sign language teacher." "Hahah...
by Mader Levap
Sat Aug 10, 2013 5:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 295531

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 4 up 8/10]

In my opinion, suggestions that so many female students want or wanted Hisao are kinda jarring. He is normal guy, not Casanova. -.-
by Mader Levap
Thu Aug 08, 2013 4:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 576
Views: 208905

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 8/7)

It is wrong that I immediately thought about Suzu, when seeing "battleships"?
All in all nice chapter, if average.
by Mader Levap
Mon Jul 29, 2013 6:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 362739

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 7/28]

Thanatos02 is back! It's good and it looks like it will be better. Others already said it all. :mrgreen:
by Mader Levap
Thu Jul 25, 2013 2:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 362739

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 6/18]

MM/DD/YYYY makes perfect sense as it goes from smallest to largest Nope. It screws completely any sane sorting and it is impossible to convert from MM-DD-YYYY to DD-MM-YYYY correctly in every case. Anyway YYYY-MM-DD is best of them all - ISO standard, sorts always correctly and everyone knows what ...
by Mader Levap
Sun Jul 21, 2013 5:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 860
Views: 196849

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 7/19/2

Well, it is so-so. I am not hot for yuri, so I hope this story have something to stand on its own beside that. It certainly have potential. And about Emi... I went like "damn, another canon event? I never liked those in fanfi- what". Well, at least rest of canon events are right out of window with t...
by Mader Levap
Fri Jun 21, 2013 7:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 12985

Re: Once More [Update: 6/21]

Good read, considering topic. Done well - I dont know anything about fighting games, but was still interesting.
BTW I can see why they are ex.
by Mader Levap
Wed Jun 19, 2013 10:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 95832

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 6/18]

Very nice part! Right amount of humour, events and foreshadowing. I especially liked Hisao (and by extension, about 99% of this forum, me including) encountering - or more like brushing - with unknown world of music.
by Mader Levap
Sun Jun 16, 2013 7:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 576
Views: 208905

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 6/15)

Markus Ramikin wrote:Does that make sense?
Yes, it is now more clear. Misha should at least mention something about symptoms. Even if she avoids it deliberately, you are right that Hisao should wonder about it, at least in thought.