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by ProfAllister
Fri Sep 18, 2020 8:02 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Question About Hanako's Route
Replies: 6
Views: 325

Re: Question About Hanako's Route

Another interesting point to note: You are seeing Lilly off at the gates of Yamaku. Yet Hanako is wearing her casual outfit. Up to that point, the only other time you saw her in her casual outfit was the trip to the Jazz club. A small detail, to be sure, but it pretty strongly implies that she had n...
by ProfAllister
Thu Aug 27, 2020 8:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1875
Views: 306059

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200824 Zade Wither)

In all honesty, for as many issues as the main character has, this generally manages to avoid *most* of the pitfalls. I mean, set aside the edgy name, the "Fresh Prince of Bel Air" rationale for going to Yamaku, and the cool idea for his eye socket (I'm gonna bet it was a trained pet worm). 1. He do...
by ProfAllister
Wed Jul 29, 2020 7:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 46
Views: 6462

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

Well, it has certainly been a year. If you've been paying close attention tot he news, you may have picked up hints of things that have kept me away from being more active here. Seeing as we're almost past the point where I can use the "Christmas in July!" excuse, I should follow through on my promi...
by ProfAllister
Thu Feb 20, 2020 12:50 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: Slow Recovery
Replies: 2
Views: 812

Re: Slow Recovery

I'm pretty sure this is in the wrong area, but here you go:

In order to get "Slow Recovery" in the library, you need to be in a situation where you're on both Shizune's Path and Emi's. You'll know you're there when faced with two new decision points.
by ProfAllister
Wed Jan 01, 2020 4:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 241001

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)

Well, I am legitimately grateful for the thought behind this gesture, I must admit to some degree of concern as to the intent of this review. It reads as a blurb in an overall collection of mini-reviews, like a curated fanfiction list. Insofar as that was the intent, it is serviceable. However, as a...
by ProfAllister
Thu Dec 26, 2019 10:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#67—'A Bear Discovers Salt')
Replies: 315
Views: 97842

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#62—'Secrets')

Even worse, they're both post bad end and could more or less be the same timeline. And entirely unintentional, I assure you.
by ProfAllister
Wed Dec 25, 2019 2:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 46
Views: 6462

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

Posted my entry over in my one shot thread, but figured I should ensure that there's a link here, for posterity.
by ProfAllister
Tue Dec 24, 2019 10:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/24/19)
Replies: 97
Views: 25595

Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/18/18)

Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Hole The Death an...
by ProfAllister
Sun Dec 22, 2019 9:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 46
Views: 6462

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

So, MoashLannister asked me to post this on his behalf. I'm not exactly certain why, but I guess that's his business. I'll get around to paying my own comments on the stories so far at some point in the future, but it's not my turn in the spotlight, so without further ado... Victim: monkeywitha6pac...
by ProfAllister
Fri Nov 01, 2019 7:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 241001

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)

I wake up to find myself face to face with Misha, who is still asleep, wearing a look of peace and contentment. While we were asleep, she seems to have wrapped her arms and legs around me, holding me close. It almost makes me want to forget all the pain of the past couple days. … Why not? It's what ...
by ProfAllister
Tue Oct 22, 2019 7:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 67
Views: 11898

Re: Avenues of Communication (Complete)

No need (or expectation) for rewrites - this is mostly my thoughts on areas where it was weak or could have been better, for you to chew on as well as for anyone reading. With regard to the difference of interpretations, I think I can best express my objection on the basis that your alternate interp...
by ProfAllister
Sun Oct 20, 2019 9:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 67
Views: 11898

Re: Avenues of Communication (Complete)

First of all, completion of a work is always an accomplishment and always deserving of an accolade. Congratulations. I truly and sincerely mean it. While my previous comments may have been premature in conclusion, they remain viable for general sense as reading through the story progressively (which...
by ProfAllister
Sat Oct 05, 2019 8:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1875
Views: 306059

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20191007 A reply to Iwanako)

Honestly, what I find most interesting out of the highlighted entry is brythain's comments on the "rules" of Japanese letter writing. I'd like to second Feurox's comment with the add-on of the fic that his link links to: Courtesy of Doomish From there, it would actually be interesting to look at the...
by ProfAllister
Sun Sep 22, 2019 5:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/24/19)
Replies: 97
Views: 25595

Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 10/31/18)

Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Hole The Death an...
by ProfAllister
Tue Sep 17, 2019 6:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 241001

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)

I did a little bit of rereading. I have to say that I still don't get what this story is about, in the sense that I don't understand the purpose or what I ought to be receiving. :| Kinda going over my head. If you were unfamiliar with what a car is, and you saw this , you'd have no idea what it was...