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by Henry Spencer
Fri Feb 14, 2014 12:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blue Balls and a Slack Jaw (Taro Pseudo Route)
Replies: 18
Views: 9422

Re: Blue Balls and a Slack Jaw (Taro Pseudo Route)

Written pretty well, but the content is pretty horrible. It balances out it nicely.
by Henry Spencer
Thu Dec 26, 2013 1:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/6/23)
Replies: 97
Views: 56555

Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/25/13)

I don't usually post or read much of anything, but this was well worth it. Excellent.
by Henry Spencer
Tue Nov 26, 2013 4:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two halves make a whole [Iwanako pseudo route] [on hold]
Replies: 75
Views: 26277

Re: —

I haven't been here in a while, so I curiously clicked on this. Shame to say, I missed it. Though my opinion is of little worth, I agree with Leaty. I'm not sure an Iwanako route could work at all, unless it was super contrived or something. Though others maybe bend the rules sometimes, I like to in...
by Henry Spencer
Sun Mar 31, 2013 3:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Departure [Phase 1]
Replies: 6
Views: 3112

Re: Departure [Phase 1]

Well, so far all you've did is rewrite a story we've already been told, except adding in a scene where Hisao gets beat up. Frankly, that little addition does more to wreck the feeling of the story than it does to add to it. Not only does it stick out like a sore thumb, but it completely changes the...
by Henry Spencer
Sun Mar 31, 2013 3:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Departure [Phase 1]
Replies: 6
Views: 3112

Departure [Phase 1]

So after a couple weeks of thinking, the beginning of this fic does not fit into the grand scheme of things.

I will eventually post a new phase 1, but for now, I'm taking the original down.
by Henry Spencer
Tue Jan 29, 2013 3:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Nothing But a Nightmare [Iwanako]
Replies: 2
Views: 3534

Re: Nothing But a Nightmare [Iwanako]

Post post post.

I dunno if I commented when this was posted elsewhere, but I really enjoyed it. It's short, but it has just the right amount of depth to feel appropriate.
by Henry Spencer
Thu Aug 23, 2012 10:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Downward Spiral [Mutou] [Chapter 1: 8/14]
Replies: 14
Views: 6465

Re: Downward Spiral [Mutou] [Chapter 1: 8/14]

This probably won't go anywhere anytime soon. The meds I'm on mess me up too much to write much of anything these days. I had that part of DS done for about 2-3 weeks before posting it.

Also not a fan of commitment, unfortunately. I might just stick to one-shots.
by Henry Spencer
Tue Aug 14, 2012 7:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Downward Spiral [Mutou] [Chapter 1: 8/14]
Replies: 14
Views: 6465

Re: Downward Spiral [Mutou]

Chapter 1: The Setup It's been five months since I resigned. --- After that fateful day, I returned home once more. Closing the door behind me, I sighed. The bottle of whiskey on the end table of the living room called my name, but for now, I ignored it. Leaning back against the front door, I closed...
by Henry Spencer
Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: shit nobody cares about: the game
Replies: 20
Views: 11527

Re: Henry's One-Shots Compilation [Remembrance: 8/14]

nah bro, nah.
by Henry Spencer
Mon Jul 30, 2012 7:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 714090

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/30)

Oof, right in the feels.
by Henry Spencer
Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: shit nobody cares about: the game
Replies: 20
Views: 11527

Re: Henry's One-Shots Compilation [updated 7-17]

lol this story sucked
by Henry Spencer
Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 714090

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/12)

Man, whenever I start losing motivation to write, I come back and read this story, then find myself inspired again. Great work.
by Henry Spencer
Mon Jul 09, 2012 7:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Slices
Replies: 29
Views: 10851

Re: Slices

No kidding. I read about as far as the first pic of a catgirl, and then I just gave up. It's nice that you're willing to give constructive criticism, but seriously, cut the shit. If I wanted a bunch of pictures of catgirls, I'd type "pictures of catgirls" into my search bar and look them u...