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by Roamin12
Mon Nov 12, 2012 12:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Confinement (Miki's Story) [10/30]
Replies: 55
Views: 16047

Re: Confinement (Miki's Story) [10/30]

My favourite chapter so far, and your Miki is the only dark one I have seen, (Other than the one in one of Doomish's stories) and I can appreciate that. Glad to see the story is still alive!
by Roamin12
Sun Oct 28, 2012 3:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 150069

Re: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route

Thank you so much finally getting around to finishing this, I had lost nearly all hope of this getting a conclusion, and then I see the update on the fanfiction board, I literally let out a cheer...at 5 in the morning when I saw this. I think the ending was a bit too rushed, and that Rika seemed to ...
by Roamin12
Sun Oct 28, 2012 2:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Radioactive (or Katawa: Call of Yamaku) (or something)
Replies: 16
Views: 2790

Re: Radioactive (or Katawa: Call of Yamaku) (or something)

The world in this story is just as bleak, if not even more so, than the worlds portrayed in The Walking Dead and Darker Than Black, but like both series, you managed to keep some warmth in it, even though there wasn't that much, and it was also extremely well-written, kudos on this awesome story.
by Roamin12
Sun Oct 28, 2012 1:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: One (Oneshot)
Replies: 1
Views: 1629

Re: One (Oneshot)

Loved it, maybe it's because I am a huge Metallica fan and made the connection to "One" in the first sentence, but this is one of my favourite fan fics I've read in the past few months. And Kenji being in it, even though he only had one line, was awesome.
by Roamin12
Sun Oct 28, 2012 1:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Titanium (a Miki story)
Replies: 10
Views: 3723

Re: Titanium (a Miki story)

This was a fun read it was, interesting, well written, and action packed. And the fact that I was listening to the Deus Ex: HR soundtrack during this made this all that much better, thank you for writing this!
by Roamin12
Sun Oct 28, 2012 1:35 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Time to Duel with Katawa Shoujo
Replies: 56
Views: 36092

Re: Time to Duel with Katawa Shoujo

Sorry for digging this back up, but I stumbled across this and was tempted to try my hand at it, so I made a few, let me know what you think. http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Hisao%20Bravo&cardtype=Spell&subtype=normal&attribute=Light&level=1&magictraptype=Continuous&rarity...
by Roamin12
Wed Sep 05, 2012 8:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Rise Again (Revised 10-4-12) WIP
Replies: 28
Views: 3318

Re: To Rise Again (Update 9/3/12)

I liked it a bit more as a one-shot, but feel free to continue.
I personally think that negative criticism is just as good as positive, and constructive is the best, and if you are going to complain about criticism at all, you shouldn't be a writer, but that's just my view.
by Roamin12
Sun Aug 19, 2012 9:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Foreigner
Replies: 54
Views: 6573

Re: The Foreigner

An excercise in "How many metaphors can I cram into one chapter?" I blame Literature Composition class. And another case of "That guy needs to see a psychiatrist." I said I changed more than I intended to, but I had no intentions of changing that, and pretty much every character in KS (other than a...
by Roamin12
Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Foreigner
Replies: 54
Views: 6573

Re: The Foreigner

Once again, I am sorry for the long delay, I was extremely busy during the summer. Even when summer ended, school decided to destroy my free time with homework and projects. A bunch of house renovations, trying to find a new house to move to, and other things has kept me from writing. Even when I fi...
by Roamin12
Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 372270

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/16)

It was really good timing when The End by My Chemical Romance started playing on my ipod when Hisao got his heart attack.
Really good, and depressing chapter.
by Roamin12
Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Zombie Apocolypse
Replies: 23
Views: 3113

Re: Zombie Apocolypse

Hisao isn't going to last long in an apocalypse with that heart condition of his.
OtakuNinja wrote:Reminded me a bit of HOTD... Or maybe all high school apocalypses start that way? ^^'
Suggestion:Jigoro and Kenji team up and save the world :D
That's what I was thinking.
by Roamin12
Wed Aug 15, 2012 6:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Downward Spiral [Mutou] [Chapter 1: 8/14]
Replies: 14
Views: 2062

Re: Downward Spiral [Mutou] [Chapter 1: 8/14]

I personally am really enjoying this so-far, it is well-written and is a very interesting premise. Random observation, when I saw the title of the story (Downward Spiral) I immediately thought of the Nine Inch Nails album also named that, and when I saw the prologue title (The Fall) I thought it sai...
by Roamin12
Tue Aug 14, 2012 9:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 372270

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

I think you guys are nitpicking a tad much remember that in fiction, characters say, do, and are put in situations because the author intend them to it's silly to say, why didn't x character tell y character this or that to clear up a misunderstanding - the author intends there to be that misunders...
by Roamin12
Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Route (updated 7/17)
Replies: 145
Views: 42695

Re: Miki Route (updated 7/17)

I can't believe I never realized this got updated.
I liked the last two chapters, and the fact that your Miki is unique enough to separate her from the other Miki's but remains close enough to the premise that made us all love Miki in the first place.
by Roamin12
Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao Plays Slender
Replies: 1
Views: 1509

Hisao Plays Slender

I was writing the next chapter for The Foreigner earlier, and this idea randomly popped up, I couldn't get it out of my head so here you go. Hisao plays Slender The room is almost pitch black, the only thing illuminating the space is a digital clock reading 01:12 A.M. and casting a faint, orange lig...