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Rin - A pair of those running shoes that have individual toes so she can protect her feet properly when she's out and about on nature walks or on rainy/snowy days without having to give up all use of them as hands. I'd make sure it's a pair that's fastened with velcro as well so she'd have no troubl...

With the emphasis you are putting on Iwanako's scars, I get the felling that somehow Hannako is, in fact, the freed/escaped Iwanako. I've been thinking that as well, and this latest chapter comes close to confirming it. I'm also starting to suspect that Death will eventually end up splitting his ti...

“A-and maybe he won't talk to me any more, anyway. Maybe he has found someone even more broken than me to fix.” OUCH. That's an awful lot of hate to put in two sentences. It really is a nice day. If only Hanako could see it, too. This, however, is just wonderful. ...and what rumors might those be, ...

BTW, this is the sort of thing I was talking about earlier:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yeRTxWCI ... ure=relmfu

Eh, it's not bad at all, it just isn't anything interesting. Sure Hisao and Hanako are having a grand old time but I'm left wondering when something is going to happen. Now don't get me wrong, slice-of-life is perfectly fine, but I wish the individual scenes had a bit more punch to them. Something n...

Death itself has the hots for Hisao... yet wants him to live. Very interesting.

The more important question is why he feels the need to keep lying about the relationship. Someone feels a bit guilty...

Oh, I suspect music could be explained fairly well in terms of color and motion. Different colors for different instruments, less or more saturated for volume, just little flickers of light dancing along the sheet music at an appropriate pace. The true soul of music is in understanding patterns, whe...

This is good? It doesn't feel too long or redundant? As a slice of life piece it is quite good. A bit long perhaps, but that just furthered the impression of how carefully and intently Lilly has to navigate through the world only to reveal a truely charming moment. It does raise the question though...

No, that's actually pretty much how I see him, too. I put his change in characterisation down to him "channeling" the girl Yes, that's a VERY Hisao thing to do. Some people are just like that, personality sponges soaking up whatever happens around them rather than having a clear sense of ...

Yeah, I'm struggling with voice. I don't feel Hisao's PoV sounds like it. I've actually written that yesterday, but it didn't work at all, so I went over it again today. I think part of the reason I struggle with voice in this one is that it's fan fiction: it feels... strange to write characters th...

Well, that is indeed the sort of vibe I was expecting. My one complaint, and it is minor, is that while your written voice seems perfect for She Of Many Names, it doesn't seem to fit correctly within the headspace of others and thus its comes across as a bit jarring. It's as if the mystery girl is t...

will probably do again This. Ugh. What is this crap? It's come up more than once, and frankly I'm not understanding what the basis of it is. The basis of it is the same basis that led to her cheating in the first place, because it still hasn't been addressed in any way. He doesn't satisfy her needs...

That was just excellent. Really. Bravo, good sir/madam. I look forward to a wonderful year of reading if this is just the first taste.

No, the truth isn't enough when the truth is horrible, and it certainly matters WHY she's being truthful. In this case it's clearly NOT because she feels bad about what she did because if not for the rape and disappearance of her other man (and I still think the latter of those issues is more hurtfu...