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Sorry for the lack of updates, life and work have me very busy right now. I am going to continue the story once things calm down. If you can't tell, I am using my phone to post this.

About the tense in the last chapter, I just noticed it. My only excuse for it is because I am jumping around in time, Shizune's memories. I confuse myself with it.

About the word "namesake", depending the relation of the people involve, it defines how it is used.

I am my son's namesake. (Family)

He is my namesake.(Friends or anything other than family)

I was a bit confused, because it seems you have rewritten about half of the story so far... For the most part, I like the changes. There are some fresh ideas, and you actually made me LIKE Shizune - that's something not many authors have managed to do ;-) Some of the dialogue sounds a bit stilted, ...

Change of Perception As we drove back to Yakamu, I couldn’t stop staring at Hisao and wonder how we got to this place. I never consider myself the type to fall in love this deeply before with anyone. Hisao is different. He sometimes acts like a lost puppy wanting to be held, but he has shown such st...

Dreams and Memories It is dark and cold. I can hear my parents’ voices. “Why did you kill us Hiaso?” my father accuses me. “Didn’t you love us?” my mother accuses me. “I love you. I didn’t mean it. Please don’t go away. I need you.” I am begging. “You don’t need us anymore, you have moved on without...

Looking Down the Road After the typical hurry and wait for check out of the hospital, the Nurse and I walk to the dorms. I hoped that Shizune would have come by before school, however, she didn’t. The Nurse is going over my schedule for continuing therapy, but it is just running Emi and getting my t...

Taking that First Step Friday is English; Lilly insists that we speak English during this time, which drives me crazy. English is my worst subject; however, Lilly’s help has made it less awful. To my surprise, Misha has started to sit in with my tutoring sessions. At first, I thought she was spying ...

At the time of those comment, I wasn't sure if I would continue with it or post it here. Your comment basically says dont keep going. While it doesn't anger me, it does seem out of place in this forum. I believe in encouraging people when they put themselves out there, telling some you should quit w...

How to Save a Life True to her words, Shizune comes back the next day. She isn’t alone because there is a group in my room. Lilly, Hanako, Emi, Misha…wait…is that one of those behavior dog collars on her? The Nurse is with them. “Good Afternoon Hiaso…” the Nurse starts to speak. “HICCHAN…EEP!” Misha...

I see that I spelled names wrong. I fixed that, but I have since kept a character list close by for reference. Sorry about that.

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This is how it ends, one little slip and splat! I should have never gone up to the roof with Kenji and just gone to the festival. Now there is nothing but darkness. “It would help if you would open your eyes,” a far off voice says, “You look awfully silly just lying there with your eyes closed.” …I ...

This is a well constructed story where all the characterization were on par with the VN. It is an easy read, don't get the issue with the whole () thing because I pick up it was thoughts that the character was having within construct of the moment. It took it cues from VN to create a not an epilogue...