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by Finn Solomon
Sat Sep 14, 2013 2:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 298883

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 14 up 9/13

Yay new chapter! Possible grammar error here below. After my sprints and a quick visit to the nurse, I make my way up to the girls' dorm. As I open the door to my room, a familiar voice Rins out from across the hall. Things are heating up, but I guess Emi would be driven to massage Hisao if she felt...
by Finn Solomon
Mon Sep 09, 2013 12:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 298883

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 13 up 9/8]

Oh man, I love this fic. I like both Emi and Hanako, and it's strange to root for them both. I'm glad Hisao's making the choice and not me. Although some part of me still holds out hope for a reconciliation with Lilly. Surely she should realise she still loves him, doesn't she? Anyway with my luck i...
by Finn Solomon
Sun Sep 08, 2013 10:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 88246

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 18/08/2013)

Just popping in to say that I've just finished reading this fic and I like it very much. I particularly enjoyed Hanako's characterisation as an intelligent and observant person while being too shy to actually show it outwardly. Even seasoned comic book writers and novelists and movie scriptwriters f...
by Finn Solomon
Tue Mar 26, 2013 11:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Golden Slumbers [OC x Lilly] (UPDATED 04/02)
Replies: 57
Views: 7482

Re: Golden Slumbers [OC x Lilly] (UPDATED 03/01)

Keep up the good work! I've reversed my opinion of OC fics, Hisao is such a bland character (admittedly intentionally, and by design) that it's refreshing to see other characters with more personality interact with the girls at Yamaku.
by Finn Solomon
Tue Mar 26, 2013 12:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 155264

Re: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route

I just discovered this a few days ago and what a brilliant story. Like Rin's route, I feel I should go back and 'play' it again to really understand all the little nuances and philosophical content. Rikabro, you've done an excellent job. Your Rika, her character, her personality, her way of speech, ...
by Finn Solomon
Sat Nov 24, 2012 5:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking Hearts (Breaking Bad Crossover)
Replies: 3
Views: 1194

Re: Breaking Hearts (Breaking Bad Crossover)

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Also I am aware that some things contradict canon in both works...
That's calling the ocean wet.
Why did you make it a crossover in the first place if you keep nothing but the names?
Well I could call it a parody, but it doesn't seem to fit.
by Finn Solomon
Fri Nov 23, 2012 2:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking Hearts (Breaking Bad Crossover)
Replies: 3
Views: 1194

Breaking Hearts (Breaking Bad Crossover)

Hey everyone, I've recently started getting into Breaking Bad as well as rediscovering my love for Katawa Shoujo. I love the writing in both pieces of work, so I thought I'd try my hand at combining the two. To me Walter White is a fascinating character, and I'd love to explore the moral dilemmas an...
by Finn Solomon
Thu Jun 07, 2012 7:48 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which of the girls would you date in real life?
Replies: 170
Views: 17531

Re: Which of the girls would you date in real life?

I'd date Miki in a heartbeat. Energetic, feisty, funny and probably shags like a demon. A definite keeper.
by Finn Solomon
Wed Jun 06, 2012 4:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 384797

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/6)

Oh my goodness I was not expecting that. I love the little details you add that really bring out the personality of each character, like Miki's creativity and Suzu's shyness. I like the way you describe her thoughts and emotions as well, it has a very natural feel and flow to it. Suzu really feels l...
by Finn Solomon
Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family
Replies: 38
Views: 16397

Re: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family

Akira deserves happiness, damn you!
by Finn Solomon
Tue Jun 05, 2012 1:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 384797

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 5/29)

I love this fic! Always had a thing for Suki, she just looks so cute when she's sleepy. I like how you've portrayed her, your realistic depiction of narcolepsy, the hallucinations with the Grim Reaper are very interesting, and of course, Miki. I love your Miki too.

Please update!
by Finn Solomon
Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:37 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favorite things about your least favorite girl?
Replies: 59
Views: 5928

Re: Favorite things about your least favorite girl?

I like that Shizune's trying to reach out to people and just wants to make more friends, although her brusque manner and her communication problems are putting people off. It makes her feel more like a realistic, well-rounded character. I also like that she eventually makes up with Lilly, family sho...
by Finn Solomon
Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:08 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Weird/silly thoughts while playing KS
Replies: 230
Views: 20264

Re: Weird/silly thoughts while playing KS

Every time Lilly mentions Hanako's parents dying in a fire while she was eight, all I could think of was BATMAN. Seriously you guys. Hanako isn't the Joker. She's Batman (or Batwoman). They were both eight when the horrible tragedy struck their lives and now THEIR PARENTS ARE DEAAAAAADDDDD! If I was...
by Finn Solomon
Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: M&M: A Tale of Two Delicious Brown Girls
Replies: 54
Views: 12015

Re: M&M: A Tale of Two Delicious Brown Girls

I don't usually read girl/girl fics but I love how you've portrayed both girls. I wish there was more Miki fic, she is awesome.
by Finn Solomon
Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:22 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Anybody else disappointed Katawa Shoujo didn't make Cracked'
Replies: 77
Views: 7069

Re: Anybody else disappointed Katawa Shoujo didn't make Crac

Actually that's how I found out about KS. I read the Cracked article, then I went to read the comments and a lot of people were mentioning it. As usual when it comes to any new game or tv show I went over to TVTropes to find out more about it. I was pleasantly surprised to find an extensive, well-ma...