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by nemz
Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 296
Views: 176303

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Part 2 Is Now Up

Yes, yes! Let the hate flow through you! Show no mercy! Do not hesitate! And your transformation to the dark side will be complete! Nah... not hate, just righteous fury. If it was full-blown hate I'd be suggesting he should have finished the roof conversation by telling her to jump and/or spreading...
by nemz
Fri Apr 13, 2012 6:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 449
Views: 369644

Re: Rika Story - updated 4/13/2012 (mature content)

I'm honestly not sure I understand how that could constitute cheating. From the mention of a grading key this is probably a standardized test with the lead/bubble sheets for electronic grading, but surely the notes he was studying didn't include just a list of answers in sequence. How is it possible...
by nemz
Fri Apr 13, 2012 4:19 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Kenji and Hisao
Replies: 19
Views: 8782

Re: Kenji and Hisao

Hmm... maybe? It really is a shame that Hisao has no social life at all outside of being the Master of Romance... a few more guys to shoot the shit with from time to time would have been very welcome. That said, I'd hang out with Kenji all the time if only because he's a guy who can get contraband. ...
by nemz
Fri Apr 13, 2012 1:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 296
Views: 176303

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Part 2 Is Now Up

A breach of trust on that scale simply cannot be repaired, particularly when it's coupled with the degree of self-importance and general contempt she displays when explaining it to him THIS. It's beyond obvious she still has no respect for him and is just using him for pity points to cheer herself ...
by nemz
Thu Apr 12, 2012 6:44 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Morning After ??
Replies: 37
Views: 13171

Re: Morning After ??

Mirrormn wrote:Hanako would the best for cuddling.
Rin would be the best for entertaining post-coital conversation.
Those are my two choices.
This man speaks the truth.
by nemz
Thu Apr 12, 2012 6:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Agoraphobia [Mutou]
Replies: 95
Views: 33346

Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou] [Updated 4/12]

While I'm really enjoying the life you're giving Mutou, I can't help but feel that the plotline is getting somewhat unfocused. I want to believe there's a reason for these diversions, but I'm not sure about that anymore.
by nemz
Thu Apr 12, 2012 6:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 296
Views: 176303

Re: Mendacium

Of course, Hanako goes on telling the story as if it's all her fault, but I guess its' due to her rather naive approach to relationships that she thinks that what happened was due to her own choices. I think you need to read more closely... it's been going on for months, dude. It was definately her...
by nemz
Thu Apr 12, 2012 5:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 739078

Re: Who Loves Me? (Suzu)

I'm a normal person, who loses consciousness at random intervals, and plays battleship with the grim reaper. Hmm. Nope, that just isn't right. Should probably one of these two, depending on the tone you're trying to set: I'm a normal person who loses consciousness at random intervals and plays batt...
by nemz
Wed Apr 11, 2012 10:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 296
Views: 176303

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Part 2 Is Now Up

Wow. Just... wow. I haven't the slightest idea how Hisao can stand to even look at her at this point, much less ask her to rub his nose in some other asshole's careless droppings. Call Lilly and tell the school Counselor so she's not left completely alone, then get straight fucking sauced with Kenji...
by nemz
Wed Apr 11, 2012 2:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 296
Views: 176303

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Well that's a hell of a start. Not sure what I think of it so far, but it's going to be memorable regardless.
by nemz
Tue Apr 10, 2012 11:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Classroom game
Replies: 17
Views: 11430

Re: Classroom game

Oh, very nice indeed. It's quite refreshing to see Hisao interacting with guys for a change, even if they are all ubernerds. Makes a lot of sense in a Miki route that more time is spent with the dudes.

Why is Kenji with them, though? Shouldn't he be with the guys in his own class?
by nemz
Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Surprise Visitor
Replies: 12
Views: 9195

Re: Surprise Visitor

Well that was interesting. So much delicious awkwardness.
by nemz
Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
Replies: 156
Views: 80577

Re: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)

Early in the story it's implied Hanako spends much of her time alone on various trips when school is out, giving Hisao and Lilly that space you mentioned. In addition, she's the one who steps forward to try and repair a situation which she (wrongly) believes is her fault. Sure, and those are good p...
by nemz
Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Perfection (Rin x Nomiya, Adult Rated)
Replies: 6
Views: 5174

Re: Perfection (Rin x Nomiya, Adult Rated)

Well, that was at least a step above what I was expecting. Still disturbing of course, but in a way that makes you feel a bit 'cultured' for having read it rather than needing a wire brush scrubbing.
by nemz
Mon Apr 09, 2012 5:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)
Replies: 156
Views: 80577

Re: Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)

*Shrug* Three best friends all work at the same place and live in the same tiny town. Makes sense to me. But they aren't 3 best friends, they're a young horny married couple that probably need their space and a 3rd wheel friend whose entire route was showing that she wants and needs to be treated a...