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Meh. Immediately obvious troll fic and serves no other purpose. 0/10

...deep afterlife thing? I'm not seeing anything deep, just granny porn and wishful thinking.

This one is unfortunately not one of them despite the slip to Agoraphobia I put in. To be honest I really wish you'd stop doing that. Those little connections are distracting at worst, pointless at best. It just occured to me that we should all know exactly what death looks like. Rin helpfully pain...

Chaotic neutral is looking more chaotic evil here, even with the rationalizations.

She might have kept meeting Tenshi afterwards because, in her insecurities, she felt "obliged" and may have also thought he really felt something for her rather than seeing her as little more than a sex toy. It may have started out like that, but I don't doubt she legitimately fell for th...

Some cute moments... some Lilly shenanigans that honestly would have made me a bit annoyed... but ultimately it feels flat, like a halfhearted sigh. Also I just don't buy Kenji in this role at all. Not one word about feminists, even when there's a date involved? Dating leads to slave marriage and cr...

I had a feeling that was the story here, yep. Guess I was wrong about death being someone else in disguise as well though, so that's a surprise. That said, the way you're treating Rin here... it's a strong scene, but you're still an asshole for writing it. And that line about Yamaku not being better...

Heh. I think frog meant to ask "what's anal like?", to which the appropriate reply is "ask your mother".

That looks like a much more believable comparison, yes.

Line count seems deceptive to me... how long are the lines? Are you counting one individual text dump as a line even when it's one of Rin's whole-screen rambles or Shizune's frequent "..." replies? Emi and Hanako's routes certainly felt significantly shorter to me than those of Lilly, Shiz...

...dafuk? For a moment I was reminded of the "Animatrix" short about the runner who breaks out of the matrix without assistance through physical ability and determination alone and suspected something similar was up, but now I'm just confused.

Interested in seeing more though, definately.

Rin's my favorite overall, but putting Shizune and Emi together and making the evening into a completion between them with me as judge would be worth the eventual heart attack.

I got Shizune the first time, apparently by just trying not to be a dick to the people who'd helped me the most thus far (though it helped that I liked her feisty personality). After that I chose the opposite on every question and this led me to triggering Emi (meh with a few chuckles). It was easy ...

Yeah it's a fap-fic, but it's a good fap-fic, and that's something worth noting. The music box was an especially nice touch.

Yeah, it did come across as completely unrealistic because of the speed of these emotional breakthroughs, the stilted dialog, and above all the fact that Hisao is just way too dense to figure all this out on his own.