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by ProfAllister
Tue Sep 17, 2019 6:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 202180

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)

I did a little bit of rereading. I have to say that I still don't get what this story is about, in the sense that I don't understand the purpose or what I ought to be receiving. :| Kinda going over my head. If you were unfamiliar with what a car is, and you saw this , you'd have no idea what it was...
by ProfAllister
Mon Aug 19, 2019 2:16 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4940
Views: 735683

Re: Ask!

Not certain what Japan's definition of legal blindness is (if any), but legal blindness in the US is statutorily defined as "a visual acuity (central vision) of 20/200 or worse in the best seeing eye or a visual field (peripheral vision) that is limited to only 20 degrees." Visual acuity of 20/200 m...
by ProfAllister
Thu Aug 01, 2019 9:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190916 Yields Six Servings)
Replies: 1796
Views: 242665

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190715 Radioactive/Call of Yamaku)

Well, after some exceedingly subtle prodding from Oddball, I may as well toss in my two cents. Between my initial post in the thread back when this was new and Crafty's post right above mine, there's not much else to say. It's a competently written short story that, frankly, has nothing more than a ...
by ProfAllister
Mon Jul 29, 2019 6:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 202180

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)

Poor Misha is as lost as Hicchan! I wonder what steps they need to take to rekindle their flame ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) "Anal." On Discord earlier Prof was asking what the "mating press" position is :mrgreen: ... *Deep breath* Boy. I've been married for a decade, with four "proof of sex" tokens. Meanwhile, it ...
by ProfAllister
Fri Jul 26, 2019 5:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 202180

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)

It's early evening, and the sun is beginning to set. I'd rather not make a liar of myself, so I decide that the best thing to do is take a walk, like I said I would. The past couple days have left me with more questions than answers. On the one hand, there are little questions - like whether there w...
by ProfAllister
Fri Jul 26, 2019 5:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 202180

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)

!!!WARNING!!! This is a joke chapter, for those who would rather not read about sexytimes A loud knocking sound wakes me from my sleep. Experience tells me that it’s Kenji or Misha. Or Shizune. Which, by logical extension means it will be Lilly this time. Or Rin, just because the universe likes to m...
by ProfAllister
Fri Jul 26, 2019 5:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 202180

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)

A loud knocking sound wakes me from my sleep. Experience tells me that it’s Kenji or Misha. Or Shizune. Which, by logical extension means it will be Lilly this time. Or Rin, just because the universe likes to mess with my head. Much like with Kenji, the moment I turn the handle, the door is forced o...
by ProfAllister
Fri Jul 26, 2019 5:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 202180

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)

The harsh buzzing of the alarm jerks me out of my fitful sleep. I’m doomed to be haunted by that damned puppet show my whole life, aren’t I? I vaguely wonder why I’m still setting the alarm. It’s not as if I haven’t been waking up this early on my own, and it’s more pleasant without the alarm, anywa...
by ProfAllister
Wed Jul 24, 2019 10:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 41
Views: 1886

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

Okay, got around to reading this, and where to begin? Actually, that's kind of easy. Fancopter, I'd recommend you disengage for a moment. Give yourself some time to either a) digest the feedback or 2) write future chapters. As it is, it's begging to look like the bits of Mendacium that made it notor...
by ProfAllister
Sat Jun 08, 2019 5:40 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: syfy.com tags KS as one of the five sexiest visual novels out there
Replies: 10
Views: 1018

Re: syfy.com tags KS as one of the five sexiest visual novels out there

Seen the Grisaja anime... Well, the first one anyway. If the story is even a little like the VN then you shouldn't expect too much. The Grisaia anime is a massive disservice to the VN. As for the VN itself, the best parts are the non-H scenes - to the point where I'd recommend the (censored) Steam ...
by ProfAllister
Tue Feb 26, 2019 10:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190916 Yields Six Servings)
Replies: 1796
Views: 242665

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190218 KS Pentameter)

We, the Council The phrasing and flow of the story reminded me of a movie script, despite not being in script style. Alternately, you could say it almost feels like some bizarre sort of nature documentary. Content-wise, it's decent enough. Reasonably good characterisation, etc. I have to admit that...
by ProfAllister
Wed Jan 30, 2019 5:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 56
Views: 5985

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 1-25-19)

Well, I feel bad about doing this, especially as this isn't complete yet, but I think this is distracting me to the point where it's keeping me from concentrating on my own writing, so time to get it off my chest. Reading this is painful. Not because it's bad - much the, opposite in fact. It's quite...
by ProfAllister
Sat Jan 19, 2019 5:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A One-Shot: Footsteps in the Dark(9S/ Secret Santa '18)
Replies: 27
Views: 5531

Re: A One-Shot: Footsteps in the Dark(9S/ Secret Santa '18)

Well, this is a tricky one. It's well-written, there's no issue with the characters, and it's quite sweet. But at the same time, it hurts. Painfully so. I wouldn't see Lilly as necessarily doing this out of spite (unless it's Evil Lilly), but it certainly has the end result of twisting the knife for...
by ProfAllister
Sat Jan 19, 2019 3:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Christmas Spirits, City Angels, A Shanghai Carol - S9 Submission for Scroff
Replies: 5
Views: 688

Re: Christmas Spirits, City Angels, A Shanghai Carol - S9 Submission for Scroff

Lovely writing and a cute story. The subversion of expectations at the end is a nice touch (also a bit of an obvious cop-out, but the delivery was good, so we can let it slide).

Oddly enough, what I find most intriguing is the introduction of Mr. Domen. He could be an interesting figure to play with.
by ProfAllister
Sat Jan 19, 2019 12:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#59—'Smoke Gets In Your Eyes')
Replies: 272
Views: 77963

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#55—'Clubbing') (S9)

A fic that only Brythain could write. Whenever I read one, I'm reminded that I need to eventually get around to reading *After the Dream* in its entirety.

As it is, it's Sci-Fi Christmas Katawas. What's not to like?