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by JTemby
Sat May 25, 2013 1:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Banda's Wonderful Smut Compilation
Replies: 208
Views: 43633

Re: Banda's Wonderful Smut Compilation

Gotta admit, I find it totally boring. It's like reading 50 Shades of Grey. I'm not against sex as a topic in books, but when every third word is either "anus", "penis", "pussy", "moan" or "lick" or something, it's just getting really boring. So yep, I don't like this, seriously. These are not even...
by JTemby
Tue Apr 02, 2013 3:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 220209

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 04/01/2013

Helbereth wrote:I should shout-out to JTemby, who gave it a once-over prior to release and suggested the dream ending.
Love you too, mate.
by JTemby
Fri Jan 11, 2013 8:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 19058

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/7]

Doomish wrote:I love combining things with slice-of-life just to see what sticks, and when I think I've found something, I pursue it.
Like a scientific madman trying to compose something out of nothing and succeeding.
by JTemby
Fri Jan 11, 2013 6:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 19058

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/7]

If you are implying this doesn't feel like KS, then please be reminded that this is a heavily OC piece written by an absolute madman. Gee, thanks. :roll: Oh come on, that's a minor insult for writing a story where Hanako gets made into a sex slave/forced prostitute, presumably for shock value. Rela...
by JTemby
Thu Jan 10, 2013 2:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 19058

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/7]

In other words: While fantastic story elements are acceptable in certain settings (Fantasy, SciFi), the setting itself has to be consistent as well. Ah yes, but whom setting? If you are implying this doesn't feel like KS, then please be reminded that this is a heavily OC piece written by an absolut...
by JTemby
Thu Jan 10, 2013 8:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 19058

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/7]

Mirage_GSM wrote:

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by JTemby
Sat Jan 05, 2013 9:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Brand new Emi route
Replies: 40
Views: 4976

Re: Brand new Emi route

I really enjoy the direction of which you're taking the plot and your complete lack of self insert.
I look forward to reading more, keep up the good work, broseph.
by JTemby
Fri Dec 28, 2012 1:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sick Day (A short Lilly fic)
Replies: 10
Views: 2695

Re: Sick Day (A short Lilly fic)

Keep up the good work. You best be applyin' yo'self to improvin' yo'self.
I'll give you criticism in chat.
by JTemby
Sat Dec 01, 2012 9:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]
Replies: 146
Views: 41358

Re: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 11/28]

I find it somewhat harder to ignore that you have to learn part of a game's jargon to get the finer details, and that it's an intentional move by the author, as stated in the header... What you need to keep in mind however, is that the author himself added a disclosure that basically said "If you h...
by JTemby
Mon Sep 24, 2012 10:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]
Replies: 146
Views: 41358

Re: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [New Story 9/21]

So, I'll admit, it's been a while since I've read your work, or any one-shot for that matter. I tried to avoid reading one-shots simply because I believed they couldn't tell a story in such a way pseudo-routes do. Oh boy, was my opinion wrong. Reading Clairvoyance and Curveball side by side reminded...
by JTemby
Sat Sep 22, 2012 11:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 403856

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 9/20)

First up, nice reference to the fan-art. I get the feeling an inflatable beach ball of colours red and white will be involved in the next chapter :lol: Besides finding myself having to double take on a few lines, not much else to say on the chapter itself, it's typical Scissorlips style. Also, I've ...
by JTemby
Tue Sep 18, 2012 4:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 403856

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (udpated 9/14)

Total Destruction wrote:Dutch movies, Kool Aid and possibly something about Guile's theme going with everything.
I honestly have no idea what you said, but for some reason... I kinda agree... I think?
by JTemby
Sat Sep 15, 2012 7:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 18597

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter One 9/15)

This is typically the part where I guise some harsh but fair criticism within some pop-culture references and smartass comments, but this time, there's very little to comment on... I don't think this chapter did anything for me, simply because there wasn't much to it, which is ironic considering I g...
by JTemby
Fri Sep 14, 2012 2:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 403856

Re: Closing Time

Hey, I thought I'd feed your Suzu addiction, by releasing some extras to the Suzu route, and updating the route with 4-1 Urrrrrrgh Ok, so I've finally caught up, after my reading/renai hiatus brought on by nothing but solid laziness. Loving the lack of Suzu perspective in the extras, but low blow w...
by JTemby
Wed Aug 29, 2012 12:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 168996

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

you're instead trying to base it on other people's posts here... I'm trying to decide if it's worth reading based on the comments. Wouldn't someone do the same with comments on Amazon or something? Take it from me, its engaging enough that the length doesn't seem like a factor. It's well worth the ...