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by nemz
Mon Apr 13, 2015 11:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin's Dream
Replies: 8
Views: 2480

Re: Rin's Dream

Not bad for a first attempt. A little cliche maybe at times, a few mistakes, but a decent start.
by nemz
Thu Apr 02, 2015 6:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 33845

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Glad I found this fic, it's pretty cute!
by nemz
Thu Feb 26, 2015 3:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*
Replies: 124
Views: 41901

Re: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*

Hmm... drama is afoot! That's quite an odd circumstance though... either Shizune really is a bad ghost and Misha is also being manipulated, or else shouldn't she be well aware of what has happened and that Shizune can't seem to get Hisao's attention anymore? I'm suprised she hasn't said something ab...
by nemz
Wed Jan 28, 2015 5:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)
Replies: 102
Views: 150096

Re: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)

That was pretty cool. The endings felt a little forced in both cases but it was a fun journey getting there.
by nemz
Mon Jan 05, 2015 10:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*
Replies: 124
Views: 41901

Re: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 01/01/2015*

Mirage_GSM wrote:I'm waiting to see just how close you're going to stick to the anime in chapter XIII.
Er... stick to what anime? Is this a fusion with some other work I don't recognize?
by nemz
Thu Sep 04, 2014 5:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*
Replies: 124
Views: 41901

Re: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 09/04/14*

Nope, I refuse to believe such lies about Shizune. Must be some other spirit that is trying to piggyback Hisao's connection to Shizune to do it's wicked deeds. Surely that notebook will solve the case!
by nemz
Thu Aug 07, 2014 2:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*
Replies: 124
Views: 41901

Re: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED* 8/7/14

Yay!

Hmm... what if there are actually 2 of her? Could work like Wraith:The Oblivion RPG from back in the day, with a self-destructive 'shadow' personality actively trying to undermine everything keeping her from moving on.
by nemz
Tue Jun 10, 2014 8:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 294336

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 43 up 6/

Well, this was a pleasant surprise. A bit hard to follow (especially the first few paragraphs), but after a little while it just clicks and it reads smooth as anything, like reading Shakespear and having to make an effort to stop thinking like that after you finish. :lol:
by nemz
Tue Jun 10, 2014 3:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After The Dream—MAIN INDEX (Rika update 20190704)
Replies: 155
Views: 77626

Re: After the Dream—Main Index (upd 20140610)

There's a reason Lilly is last in my preference list. Different strokes for different folks I guess. The biggest thing that just kills it for me is that pretty much nobody every moves on. It's quite rare for someone to end up marrying a high school sweetheart, but for all the rest of the girls to al...
by nemz
Tue Jun 10, 2014 1:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After The Dream—MAIN INDEX (Rika update 20190704)
Replies: 155
Views: 77626

Re: After the Dream—Main Index (upd 20140610)

Read some of this... 'mosaic'? It's an interesting idea structure-wise, but the plot itself is a total letdown. Sorry, but this is soap-opera levels of melodrama and I just can't get into it.
by nemz
Tue Jun 10, 2014 1:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki's First Time
Replies: 28
Views: 5424

Re: Miki's First Time

Amusing, but awkward as hell. Seems just right. :lol:
by nemz
Sun Apr 13, 2014 4:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*
Replies: 124
Views: 41901

Re: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED*

Yay! I don't have a whole lot to say about this one... lots of setup, not much actual happening... but it's great that you're writting again.
by nemz
Thu Feb 13, 2014 3:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Hisao's Gift (a short story)
Replies: 29
Views: 10021

Re: Rin: Hisao's Gift (a short story)

Huh, must have missed this one earlier. Sad as it is, this one is a much stronger effort.
by nemz
Thu Feb 13, 2014 12:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Clearer Than Words
Replies: 13
Views: 4582

Re: Rin: Clearer Than Words

Not bad. a little meandering at the start, and nothing too revolutionary, but it gets the job done.
by nemz
Wed Feb 12, 2014 8:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 294336

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch 33 added 2/3/

Damn it Hisao, this is not how harem comedy works. Get it together man. :mrgreen: