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by Kayo12
Thu Jan 10, 2013 5:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 10833

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)

>I think it's entirely possible, actually. Clearly they both like him Tell me why again? None of the scenes in Hanako's route where Hisao and her come together happened here; The pool hall, the birthday and chessboard, the city date, the games of chess and floor tiles, none of those took place in L...
by Kayo12
Wed Jan 09, 2013 5:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 10833

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)

Meaner things have been done for the sake of love... I think it's quite the accomplishment to give the story and characters a completely different spin by just changing the perspective. Even the dialogue is taken verbatim from the original. To "clean up this mess" at the end would cheapen that acco...
by Kayo12
Wed Jan 09, 2013 5:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Updated 1/7)
Replies: 43
Views: 10833

Re: Two Hallways - Hanako's Perspective (Lilly's Confession)

Well, as a fan of Lilly, I can't say this is my favorite of scenarios. Is there a reason why Lilly is coming off as so mean to Hanako? They're supposed to be best friends and in Hanako's route, Lilly tried to push Hisao and Hanako together a lot. I don't really see her doing this, just like I wouldn...
by Kayo12
Mon Dec 17, 2012 7:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route
Replies: 153
Views: 62194

Re: Themocaw's Saki Pseudo-Route

It makes me sad to see that this won't be finished as this is one of my favorite works on the site. If and whenever you decide to get back to it, you can count on me to be one of many eagerly waiting fans.
by Kayo12
Wed Aug 01, 2012 9:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 7299

Re: Clarity: (Complete)

[Nemz] Her independence IS a good thing. It's her decision ultimately so he doesn't honestly have a say in it other than to beg, and I rather suspect that without the heart attack he'd have failed to convince her to reconsider with that course of action. Yet the tone of the story is that she was bei...
by Kayo12
Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 7299

Re: Clarity: (Complete)

[nemz] >had no faith in her to deal with her own problems that would be a major turn-off That the precise point of the Good Ending, though. Hisao thought Lilly was right, that she could handle things herself, that she knew best. He thought her independence was a good thing and it wasn't until after ...
by Kayo12
Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 7299

Re: Clarity: Part Seven (Complete)

Part Seven Akira drops Hisao, Hanako and myself off at Yamaku's front gate before bidding us goodbye. I'm disappointed she has to leave so quickly and I ask if she'd like to join us in my room for some tea despite the lateness of the hour. "Sorry, Lilly. I got work in the morning. I probably should...
by Kayo12
Fri Jul 27, 2012 3:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 7299

Re: Clarity: Part Six (Update 7/22)

[M4rked0ne] I thought the exact same thing after learning she was leaving. The thought is, 'but she's the one who begged me to stay. Why is she the one leaving?' After to hospital scene, I realized just how much Lilly wants to belong in a family. In the wheat field scene, she may as well have been s...
by Kayo12
Thu Jul 26, 2012 4:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 7299

Re: Clarity: Part Six (Update 7/22)

[Mirage_GSM] That...really wasn't what I was trying to do. Lilly's reasons for keeping the secret from Hisao are never really explained, something I was disappointed about after playing the route. I wanted to get into her head and explore the situation from her perspective, that she was afraid to op...
by Kayo12
Tue Jul 24, 2012 8:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 7299

Re: Clarity: Part Six (Update 7/22)

[Kyvos] Thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I may have something else in the works. I really liked exploring Lilly's family in the first section and I may work on something that happens after Lilly's route either as a follow up to this fic or maybe an epilogue of some sort. [LOL WHUT] ...
by Kayo12
Sun Jul 22, 2012 10:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 7299

Re: Clarity: Part Six (Update 7/22)

Part Six Akira and Hanako eventually rejoin us, Hanako sounding a little shaken, but happy about the attention given to her from the other table. By the sounds of it, they really enjoyed her singing and were looking forward to hearing more. Akira assured them that the starlet didn't want to risk ov...
by Kayo12
Tue Jul 17, 2012 5:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 7299

Re: Clarity: Part Five (Update 7/17)

Part Five I'm not sure how much time we spend around the table, but it is enough that Akira comes and goes several times, bringing more drinks for us with each trip. At first it was just soda while she said she was drinking a beer, but soon enough she starts bringing back harder drinks for herself ...
by Kayo12
Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:31 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Well...That was awkward...
Replies: 44
Views: 3830

Re: Well...That was awkward...

As soon as Akira showed up with Hideaki, two things went through my mind;
#1 Akira is a lesbian, how typical
#2 Wait, she's too young to be Akira's girlfriend

When Hideaki was introduced and revealed he was Shizune's brother, two thoughts went through my mind;
#1 HOW!?
#2 Damn traps!
by Kayo12
Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Clarity: (Complete)
Replies: 54
Views: 7299

Re: Clarity: Part Four

Part Four The midday break passes by quickly and we don't even have the time to complete a single game of chess between lunch and preparing the tea. Hanako spends most of the lunch break excitedly telling us of her recent activities in the newspaper club. It seems that the Foundation recently upgra...
by Kayo12
Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:23 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 152500

Re: Just finished the game, quite depressed.

You have a case of the Feels, my friend. Don't worry, this is perfectly normal and will fade with time. A lot of people got Emi for their first route and it's a common occurrence. Lilly did the exact same thing to me. It's a sign that something had been missing in your life and now it's time for you...