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Fri Jun 15, 2012 5:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
Replies: 28
Views: 3745

Re: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]

So, is Hitomi a creature from Japanese mythology, from another dimension, an alien, or all of the above? Hitomi is the progeny of moekki's superbly talented hands. Have a link here: http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=2212&p=61942&hilit=hitomi#p61942 You'll find Hitomi mostly on the Shimmie, bu...
by # 2
Fri Jun 15, 2012 8:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 50508

Re: The United States of Misha 6/14 Update

I think you made the right choice, Hiotash, in not allowing the 'sleepless' scene to devolve into unnecessary humor-- it would have killed the mood.

Loved the chapter, can't wait for more.
by # 2
Tue Jun 12, 2012 10:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 89747

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 6/12 Update

KS, Mission Impossible, Dragnet, James Bond, The Magnificent Seven, with a little Kill Bill and CSI: Miami tossed in for good measure.

It's like drinking the worlds best cocktail minus the hangover in the morning.
by # 2
Tue Jun 12, 2012 9:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)
Replies: 7
Views: 1195

Re: Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)

It is a rather engaging story, even though it is a little hard to read with the grammar errors. I'd like to see where you take this, so keep on writing. As they say, 'practice makes perfect'.
by # 2
Tue Jun 12, 2012 6:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
Replies: 28
Views: 3745

Re: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]

I only have one complaint. You didn't use the original Twilight Zone introduction. Still, it's a worthy idea. I'm looking forward to it. Welllll, that's the intro I remember best from when I was a kid, sitting up late at night, the volume just high enough for me to hear with my face about six inche...
by # 2
Tue Jun 12, 2012 6:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 396516

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (small update 6/12)

As to the first: Terrifying. Seriously, edge of the seat stuff there. As to the second: Hilarious. And Emulsifier is correct, it's generally accepted that to receive, you must first give, though there are exceptions. Also, the 'cook up a big batch of chocolate and give it to friends and coworkers' t...
by # 2
Tue Jun 12, 2012 12:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 50508

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 6/10

Misha is 5'1", if my conversion from metric to Imperial is correct. Converting from metric to imperial is never correct. :-) In the words of the great Chilled Chaos: FOR AMERICA! and Sweden. No offense meant, mind. Nah, most of my fellow Americans are just backwards*, or too hardheaded* to convert ...
by # 2
Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
Replies: 28
Views: 3745

Re: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]

griffon8 wrote:No hints needed for me. I know who she is.
I imagine most folks will recognize her, but you never know, there may be a person or two who haven't heard of her. ;)
griffon8 wrote:
If my heat were beating, it might have skipped.
'heart'
Thanks for catching that. :)
by # 2
Mon Jun 11, 2012 2:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
Replies: 28
Views: 3745

Total Recall and Rec Roomie

look here for a hint at who mystery girl is. Total Recall I open the door to the student dormitories and find a small antechamber. Hitomi is waiting for me, her face again set in what appears to be her default expression, somewhere between bored and amused, as if a person just told her a joke she’s...
by # 2
Mon Jun 11, 2012 12:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin (A Poem)
Replies: 2
Views: 715

Re: Rin (A Poem)

It feels right.

Well, any spoilers you included seem vague enough. Then again, I feel that if you visit the fan fiction forums before you've completed all the paths, you are just asking to be spoiled. ;)
by # 2
Mon Jun 11, 2012 12:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 50508

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 6/10

Gah, I totally missed the SW reference. Too many beers, that's my excuse. Now I can't get the sight of Lynda with cinnamon buns stuck to the sides of her head out of my mind. (It's been too much time since I watched Emipre Strikes back... I think Leah's hair was straigth in that scene, but anyway......
by # 2
Mon Jun 11, 2012 12:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Left Behind - Taxi ride to the airport (Driver's POV)
Replies: 6
Views: 1278

Re: Left Behind - Taxi ride to the airport (Driver's POV)

Poor driver. Guy needs a hug, badly. I like his empathy. Most of the drivers I've had were totally apathetic, some seemed to think I was causing them some inconvenience. 'Course, I never call a cab unless it's after midnight and there are no buses running so... guess I never blamed the guys too much...
by # 2
Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 50508

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 6/10

Lynda wrote:I love you.
Misha wrote:I know.*
Heh, after I went back and read it again, I saw what you did. My first post was extremely different. Tell Misha I'm sorry. :P

Good episode, can't wait for the next.

*still wish Misha had said "I love you too."
by # 2
Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ballad of the Caterpillar
Replies: 7
Views: 1244

Re: Ballad of the Caterpillar

Lilly doesn't at all strike me as being 'foxy'... too many connotations of mischief and trickery. A deer, perhaps? A deer would be too timid to be Lilly, I think. The fox is wise and sly, plans her movements in advance. There's a story of a fox who makes a bet with a tanuki over which can drive a p...
by # 2
Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ballad of the Caterpillar
Replies: 7
Views: 1244

Re: Ballad of the Caterpillar

Hanako is the Caterpillar, yes. The Fox is Lilly. Also staring (In order of appearance), the Baku and the Kitten, The Hawk and the Pigeon, and the young man. I have everything planned out for how the story unfolds, if I was writing a story I'd probably be done with it be now, but rhyme and meter are...