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by Machoman
Wed Apr 02, 2014 7:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 45000

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Feurox wrote:RIP in peace.
...
You do know what RIP stands for, don't you?
That's the joke
by Machoman
Fri Jan 31, 2014 1:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 211383

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 01/28/14 ~ C.43 - Mental Block

Glad to see a new update, amazing there are stories here that have been going more than a year and are still being updated
by Machoman
Tue Jan 14, 2014 4:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 54627

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jan 8th)

Maybe Miki POV will break the curse
by Machoman
Sun Jan 12, 2014 6:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 26169

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)

I disagree. Just read through it and it felt like what happened the end was coming a few chapters before. I would have liked more context and fewer time skips but what happened fits the characters. Flighty rich girl obsessed with new experiences and competition is not going to be content with a quie...
by Machoman
Tue Nov 19, 2013 4:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 27989

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 11/07]

Just saw this, dialogue is quite good. I especially like it because, even though I like KS, I don't particularly like Hisao as a character. Maybe my personality is weird but this guy is more likable to me.
by Machoman
Wed Nov 13, 2013 10:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 89504

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 12/11/2013)

Great update
by Machoman
Wed Nov 06, 2013 3:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 60518

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

I can't wait to see how you handle Hisao's parents
by Machoman
Wed Nov 06, 2013 12:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 17145

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (11/4)

Liking it so far
by Machoman
Sun Nov 03, 2013 12:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 97708

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Just caught up myself, I'm liking it
by Machoman
Fri Oct 18, 2013 6:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route *Updated 8/7/14*
Replies: 53
Views: 14616

Re: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route

The amount of money is nitpicking. Months in the hospital/multiple surgeries in the US can be super expensive. If you want to justify it, just add in money for experimental medication + tuition at Yamaku. The only thing important plot wise is Hisao needs lots of money. A KS/Breaking Bad story doesn'...
by Machoman
Fri Oct 18, 2013 1:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route *Updated 8/7/14*
Replies: 53
Views: 14616

Re: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route

Please don't be discouraged by any nitpicking. The nitpicking will make you a better writer and will make the story better for everyone who comes to read this in the coming months (or years, some stuff here goes on for over a year). This is a fabulous premise. With a little suspension of disbelief I...
by Machoman
Sat Oct 12, 2013 9:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 304584

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 19 up 10/8

I have no idea how this is gonna play out but I'm definitely enjoying it.
by Machoman
Thu Oct 03, 2013 11:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Redshift - Rika Route [10/2]
Replies: 101
Views: 22058

Re: Redshift - Rika Route [10/2]

The quality seems to go up with every entry. Very good dialogue.
by Machoman
Mon Sep 30, 2013 5:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 45000

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 29/09/2013]

So far pretty good, interested to see where this goes