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by MyCaptain
Thu May 01, 2014 5:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 96882

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 5/1]

monkeywitha6pack wrote:
dewelar wrote:Hmmm...you really do like torturing your characters, don't you? :wink:
Looks like we a George rr Martin here. Minus all the deaths

Give it time. I'm sure he'll get around to it. :wink:
I have to say that Kagami is my favourite OC, she just seem so real. Deeply troubled, but real.
by MyCaptain
Tue Apr 08, 2014 11:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After The Dream—MAIN INDEX (Rika update 20190704)
Replies: 155
Views: 80656

Re: AtD—An Unexpected Visitation

brythain wrote:Fine.
Rika and other characters could be very interesting actually. Just one thing: you promised us Misha. :wink:
by MyCaptain
Mon Mar 10, 2014 9:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Emi's Arc/Akiko's Story (Complete)
Replies: 77
Views: 28206

Re: After the Dream—Emi's Arc (Part 2 up 20140310)

That's probably the cutest editorial note I've ever read! Gave it a quick glance and it feels like it holds up better now, though I can't say for sure yet. I really enjoyed what you made of Shizune and Lilly in their arcs. This, so far, seems abit lacking in comparison but I'm not going to judge yet...
by MyCaptain
Thu Feb 27, 2014 11:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Shizune/Hideaki's Arcs (Complete)
Replies: 87
Views: 36144

Re: After the Dream (Post Lilly Neutral End, Shizune Part 1)

Hmm, this will be interesting to follow. The story you outlined in the notes of your one-shot seem like it would make for a good read. I'm looking forward to see what you make of it.
by MyCaptain
Sat Feb 22, 2014 7:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200127 A God Among Men)
Replies: 1819
Views: 257525

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Are there any other 3-3 characters left? Well, all male characters for a start. Other than that for 3-3: Ikuno, got some lines in a Molly-fic series that I think is abandoned. Molly, people have tried but it seems to suffer from the same issues as Miki-routes. Naomi, some scenes exist, but that's p...
by MyCaptain
Tue Nov 05, 2013 5:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 12442

Re: OC "Neko" - Route

Agreed, and if this was the only ending I'd feel a need to explain. It will be revealed in the more favorable scenarios. Ah, I thought you would but glad to be reassured of that. By all means, tell me where the holes are and I'll fill them in for clarity. I've been worried about saying TOO much and...
by MyCaptain
Tue Nov 05, 2013 3:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 12442

Re: OC "Neko" - Route

Did you seriously think that choice was going to go anywhere else? When's the last time Hisao throwing down an ultimatum has ended in a good way? As already have been said, sure it would never go down a good route but.. Flipping hell man, Neko (who totally is the girl with a decision to make) has g...
by MyCaptain
Mon Apr 01, 2013 8:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 368572

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/1]

I hope you don't go the same way as the Lilly Route with this. I was actually thinking that myself, with when Aiko tells Hisao about her condition being the deciding factor on whether or not they get back together post summer break. I do belive you are in the wrong thread with that comment Hoitash....
by MyCaptain
Mon Apr 01, 2013 11:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 368572

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/1]

CaptainFalcon wrote:
BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:http://i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/ori ... 80/a44.jpg
Give her the D Hisao, THE D!!!!
Well, It is a Thanatos-story, can't be to far off.

Gotta say, I really enjoy this!
by MyCaptain
Thu Nov 08, 2012 9:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Seeking Knowledge - A Medieval Journey (Chapter One 11/7)
Replies: 12
Views: 1660

Re: Seeking Knowledge - A Medieval Journey (Chapter One 11/7

YourFavAnon wrote:As for that line, it was actually meant to be a bit of tongue in cheek. He kind of was meant to sort of come off like he was still a bit upset that she stole his money, and now he has to pay for her expenses and all.
Ah! That makes more sense then.
by MyCaptain
Wed Nov 07, 2012 9:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Seeking Knowledge - A Medieval Journey (Chapter One 11/7)
Replies: 12
Views: 1660

Re: Seeking Knowledge - A Medieval Journey (Chapter One 11/7

Now this is appealing. I really liked this piece and I really want to see how this story will turn out. I like the take on the language and even the "religious" aspect of it, though I do think you overdid that a little. The transition between Hisao calling out "Daughter of the Lord" and "Sister of t...