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by TheSongofRaven
Sun Mar 03, 2013 3:06 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What scene made you "cry" the most
Replies: 677
Views: 80596

Re: What scene made you "cry" the most

For me, it's hanako scene at showing her scar and her explanations , and other one is Lilly's visit to hisao after his collapse on his way to reach her before departure.

This game make me, the pathetic man ever, regret mocking life.....
by TheSongofRaven
Sun Mar 03, 2013 3:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Façade (Another Post-Hanako Good End Fanfiction.)
Replies: 10
Views: 2229

Re: Façade (Another Post-Hanako Good End Fanfiction.)

Good to see nice writing but would you kindly fix the paragraph issues ?
by TheSongofRaven
Sun Oct 14, 2012 4:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Metro : 2033
Replies: 8
Views: 1452

Re: Katawa Metro : 2033

Chapter 2 : REALITY “GAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH !” The boy, Hisao Nakai, awaken from his sleep and also from his nightmare. He found himself sweated and thirsty. His quarter, shared with his step-father, Professor Mutou, is only a small room, with a bed, table, lamp, and chair. His room wall is covered by old...
by TheSongofRaven
Sun Oct 14, 2012 4:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Metro : 2033
Replies: 8
Views: 1452

Re: Katawa Metro : 2033

here's the chapter 1 and 2. I also make some sketch but one day, i will post on this thread. Check this out. Chapter 1 : DREAM Somehow....... I feel something.... That is comfort me..... Where am i........ It cannot be. Somehow, i stranded on freshly green field of grass. What i see is flowers, butt...
by TheSongofRaven
Sun Oct 07, 2012 11:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Metro : 2033
Replies: 8
Views: 1452

Re: Katawa Metro : 2033

Well, first off, the grammar issues are going to be an enormous hurdle for any readers. You could be writing an incredible masterpiece, but if it reads like a YouTube comment, no one is going to give it any respect (or attention). I understand if English isn't your first language, but you'll either...
by TheSongofRaven
Sun Oct 07, 2012 9:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Metro : 2033
Replies: 8
Views: 1452

Re: Katawa Metro : 2033

Enemy | wrote:I was gonna comment on the grammar but I just imagined a thick Russian accent like in the actual Metro 2033 and it seemed like it was on purpose :lol:
yeah, still work on grammar, and i imagined hisao use......thick russian accent (on japanese ofc). Maybe it will be epic :P
by TheSongofRaven
Sun Oct 07, 2012 8:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Metro : 2033
Replies: 8
Views: 1452

Katawa Metro : 2033

Ok, here's some fiction about this vn, don't know if this worth. So, just give some comment and critic, and lemme know. Prelude : My name is Hisao Nakai, today, i am turned into 20. Like folks on Japan, i also live on underground train station tunnel. My homeplace. The underground train station tunn...
by TheSongofRaven
Sun Oct 07, 2012 8:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: One Wish (Hanako, post neutral) [Updated, 10/8]
Replies: 30
Views: 14143

Re: One Wish (Hanako, post neutral) [Now with epilogue, 9/15

reading this, remind me back to Forrest Gump. Glad to see precious writing again on this fan section.
by TheSongofRaven
Mon Sep 10, 2012 9:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 379235

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (extras added 9/10)

Short, but so touching and emotional.
Wonder if Hisao still alive when their daughter write her name on the tree ? Sorry, curiousity can't be helped
by TheSongofRaven
Wed Aug 15, 2012 7:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Behind my Scars [Updated to: Chapter 6]
Replies: 58
Views: 16027

Re: Behind my scars [Updated to: Chapter 2]

another good-writing story of Hanako story :) keep it up. I can't wait for next chapter
by TheSongofRaven
Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:55 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 229375

Re: Recommend a VN

Translation not yet finished, man. Around 80% done now, if I remember right. Yes, that's about it. http://vntls.tindabox.net/project/irotoridori-no-sekai Should be done by the end of the year, at least. I too am waiting for that. The artwork in it is gorgeous. I've been in love with FAVORITE's styl...
by TheSongofRaven
Mon Aug 13, 2012 6:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]
Replies: 146
Views: 38766

Re: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [New Story 8/12]

Mirage_GSM wrote:So Lilly wears her bra to bed?
seems legit :lol: anyway, thats, ummmmm, errrr, nice love dowey story i think. I mean, when i read that...... nah don't know how to say. Maybe you expressing everything so good and almost like real. Seriously. keep it up
by TheSongofRaven
Mon Aug 13, 2012 6:35 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 229375

Re: Recommend a VN

someone have irotoridori no sekai english patch ? just got this vn today from friend >.<
by TheSongofRaven
Fri Aug 10, 2012 10:09 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 229375

Re: Recommend a VN

guys, i have play narcissu. Man it's prologue is like KS one >.< Thanks for recommend this
by TheSongofRaven
Wed Aug 08, 2012 9:03 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 229375

Re: Recommend a VN

You mean understand Japanese, right? Anyway, Eternal Heart is the easiest VN that I've read untranslated. (Using mouseover dictionary via TA with MeCab+JParser, of course.) (Hoshimemo is also probably the same, but I read that translated, so can't say for sure.) Short sentences with very basic gram...