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by crushinator
Tue Oct 23, 2012 5:50 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: KS: The Fighting Game
Replies: 336
Views: 72446

Re: KS: The Fighting Game

Brilliant. I could watch Rin kick Hanako in her burnt face all day long.
by crushinator
Fri Aug 03, 2012 6:20 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Superpowers: A Dramatic Reading
Replies: 6
Views: 2385

Re: Katawa Superpowers: A Dramatic Reading

I read chrono's full posting of his Katawa Superpowers story on the fan fiction forum and I have to say I had some fun reading it. It's fast paced and reads a bit like you're watching a TV series. Not for everyone I guess.

As for this reading, the voices are irritating rather than funny.
by crushinator
Fri Aug 03, 2012 6:09 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: exstended story beta op 1.0
Replies: 15
Views: 2821

Re: exstended story beta op 1.0

I'm pretty sure this violates the creative commons licence that Katawa Shoujo has. Mainly because you've used sprites from the game and the logo of the game. I don't think calling it "Katawa Shoujo" in any way would help your case either.
by crushinator
Sat Jun 30, 2012 12:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 364828

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/25)

I noticed you spelled dessert as 'desert' more than once in a short space of time in the latest update. I'm not one to criticise people's spelling, but thought you might find it helpful. I thought that Kenji was going to make up with Suzu and Hisao by giving her all the books he stole from the libr...
by crushinator
Tue Jun 26, 2012 1:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebellion
Replies: 27
Views: 3970

Re: Rebellion

I think Rin is fine. But why does Hisao have an artificial inner ear? I was thinking that if someone had an artificial heart, then the surgeons would also develop a way of letting the patient know if their organ is malfunctioning. So I imagined maybe they'd put an implant in their ear or something.
by crushinator
Mon Jun 25, 2012 2:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebellion
Replies: 27
Views: 3970

Re: Rebellion

“The senate?” asked Hisao, bringing up their ETA to the senate’s star system on his data-pad. “I thought we were trying to get to the Separatists as fast as possible, to keep their fleet numbers at a minimum.” “We know, we know~” the Executor, taking on a faux-exhausted expression, “But one of the s...
by crushinator
Mon Jun 25, 2012 2:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 364828

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/25)

I noticed you spelled dessert as 'desert' more than once in a short space of time in the latest update. I'm not one to criticise people's spelling, but thought you might find it helpful. I thought that Kenji was going to make up with Suzu and Hisao by giving her all the books he stole from the libra...
by crushinator
Mon Jun 18, 2012 4:53 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What would their question be?
Replies: 8
Views: 777

Re: What would their question be?

Sorry, had to revive this thread for a thought I had the other day. Maybe me and snow storm are BOTH right. What I'm saying is, there needs to be a Misha/Kenji route. I'm not saying pair them up, but I'm saying there needs to be a route where Hisao dates (or becomes good friends depending on the les...
by crushinator
Sat Jun 16, 2012 4:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebellion
Replies: 27
Views: 3970

Re: Rebellion

The room was in revered silence. Each captain seemed to be either content with or silently criticising the plan, most likely determining how much danger their own ships would be in. Hisao was almost ready to declare a vote for approval of the plan before Rin spoke up. “What if the other captains see...
by crushinator
Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:32 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What would their question be?
Replies: 8
Views: 777

Re: What would their question be?

Joke suggestions: Misha: Can you eat interesting things? or Can your drills pierce the heavens? Kenji: Can you look before you leap from a roof ? Miki: Can you handle the truth? (I actually quite like this one) Suzu: Can you stay awake for 5 goddamn minutes!? Srsbsns: Misha: Can you forgive the past...
by crushinator
Sat Jun 09, 2012 6:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 859
Views: 186186

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako) (u. 6/3/2012)

I like it. A part of me hopes it will be a Yuri storyline.

I don't have any literary criticisms to contribute unfortunately. I do however look forward to the next instalment.
by crushinator
Thu Jun 07, 2012 4:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Haiku for each girl!
Replies: 50
Views: 4415

Re: A Haiku for each girl!

<poetry> Five, seven, then five Syllables make a haiku. Remarkable oaf. Note: No ill will intended by the above; merely advice in the form of a quote. Cookie for the reference. Moving on... Surrounded by snow, My love warms my heart, but fate Snatches him away. Rejected and hurt, I follow her in th...
by crushinator
Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Taxi ride to nowhere
Replies: 34
Views: 6640

Re: Taxi ride to nowhere

A great little one-shot. I enjoyed reading it.
by crushinator
Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebellion
Replies: 27
Views: 3970

Re: Rebellion

Part 3 of the epic tale that has almost no relation to the original fiction from which the characters are based. Does Hisao still even have a heart condition? Can Hanako exist without Lilly? How many more popular science fiction plot devices will our writer steal from real authors? Keep reading REB...
by crushinator
Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Just another one-shot compilation thread (new story 11/18)
Replies: 86
Views: 12342

Re: Blackout (erreybody)

This was a fun read. Always a pleasure, Scissorlips.

I fear for how Yuuko handled the blackout.