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by Hacksorus
Wed Sep 16, 2020 2:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/9/2020)
Replies: 34
Views: 5386

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/9/2020)

“Greetings, my name is Nanako Iwai, but please call me Iwanako.” Wait, that's illegal. Can you do that? :lol: Anyway, this remains my favorite Rin fic. I enjoyed the take on Hisao's friends and family for sure. That's quite the cliffhanger you left us on. Looking forward to the continuation, whenev...
by Hacksorus
Sun Sep 13, 2020 1:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 43
Views: 2407

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

Finally got around to checking this one out. I'm really enjoying it so far! This is probably one of my favorite implementations of OCs on this forum, her presence in the world and interactions with existing characters feels natural and engaging. I like how you're handling Hisao's struggles as well. ...
by Hacksorus
Sun Sep 13, 2020 1:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 303958

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)

I.. uh.. was in elementary school when this one was written.. oh boy.. Wait. This was supposed to be a discussion, not an existential crisis. Back on topic then. As was inevitable, these characters feel so far removed from how I know them that it's probably better to just think of them as completely...
by Hacksorus
Fri Sep 04, 2020 4:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story
Replies: 20
Views: 1560

Re: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story

I'm far from an expert when it comes to scenes like this, but I definitely think it's a good addition. It does feel a bit awkward and rushed; perhaps a bit like going through the motions to reach the end? But maybe it's an inevitable kind of awkwardness for this scene, as you've said. In any case, I...
by Hacksorus
Fri Sep 04, 2020 3:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Hostess to Lavender (Hanako Bad End Continuation)
Replies: 14
Views: 708

Re: A Hostess to Lavender (Hanako Bad End Continuation)

Nice update! Alcohol really can bring out new sides from people, and I like how it interacted with and brought out some of the lingering insecurities and anger she's been bottling up along with the newfound confidence.
by Hacksorus
Fri Aug 28, 2020 3:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 303958

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200824 Zade Wither)

Me : "Hey, looks like everyone's having a fun conversation about this one. Let's join in!" * sees the entire first part is condensed into a single large paragraph * Me : "Oh no" ...Oh boy. Well this lunch is going to be interesting. I can only assume that this is why the story stopped where it did....
by Hacksorus
Fri Aug 28, 2020 2:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Hostess to Lavender (Hanako Bad End Continuation)
Replies: 14
Views: 708

Re: A Hostess to Lavender (Hanako Bad End Continuation)

I think this is a good start! Nothing wrong at all with taking time to build up to the main premise. After all, with an idea as outlandish as Hanako working in a job like that, I think this much buildup was necessary to make it believable. I like how you're not relying too much on the source materia...
by Hacksorus
Mon Aug 17, 2020 2:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/8/20)
Replies: 9
Views: 1414

Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/8/20)

I like it! Can't really think of much else to say at the moment. If you keep writing it, I'll keep reading it.
by Hacksorus
Sat Aug 15, 2020 1:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Golden Room
Replies: 55
Views: 13488

Re: Golden Room

Thanks for posting what you had, I hope it gave you the closure you were looking for. I just read it for the first time, I enjoyed it. It's interesting how you hit such similar beats to the "Hisao showing his scar to Hanako" scene that ended up being in the final release. I gotta say though, those n...
by Hacksorus
Sat Aug 15, 2020 12:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story
Replies: 20
Views: 1560

Re: Rebound - A Lilly NE Epilogue / Iwanako Story

This one deserves a lot more attention, I guess the usual critics have gone astray for a bit. I really did like it; this stands a good chance of being my favorite Iwanako-focused story if you keep up the good work and keep working on your own weaknesses. And if you finish it. (rip dewelar) As for co...
by Hacksorus
Tue Aug 04, 2020 2:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 303958

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200803 Before Yamaku)

Yeah, this one was kinda all over the place. Felt like maybe the author had an idea of a sequence of events they wanted to write about, but for the pacing and whose perspective it's being told from and what mood they're going for, they were just kind of winging it. I would have imagined the climax o...
by Hacksorus
Fri Jul 24, 2020 4:39 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Rest in peace, Raide
Replies: 10
Views: 999

Re: Rest in peace, Raide

I'm in the same boat here. I never knew him in any capacity, but I felt like I should say something. When I hear of a celebrity dying, it doesn't really affect me much- if I constantly mourn the deaths of people I don't know, there won't be much time left for me to be happy. But having been so deepl...
by Hacksorus
Thu Jul 16, 2020 3:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 303958

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200713 Scarred Angel)

To be honest I couldn't really bring myself to read enough of this to bother commenting on it. But I like talking about words, so my time has come. It's definitely the case that most of the contexts in which I hear the word "lewd" are anime-related, but it's definitely used elsewhere on occasion. It...
by Hacksorus
Mon Jul 06, 2020 2:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200907 Another Omake Scene)
Replies: 1874
Views: 303958

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200629 Queens of the Land)

I also quite liked this one. I joined the forums only after KS released, so seeing these "beta" characters is always an interesting, if strange, experience. The Lilly we know today remains my preferred iteration of her though- she just has an irreplacable spot in my heart by now. Even so, I think th...
by Hacksorus
Sun Apr 19, 2020 3:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/9/2020)
Replies: 34
Views: 5386

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/4/2020)

“Mm...then Dad is going to hate you,” Rin said with such certainty that it bordered on terrifying. “You spoiled me for marriage, then dated me, then spoiled me again. So he’ll probably hate you three times, like someone who hates fish having to eat it for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. I’ve never se...