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by ProfAllister
Sun Oct 20, 2019 9:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 63
Views: 6639

Re: Avenues of Communication (Complete)

First of all, completion of a work is always an accomplishment and always deserving of an accolade. Congratulations. I truly and sincerely mean it. While my previous comments may have been premature in conclusion, they remain viable for general sense as reading through the story progressively (which...
by ProfAllister
Sat Oct 05, 2019 8:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191007 A reply to Iwanako)
Replies: 1801
Views: 247800

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20191007 A reply to Iwanako)

Honestly, what I find most interesting out of the highlighted entry is brythain's comments on the "rules" of Japanese letter writing. I'd like to second Feurox's comment with the add-on of the fic that his link links to: Courtesy of Doomish From there, it would actually be interesting to look at the...
by ProfAllister
Wed Oct 02, 2019 8:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route
Replies: 15
Views: 566

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route

All in all, it's a decent start, considering. I'm going to second most of the comments from Mirage and Feurox. Particularly, asking everyone to reread an act 1 that they're likely pretty intimately familiar with is a pretty hard sell. Even worse, the first few scenes are 90% the original text with a...
by ProfAllister
Sun Sep 22, 2019 5:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/18/18)
Replies: 90
Views: 18933

Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 10/31/18)

Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Hole The Death an...
by ProfAllister
Tue Sep 17, 2019 6:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 205184

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)

I did a little bit of rereading. I have to say that I still don't get what this story is about, in the sense that I don't understand the purpose or what I ought to be receiving. :| Kinda going over my head. If you were unfamiliar with what a car is, and you saw this , you'd have no idea what it was...
by ProfAllister
Mon Aug 19, 2019 2:16 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4940
Views: 742978

Re: Ask!

Not certain what Japan's definition of legal blindness is (if any), but legal blindness in the US is statutorily defined as "a visual acuity (central vision) of 20/200 or worse in the best seeing eye or a visual field (peripheral vision) that is limited to only 20 degrees." Visual acuity of 20/200 m...
by ProfAllister
Thu Aug 01, 2019 9:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191007 A reply to Iwanako)
Replies: 1801
Views: 247800

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190715 Radioactive/Call of Yamaku)

Well, after some exceedingly subtle prodding from Oddball, I may as well toss in my two cents. Between my initial post in the thread back when this was new and Crafty's post right above mine, there's not much else to say. It's a competently written short story that, frankly, has nothing more than a ...
by ProfAllister
Mon Jul 29, 2019 6:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 205184

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)

Poor Misha is as lost as Hicchan! I wonder what steps they need to take to rekindle their flame ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) "Anal." On Discord earlier Prof was asking what the "mating press" position is :mrgreen: ... *Deep breath* Boy. I've been married for a decade, with four "proof of sex" tokens. Meanwhile, it ...
by ProfAllister
Fri Jul 26, 2019 5:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 205184

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)

It's early evening, and the sun is beginning to set. I'd rather not make a liar of myself, so I decide that the best thing to do is take a walk, like I said I would. The past couple days have left me with more questions than answers. On the one hand, there are little questions - like whether there w...
by ProfAllister
Fri Jul 26, 2019 5:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 205184

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)

!!!WARNING!!! This is a joke chapter, for those who would rather not read about sexytimes A loud knocking sound wakes me from my sleep. Experience tells me that it’s Kenji or Misha. Or Shizune. Which, by logical extension means it will be Lilly this time. Or Rin, just because the universe likes to m...
by ProfAllister
Fri Jul 26, 2019 5:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 205184

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)

A loud knocking sound wakes me from my sleep. Experience tells me that it’s Kenji or Misha. Or Shizune. Which, by logical extension means it will be Lilly this time. Or Rin, just because the universe likes to mess with my head. Much like with Kenji, the moment I turn the handle, the door is forced o...
by ProfAllister
Fri Jul 26, 2019 5:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)
Replies: 572
Views: 205184

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)

The harsh buzzing of the alarm jerks me out of my fitful sleep. I’m doomed to be haunted by that damned puppet show my whole life, aren’t I? I vaguely wonder why I’m still setting the alarm. It’s not as if I haven’t been waking up this early on my own, and it’s more pleasant without the alarm, anywa...
by ProfAllister
Wed Jul 24, 2019 10:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 44
Views: 2285

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

Okay, got around to reading this, and where to begin? Actually, that's kind of easy. Fancopter, I'd recommend you disengage for a moment. Give yourself some time to either a) digest the feedback or 2) write future chapters. As it is, it's begging to look like the bits of Mendacium that made it notor...
by ProfAllister
Sat Jun 08, 2019 5:40 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: syfy.com tags KS as one of the five sexiest visual novels out there
Replies: 10
Views: 1135

Re: syfy.com tags KS as one of the five sexiest visual novels out there

Seen the Grisaja anime... Well, the first one anyway. If the story is even a little like the VN then you shouldn't expect too much. The Grisaia anime is a massive disservice to the VN. As for the VN itself, the best parts are the non-H scenes - to the point where I'd recommend the (censored) Steam ...
by ProfAllister
Tue Feb 26, 2019 10:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191007 A reply to Iwanako)
Replies: 1801
Views: 247800

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190218 KS Pentameter)

We, the Council The phrasing and flow of the story reminded me of a movie script, despite not being in script style. Alternately, you could say it almost feels like some bizarre sort of nature documentary. Content-wise, it's decent enough. Reasonably good characterisation, etc. I have to admit that...