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by Scissorlips
Sat Mar 09, 2013 8:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 379396

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)

Yes, I got that "he" referred to Kenji, but I wasn't expecting Kenji to tell Hisao what book to show to his girlfriend, so I attributed the direct speech to Hisao. Kenji "don't go to the festival" Setou? Who just deduced that the book was a feminist training manual? Ok. I'll probably find more typo...
by Scissorlips
Fri Mar 08, 2013 5:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 379396

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)

Too many replies to quote them all, even for me. I've avoided responding in this thread for a little while, simply because I don't really know the right words to say. But please just let me make it clear that I am incredibly, incredibly honored by and grateful for your kind words and support. I shou...
by Scissorlips
Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 379396

Thanks And Acknowledgements

Thanks and Acknowledgements Thanks to everyone who has supported me and my writing over the last year, including but not limited to: Meadows, for your assistance in proofreading, editing, bouncing ideas off of, lighting up the night and just generally being a damn swell guy. Doomish, for your encou...
by Scissorlips
Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 379396

A Million Tomorrows (mature content) - Part 2

As tempting as it is, the two of us can’t hide out in his room all day. We end up finally rolling out of bed and, um, taking a quick shower... yeah... and then we manage to get to class just before the lunch break ends. When we walk through the door we get the usual treatment: a couple people smirk,...
by Scissorlips
Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 379396

A Million Tomorrows (mature content) - Part 1

A Million Tomorrows What... where... Arms around me, who... My face is nuzzled into someone’s chest. I open my eyes, raise my head and... oh. “Hi.” I mumble, smiling weakly as everything begins to come back. "There you are." Hisao replies. He's smiling too, but it's a little hard to see, and not ju...
by Scissorlips
Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 379396

Out Of Time

Out Of Time "What's the pigment in blood that makes it red?" Hisao asks, watching me from the other side of the table as he stabs at his breakfast with a plastic spoon. "It's..." Hold on, I... I know this one. I bite my lip. We studied this, and it's probably going to be on the test that's coming u...
by Scissorlips
Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 379396

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 1/17)

"Is this still being worked on" Nah Scissorlips just decided he was sick of it and gave up a few chapters from the finish line and 50,000-some-odd views in. Just, y'know, because. (It hasn't even been a month, dude.) Less the hitcount and more the 240,000-some words it took me to get here. But of c...
by Scissorlips
Wed Jan 23, 2013 1:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 379396

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 1/17)

This was the best chapter in a good while. Was less of the same and more of something different, which is certainly a relief. Hopefully things continue like this, because this is definitely what I've missed from Act 2 and all. Thank you, I'm glad to hear that. This is gooood!! I love it when Hisao ...
by Scissorlips
Fri Jan 18, 2013 2:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 379396

Aiming At Your Head

Aiming At Your Head Well this is weird. It stings a little to keep my eyes open but I do just that, even though half my face is pressed into my pillow and I... I can't see very much. But. This is weird. It's morning, the sunlight is invading my room through the window and I can hear the sounds of t...
by Scissorlips
Fri Jan 18, 2013 2:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 379396

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/31)

Now with its own page on TV Tropes http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/APseudo-PseudoSuzuRoute That's... wow. That's something I never really expected to happen, so thank you very much to whoever thought it worth it to make that. I'm very grateful. First of all - Holy Fuck, it has been too...
by Scissorlips
Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 107
Views: 17516

Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/7]

Well, I just had to go and get sucked in, I guess. In the beginning I felt that familiar sinking and twisting feeling that comes with your stories so often. It's just the little details, the way things flow and spin that crawls under my skin, and now that things are in motion I find myself glued to ...
by Scissorlips
Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 51457

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop

That was a heartwarming little story, and a nice way to add to the new year celebrations. It's a little hard to tell where the story fits in chronologically, and the only reason that bugs me is that Shizune still has that "enemy of my enemy" attitude towards Hanako in the beginning of the game, so h...
by Scissorlips
Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Loss of Control [A Hanako Story]
Replies: 4
Views: 1165

Re: Loss of Control [A Hanako Story]

TheHanafaggot wrote:5 stages of grief
Nope, I did not catch on to that at all. I thought I was just reading a story about someone being a jerk to Hanako and then being extremely emotional about it. I guess that's quite an opener though, so I'll be interested to see where things go next.
by Scissorlips
Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Insanity [unfinished]
Replies: 4
Views: 1114

Re: Hanako's Insanity [unfinished]

An interesting start. I had a few pointers that I hope might be useful: -A statement like "The front door shuts closed" is rather redundant. If you say that it's shut, the reader assumed that means it's closed all the way unless you specify that it hasn't. -Generally, stories are more readable when ...
by Scissorlips
Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 379396

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/31)

Suzu reminds me of the Hare from the "Tortoise and Hare" story, action wise, in that last chapter. It might be a personal opinion, but I was thinking Suzu was going to turn down Hisao,or ask for a different school to take the test at. Then give an actual reason instead of accept with no reason. I w...