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Your Miki is just how I imagine her. Troublemaker with a heart of gold.

These are the kinds of shenanigans that I would have liked to see more of in the game. Can't wait to see the direction you take this.

Pardon the delayed update. I've been planning out a lot of the events of Act 3 and that has been an undertaking of its own. Should be updating more regularly for a while. These two scenes still feel a bit rough to me so I'll likely edit it and tighten up the prose a bit. Mostly concerned with how co...

I love the hallway romance. It's very quaint and endearing. I find it really difficult to stay angry at Saki even if she might have crossed the line. She's just too adorable. I also want to say I love how you described everyone's expressions & gestures while talking. I could practically picture ...

Some people just don't believe in Suspension of Disbelief despite the fact that it's proven to work time and time again. I, personally, don't really know the intricacies of heart-based problems and solutions, so I'll accept pretty much anything that doesn't involve magic or wizards. I am really enj...

“People told her it wasn't her fault, but she couldn't believe them. She was there. She knew if it wasn't for her, that wouldn't have happened. Maybe later, maybe years later... just not then. But she couldn't figure out what she did wrong. All she wanted was to be an ordinary girl with a normal bo...

Loved it. The parts where Hisao and Lilly are praising her are especially heartbreaking in hindsight. "I'm so happy for you, Hanako. You're as beautiful outside as you've always been inside." Imagine how disappointing it is to wake up and realize she'll never hear things like that from her...

You know what? After giving it some thought I changed it back. I don't like the other ending. This ending is unlikely but after poking around on the internet a bit, it seems like what happens is unlikely but not impossible. And it's just a better ending. It really isn't fair for me to change it afte...

Thanks for the replies. I agree with the criticism about the ending so I changed it. Didn't want to affect the substance of what happened, really, but I don't like making people suspend their disbelief any more than is necessary. The other side of it is that I don't really like the idea of changing ...

This is an interesting development. Describing the dream as you do in the past-tense is unusual - at least, going by anything I've ever read. Normally dream sequences are present tense followed by "OH IT WAS ALL A DRAEM" etc etc. But the way you described it took a lot of the tension out a...

This is the actual conclusion to Act 2. Act 3 is forthcoming. I'll need some time for it, though. I'm planning on alternate endings and forks in the story. As always, feedback and comments are greatly appreciated. Scene 8: The Three Ghosts It's been almost a month since Emi broke down in my arms on ...

I've heard such good things about this and have been meaning to read it for a while. You should have heard me while reading this. I sounded like a studio audience of a 90s sitcom. A real emotional rollercoaster. Everything you might want from a story like this. It greatly exceeded my expectations, w...

I just now checked the date and saw that it was posted 2008, not 2012. I'm slow.

Thanks Guest.

I'm really glad to see more bonding between them. Their conversation about dinosaurs was adorable, how she tried to get inside his head and how he came back at her. And Hisao thanking her for hanging out with him. That was pretty damn cute. I'm glad you're keeping Hisao's character alive, as well, i...

I lol'd like crazy reading this. The precise moment I lost it was when she took the karate stance. For some reason I also loved when she quicky fixed up her appearance before Hisao showed up and then thought, "maybe he likes my outfit?" I love Hanako's "bad end" personality and i...

Well, I was not prepared for that. I read some of the replies before reading the story and I kept thinking, "Is there a joke I'm not getting?" I guess Mutou really likes thinking about science. Got kind of a Rin streak in him. Nice to see your writing again, Aura, even if you're just havin...