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by YourFavAnon
Thu Jul 09, 2015 9:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 95056

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]

Good chapter. Hisao is, for lack of a better term, completely fucking up right now though. Dude needs to figure it out before he makes the situation any worse, because he's already beginning to dig a pretty deep hole. I suppose we'll see what happens though, yeah? ;) P.S: Save some of them creative ...
by YourFavAnon
Sat May 24, 2014 9:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 359231

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]

Well done, bud. Don't know if you plan on writing much more KS things now that you've managed to complete this (or write anything else at all), but I commend you for completing your story and writing something very, very good. I like that the ending wasn't quite cliche as a lot of endings seem. It e...
by YourFavAnon
Sun Apr 13, 2014 6:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 359231

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/12]

As easy as it is to jump on the Mr. Satou hate train, it's kind of interesting viewing his perspective from the idea of him really just not understanding what it means for an individual to be just that: an individual. In terms of the dynamic that exists between the characters of Mr. Satou and Tetsuo...
by YourFavAnon
Sat Apr 12, 2014 7:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 359231

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/12]

Enjoyed this chapter. The multiple person conversation wasn't all that badly written, had some moments where it felt like someone was talking at an inappropriate time, but other than that it was well done. I'm excited to see how you wrap this all up.
by YourFavAnon
Thu Apr 03, 2014 8:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bugger It, Oneshot Thread (Morse Update 10/4/16)
Replies: 161
Views: 29253

Re: Bugger It, I'll Make This A Oneshot Thread

I'm sorry, but that wasn't even funny. Not 'LOLSORANDOM XDDDDD' or anything at all, for that matter. Was just plain 'ol stupid shit with literally no purpose. C'mon, man... This is like the one show from within the film Idiocracy, where all of the audience was basically retarded and that was the onl...
by YourFavAnon
Sun Mar 16, 2014 1:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]
Replies: 146
Views: 38639

Re: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]

Yeah, this is one of the first things I learned when I started writing: when you have the urge to write, DO NOT IGNORE IT! Well, I used to have the drive pretty constantly, however with college, work, video games etc, the drive has kind of died. But yeah, it feels nice to write every once in a whil...
by YourFavAnon
Sun Mar 16, 2014 1:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]
Replies: 146
Views: 38639

Re: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]

Appreciate the feedback. Back around the end of high school last year I was struggling pretty bad to come to terms with the fact that everyone has to move on from friends (not all, but some) when they progress on and what not. So this was really fun for me to write simply because I just applied some...
by YourFavAnon
Sun Mar 16, 2014 11:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]
Replies: 146
Views: 38639

Re: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 1/11]

3159khz Transmission “So she's gone, just like that?” Kenji flops down with his back pressed against the fence of the rooftop, the red sky evening sky above finally beginning to fade to black. Stars are starting to show themselves from behind a sparse amount of cloud coverage, the air changing to a...
by YourFavAnon
Thu Mar 06, 2014 8:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 359231

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/6]

“My my, Hisao. I didn’t know you two had gotten so close already.
She doesn't even know the half of it.
by YourFavAnon
Tue Feb 04, 2014 6:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 359231

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/4]

You know, it's odd looking at the date that this story began and when it's now (within probably a few months I'd assume) going to be coming to an end. Been over a year and you're still hard at work, yet the story really doesn't feel as if it's been dragged around the block a billion times. This chap...
by YourFavAnon
Sat Jan 11, 2014 10:39 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 138276

Re: The "feels" bazaar.

Your responses sadden me. I'm telling the truth. The fact that you all paid attention to only that particular aspect of my post proves you have much to learn. I never said it's bad for everyone. I get the feeling that it's for me personally. "God made me do it" huh? Can't you just accept the fact t...
by YourFavAnon
Sat Dec 21, 2013 10:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira-pseudo route [12/21]
Replies: 26
Views: 4262

Re: Akira-pseudo route [12/21]

Most of the people who have read the other large Akira seem to agree that the story was almost ruined by large amounts of white-knighting. Mistake number one: you don't understand what white-knighting is. Don't use the term if you don't understand what it is. Being a white-knight =/= (as stated ear...
by YourFavAnon
Thu Nov 21, 2013 9:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Replies: 95
Views: 20994

Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!

Not going to post about it in the thread, PM if you would like to know a bit about his idea behind it. Also, Mehk will most likely finish the Lilly epilogue at some point. He has a tendency to always make sure he finishes what he starts. But, know that he works, is writing / managing two VN projects...
by YourFavAnon
Mon Nov 18, 2013 10:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Replies: 95
Views: 20994

Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!

That's a little dark, why would this put you off? You could psychologically analyze this was her way of coping with loss, but It didn't seem to impair her day-to-day and she had her whole family supporting her. What exactly put you off? And she was in a delusional state, and barely functional (it o...
by YourFavAnon
Tue Nov 12, 2013 8:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 359231

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/10]

I was scared that might happen, heh. I'm having a lot of trouble finding motivation to write as of late. Between exams and friend troubles and KSG tearing itself apart, you'd think I had seasonal depression or something. I'm definitely trying, it's just really, really slow going right now, and I'm ...