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by Triscuitable
Wed May 28, 2014 11:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]

And with that, my last reason to come by the forums has concluded. It's been real, guys. See y'all around.

P.S., good work Thanatos.
by Triscuitable
Sat May 24, 2014 9:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Nor have I ever forgotten the day that you refused to leave for Scotland with your mother and I.
...with your mother and me.
You've got to let it go dude. The "blank and I" versus "blank and me" usage is so minor that it's not considered a grammatical error by even the International Baccalaureate.
by Triscuitable
Fri May 16, 2014 11:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/11]

Also, after watching both versions of Fullmetal Alchemist completely, I now can't get the idea that Mr. Satou looks like Van Hohenheim with red eyes out of my brain. That's... pretty close. Just cut off the beard and give him black hair and you're good to go. Although, I don't imagine him that "stu...
by Triscuitable
Wed May 14, 2014 7:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/11]

Glorious, as always. Cannot wait until the next chapter. Also, after watching both versions of Fullmetal Alchemist completely, I now can't get the idea that Mr. Satou looks like Van Hohenheim with red eyes out of my brain. *cough* Never watched or read FMA. Only ever heard of it. This guy is the ex...
by Triscuitable
Mon May 12, 2014 7:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/12]

that single annoying lock of hair Hisao and Saber should hook up. Their ahoges would finally find true love. I've spent this entire time waiting for my inevitable 'this is why you suck' speech, Thanatos reads TvTropes. Hanako nods bows her head, You can go with "nods", "bows", or for that extra Han...
by Triscuitable
Tue May 06, 2014 1:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/12]

Heads up, this coming chapter is almost 15,000 words. I might have to release it in two parts because it's so gigantic. It's a necessary evil, though, because there's just so much stuff to cover before getting into the ending. I don't want to leave any threads loose, and god knows there are PLENTY ...
by Triscuitable
Sun May 04, 2014 12:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/12]

A small question that I have is why isn't Mr. Satou angry that Akira is dating a middle-class high school boy? He seems to want to control every aspect of her life and I know that he said he didn't care about her love life in the most recent chapter but I feel like there should be a stronger reacti...
by Triscuitable
Tue Apr 15, 2014 7:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/12]

Mirage_GSM wrote:I don't think that was supposed to be the reason for Mr. Satou's behaviour then :lol:
I'm just trying to fill in the holes. It's what I do.

So far, the only plot hole I couldn't fill was the entirety of Assassin's Creed III. :wink:
by Triscuitable
Tue Apr 15, 2014 12:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/12]

Well, when he first appeared he seemed to be lacking any social skills at all. He did not even react when spoken to and ignored Akira and Hisao both. It hasn't been that bad ever since then. When you first arrive from a distant country, province, or state, do you feel like immediately conversing wi...
by Triscuitable
Sun Apr 13, 2014 4:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/12]

Quite possibly the first time in recent memory that the antagonist and foil have been one and the same. Very interesting dynamic with the character.
by Triscuitable
Mon Mar 17, 2014 5:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/6]

Somehow I went two weeks without checking. Or I forgot that I hadn't read the 3/6 update. Or maybe it's the fact that I was on a Battlefield 4 binge that rapidly blended into Titanfall. Reading now. Then back to Titanfall. Nice chapter. I can't wait to for the meeting and the birthday, I keep gettin...
by Triscuitable
Mon Dec 30, 2013 12:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 12/25]

... considering how distanced Akira and her father are, Tatsuo mighta been afraid it would just upset Akira more. Conidering the lack of empathy he's shown in the story I doubt that would have been a factor. He certainly would have entered that argument to defend himself in the final confrontation....
by Triscuitable
Mon Dec 23, 2013 5:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/20]

Steinherz wrote:
Triscuitable wrote: You're an actual user? I've been confused for so long!
Eh, uh, I.
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Because being rude always helps in maintaining a healthy atmosphere.
by Triscuitable
Mon Dec 23, 2013 12:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/20]

By the way, Guest Poster, I love you. You always ask the difficult questions and point out the stuff no one else does. Probably by accident half the time. :lol: I have my own interpretation of Lilly's family and the stuff about the company is stuff I looked up and speculated on myself in the past, ...
by Triscuitable
Wed Nov 20, 2013 9:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 361321

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/20]

she doesn’t want to be in the car when him and Akira start going at it. "he and Akira" Adjusts horn-rimmed glasses Actually, there are several ways he could have phrased that. His original statement is in proper form, as is your correction of "he and Akira." Other replacements that could be used ar...