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by Hoitash
Sat Feb 23, 2019 1:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!
Replies: 83
Views: 16619

Re: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!

All right, I’m finally catching up on this forum. Yes, it has been a while. No, I don’t know when I’ll finish catching up. You have until 2 PM tomorrow ;) Chapter 6: It ’ s proximity Also, two milk crates don’t seem to be enough for a desk, unless it’s really low to the floor. Four is much more pla...
by Hoitash
Mon Dec 03, 2018 9:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 575
Views: 207500

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)

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I cannot words right now. Wait:

Dammit Misha you bag of stupid!

There. I found words.

Good update. Bad Misha, no biscuit.
by Hoitash
Sat Sep 29, 2018 10:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/18/18)
Replies: 90
Views: 19201

Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 9/29/18)

“Watch out for walls, Lilly.”

As soon as the words leave Hiroyuki’s mouth, there’s a loud thud, followed by a near-simultaneous “I’m okay!”
My entire perception of Lilly has been altered by this one line.

Child Lilly is adorable, and so was this story :)
by Hoitash
Mon Sep 03, 2018 4:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 23256

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Mon Sep 03, 2018 3:52 pm
I know. Teddie's name in the original version is "Kuma". My point was that if she named her teddie "kuma" nobody would think it strange and ask about it so she wouldn't have any reason to extrapolate.
Fair enough. Besides, playing Persona 4 without Yukicakes is just silly.
by Hoitash
Mon Sep 03, 2018 9:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 23256

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update

Couple of remarks: - Nobody would ask why someone named a teddy bear "Kuma". Kuma means bear in Japanese. Well specifically she's naming it after Teddie from Persona 4, and Hanako isn't entirely sure how good Lynda's Japanese is. - How would a Japanese person like Hideaki know who Phil Hartman is? ...
by Hoitash
Fri Aug 31, 2018 6:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 23256

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update

Part V: Misha giggled as Shizune started marching. As the group headed up the hill, Misha sidled over next to Lynda. Lynda smiled at the shorter woman, and, after making sure they’d left the crowds of the festival, gently kissed the top of her head before saying in English, “Hey.” Misha smiled and r...
by Hoitash
Fri Aug 31, 2018 6:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 23256

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update

Part IV: Shizune signed her reply, and Lynda fished out her cell phone to check the time. Hisao, wearing a watch, beat her to it. “Then we have time to keep lookin’ around,” Akira stated, “Hmm… anyone got anything specific they wanna try?” As if in answer to her question, a nearby stall owner shoute...
by Hoitash
Fri Aug 31, 2018 6:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 23256

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update

Part III: Akira stepped aside so Hisao, smirking at his girlfriend’s playful banter, could take her place. While Hisao readied his throws, Lynda’s eyes started wandering to the food stalls. Tapping Misha’s shoulder, she signed if maybe they should get some food next, a query that earned her a flurry...
by Hoitash
Fri Aug 31, 2018 6:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 23256

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update

Part II: “H-hello, my n-name is Hanako Ikezawa. It is a p-pleasure to m-meet you.” Lynda, who thanks to an extended family full of war veterans didn’t mind the woman’s clear burn scars, smiled and returned the bow, “Hello. I’m Lynda Long. Please just call me Lynda, and nice to meet you, too –love th...
by Hoitash
Fri Aug 31, 2018 6:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 23256

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update

I think I might have some sort of disease. Is fanfictionitis a thing? I think it’s a thing. Welp, even if it’s just me, Mirage, and Silentcook, long live yuri! Also enjoy the debut of a KS character in this series! Yeah I know it’s really late. I regret nothing! Ilya, PUSH. THE. BUTTON! USM Summer S...
by Hoitash
Mon Aug 06, 2018 8:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191111 Two Old & Colourful Pieces)
Replies: 1806
Views: 250525

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180716 Some One-Shots)

Overkill is underrated. Shopping Trip- Must... give... hug.... I liked how this story showed the Lilly-Hana dynamic and how it showed Hanako herself. To me, it also shows how much she needs a another friend, not to go with her on the trip or anything, but... I dunno, so she knows she has someone els...
by Hoitash
Sun Jul 15, 2018 8:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yuuko Pseudo-route: Can You Read Me?
Replies: 14
Views: 3233

Re: Yuuko Pseudo-route: Can You Read Me?

So, first off, congrats on breaking new ground! Your revelation on the Yuuko route is Indigenous American mushroom spirit journey worthy, and I applaud you for it! Second, I love your super sarcastic rendition of Hisao. He is the Deadpan Snarker we deserve. I hope you complete this and look forward ...
by Hoitash
Fri Jun 22, 2018 6:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Summer Update!
Replies: 197
Views: 39247

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Summer Update!

save me hundreds of dollars a year? Does he send his car to the states to have it fixed? ...This is what happens when I'm out of practice, apparently. Fixed. “are you sure your okay helping us with this?” You're Also fixed. Hanako is overreacting a bit here, but hey, it's one of your stories, so pa...
by Hoitash
Thu Jun 21, 2018 7:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Summer Update!
Replies: 197
Views: 39247

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Summer Update!

Part III: Quelling the foreboding sensation building in the pit of my stomach, I grabbed the pruning shears and left the garage, my fellow exterminators right behind me. “Soon-hee,” I said, “are you sure you're okay helping us with this?” “I am,” she said, “they’re just bugs, after all. Well, insect...
by Hoitash
Thu Jun 21, 2018 7:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Summer Update!
Replies: 197
Views: 39247

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Summer Update!

Part II: One of the benefits of being a science teacher is I know how to make things. For example, you take a simple squirt bottle, make a few adjustments, fill the thing with bleach, and you have bug spray. Granted, we had actual bug spray, but that was no fun, and I needed something to distract me...