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by DaGarver
Tue Aug 20, 2013 11:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: One Wish (Hanako, post neutral) [Updated, 10/8]
Replies: 30
Views: 16604

Re: One Wish (Hanako, post neutral) [Updated, 10/8]

;-; I want to read it, but a Hanako fanfic without Lilly is like.. cereal without milk... sure you CAN have it but... is it really as enjoyable..? Hanako, Lilly, Akira are like the magic 3 of the Hanako existence ;-;.. Bit too depressed to read another sad story this weekend, I may try to get back ...
by DaGarver
Fri Jun 07, 2013 7:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]
Replies: 68
Views: 14349

Re: Miki Psuedo Route [New work, added 6/5/13]

I had my doubts about another Miki route, but it seems like you're doing just swelly. It's not my favorite Meadows-flavoured Miki, but I'm willing to wait (cough cough cough). Let the guy have his time in the sun. It's bad enough living in another writer's shadow just because you came along afterwa...
by DaGarver
Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Familiar (Hanako) (Rough draft, dead until further notice)
Replies: 9
Views: 1517

Re: Familiar (Hanako) (Rough draft, dead until further notic

...I wouldn't recommend writing something purely because someone else wants you to. You have to want it, or else it becomes a chore, and won't be as good nor have the same sentimentality. Perhaps you need a break from writing this sorta stuff. Write something non-Hanako, or if KS in general is grat...
by DaGarver
Fri Feb 22, 2013 3:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
Replies: 169
Views: 65591

Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)

Actually, if I may: "Hi, I'm Misha~!" the pink-haired girl greeted loudly as she sat at her desk chewing a pencil into oblivion. The volume level left a shrill echo in my ears, but I can forgive that coming from someone so adorably innocent-looking. The reuse of words like 'said' can reduce the qua...
by DaGarver
Thu Feb 21, 2013 1:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 12/25)
Replies: 27
Views: 11721

Re: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 12/25)

This is deadfic. I haven't worked on this in two months and don't plan on continuing. It's been a hard decision, and I've had to wrestle with it for a few weeks. But I just don't feel the inspiration to write for it anymore, nor for anything KS-related. I have other ideas, I have a busy life, and I ...
by DaGarver
Tue Jan 29, 2013 2:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Nothing But a Nightmare [Iwanako]
Replies: 2
Views: 2065

Nothing But a Nightmare [Iwanako]

Wrote this while bored in class one day. Figured I should share with the forums. I definitely could've made it longer, but it feels right where it is. Nothing But a Nightmare pastebin: http://pastebin.com/ggEqP4Qd Streams of color fall around me. As the hues flow and fade, they are replaced with wa...
by DaGarver
Tue Dec 25, 2012 6:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 12/25)
Replies: 27
Views: 11721

Re: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 11/11)

There's actually no Miki in this one. Act 2-3: Truancy pastebin: http://pastebin.com/WAkCSjDr The sun creeps into my room, rays of light peeking their way through my open curtains. I crawl out of bed, dragging my feet across the carpet floor and rubbing the sleep out of my eyes. Clenching one of th...
by DaGarver
Tue Dec 25, 2012 6:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 12/25)
Replies: 27
Views: 11721

Re: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 11/11)

Holy crap it's been over a month. Have two scenes to make up for it. Act 2-2: Self-Discovery pastebin: http://pastebin.com/LuHgcTHq The rest of the day passes in tranquility, undisturbed by the ramblings of the Student Council, or any other students, for that matter. Lunch went about as I expected:...
by DaGarver
Wed Nov 28, 2012 2:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DaGarver's Shizune One-Shot Collection (Updated 11/28)
Replies: 25
Views: 7348

Re: DaGarver's Shizune One-Shot Collection (Updated 9/27)

Been a while since I wrote my favorite girl. A bit of pre-history, including a double feature with Emi! Short, kinda rushed for a KSG contest. But I like how it turned out. A Master Stroke pastebin: http://pastebin.com/VA0ewtE3 Shizune twirled a pen between her fingers, caught in the middle of a th...
by DaGarver
Mon Nov 12, 2012 12:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 12/25)
Replies: 27
Views: 11721

Re: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 10/26)

Update. Ignore the fact that it's been almost a whole month. Act 2-1: Friends and Perspective pastebin: http://pastebin.com/djCnkkNr Have I ever mentioned how much I hate Mondays? The fact that I'm not a morning person combined with my tendency to sleep in on the previous day makes for a very... su...
by DaGarver
Fri Oct 26, 2012 10:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 12/25)
Replies: 27
Views: 11721

Re: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 10/25)

Act 1-E: Fire in the Sky pastebin: http://pastebin.com/vr6xkCcJ My alarm clock blares at me to wake up: 11:30am. A swift fist to the snooze button silences it, and I roll over on my mattress to head back to sleep. Ever my mortal enemy, the sun protests, creeping into my room through slightly opened...
by DaGarver
Fri Oct 26, 2012 1:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 12/25)
Replies: 27
Views: 11721

Re: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 10/25)

I maintain my rigid stance. “Yamaku Academy, ma'am!” I emphasize the change in gender for my address. “Finest school for the physically disabled this side of the Pacific, ma'am!” ... Thinking about how this dialogue would sound in Japanese with all the honorifics cracked me up :lol: Good story so f...
by DaGarver
Thu Oct 25, 2012 12:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 12/25)
Replies: 27
Views: 11721

Re: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (through Act 1-C)

Act 1-D: Old and New pastebin: http://pastebin.com/beB2fmu1 Lunch and the subsequent walk back to campus is uneventful. We talk about people-watching more, we go over the basic introductory questions: hobbies, interests, current outlook on life.... Her reaction to my reading hobby was about what I ...
by DaGarver
Thu Oct 25, 2012 12:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 12/25)
Replies: 27
Views: 11721

Re: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route

I like how you worked Rika into the story; it's a neat twist that works well. You're take on Mika is cute and quirky. I knew I was in trouble when I figured out I liked tomboys :) I'm trying to take her in a different direction than Scissorlips does. I want to make her my character, given that she ...
by DaGarver
Tue Oct 23, 2012 10:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route (updated 12/25)
Replies: 27
Views: 11721

Re: DaGarver's Miki Pseudo-Route

Act 1-C: Lunch Break! pastebin: http://pastebin.com/MveCC4FW Class passes quickly. Mutou seems as eager to have the day finished as anyone else, so he speeds through most of the details, only covering bare-boned concepts and abstract ideas. It's a bit disorienting at first, but I manage to keep up ...