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by Oddball
Fri Oct 01, 2021 7:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210920 Writings of AA)
Replies: 1929
Views: 446252

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20210920 Writings of AA)

I meant to write out my thoughts on these much earlier, but here they are.
Better late than never.
by Oddball
Fri Sep 17, 2021 9:29 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: I got KS mentioned in a book
Replies: 6
Views: 408

Re: I got KS mentioned in a book

Wow.

Yamaku is actually in a real thing now. :shock:

Let's hope it doesn't get stomped by Godzilla.
by Oddball
Fri Sep 17, 2021 4:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210920 Writings of AA)
Replies: 1929
Views: 446252

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Writings of AA)

https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png Let's take a look at two old stories with Rin, the Writings of AA . Here we have two Rin-centric, pre-release stories: Like Fresh Cut Grass and About Michelangelo and Us . If you like your Rin in a dreamy poetic almost abstract way, I high suggest these two. Personal...
by Oddball
Wed Sep 15, 2021 10:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
Replies: 53
Views: 11032

Re: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection

Well, better late than never.

Overall it wasn't too shabby. It had a nice simple sweet feel to it.
by Oddball
Thu Aug 19, 2021 9:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210920 Writings of AA)
Replies: 1929
Views: 446252

Re: Yamaku Book Club (An Apology to the Nurse)

https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png Well, here's an interesting one. It's a nice short work that, in the same thread, got more fanfic written as a response to it in the same topic. It's a very short piece with a very Kenji-like Hisao and it hilariously explores exactly what happens if Hisao DOESN'T die...
by Oddball
Thu Jul 29, 2021 9:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: fool's game (A Saki x Hisao fic)
Replies: 2
Views: 373

Re: fool's game (A Saki x Hisao fic)

Your intro sets a bad first impression (seriously, go back and use some capital letters) and the dream scene probabaly could have been cut completely with no real loss, but once the story gets going, it's not that shabby. Saki comes off as a rather fun character.
by Oddball
Sun Jul 18, 2021 10:14 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1326
Views: 379755

Re: Blooper Reel

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by Oddball
Fri Jul 16, 2021 8:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210920 Writings of AA)
Replies: 1929
Views: 446252

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Kotani's Agency for finding things)

https://i.imgur.com/8FRtIUN.png Kotani's Agency for finding things by Ario. There sure are a lot of detective stories set in KS. Unlike certain other fics though, this one doesn't do anything to break canon or even the mood set by the main game (unless you count Kenji's set-up here but you could ar...
by Oddball
Wed Jul 14, 2021 11:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Anholonomy - Alt Act One of a ??? Pseudo-Route
Replies: 8
Views: 1238

Re: Anholonomy - Alt Act One of a ??? Pseudo-Route

It's an interesting idea having the first choice be set in the hospital. That's not anything I would have expected. A lot of the hospital stuff could have been cut through, as your basically just retelling us what we already know. I did like the details about the exercise though. That was a nice tou...
by Oddball
Tue Jul 13, 2021 12:45 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: 10 Years anniversary and what would you like to see?
Replies: 19
Views: 3074

Re: 10 Years anniversary and what would you like to see?

So I love this game, played it in middle school in 2012, and I come back to often so I'm not new to the game (is it really a game or is it a way of life?). Anyways, I just realized it débuted in 2012. This whole time I totally thought it came out in like 2007. Wow. It's really cool to know that I g...
by Oddball
Mon Jul 12, 2021 11:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dance Of The Delicate
Replies: 26
Views: 7561

Re: Hanako Route, Part 4: Slaying Dragons

While the set up for this story was flawed, the idea of a school dance was cute. The script format did you no favors though, and actually seemed to get worse as you went along. Rather than having characters engaged in conversation, it felt like they were taking turns talking. One character has their...
by Oddball
Wed Jun 30, 2021 1:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (28/07/21 Ch. 9) Family: To Lose and To Accept (Iwanako/Shizune GE) (OCs)
Replies: 15
Views: 3015

Re: (27/06/21 Ch. 3) Family: To Lose and To Accept (Iwanako/Shizune GE) (OCs)

I honestly hadn't even notice the date change. As for the story, it's certainly not the direction I would have seen most of the characters going, not to say it's bad though. There are a lot of people that write Iwanako as messed up by what happens, but I think you've took it further than anything I'...
by Oddball
Wed Jun 30, 2021 12:50 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1326
Views: 379755

Re: Blooper Reel

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by Oddball
Tue Jun 29, 2021 12:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210920 Writings of AA)
Replies: 1929
Views: 446252

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20210628 Hisao & Akira Avoid The Family)

Wow, it's been more than six years since we last put this in YBC. Way too long! It's well-engineered and carries a lot of well-crafted punch. No spoilers, of course. Everyone should be allowed to read it through a few times until they get all the feels. I know. This one is hard to talk about. You w...
by Oddball
Mon Jun 28, 2021 5:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: [Ria's Oneshot Hell] 12/24/18
Replies: 24
Views: 10612

Re: [Ria's Oneshot Hell] 12/24/18

A Different Kind of Tension An unfamiliar character in the place of Hisao during Rin's "Proof of Existence" as something of an epilogue, written for SapphicYumi. I'm not sure how accurate a take this was on Rin, but it was a funa nd enjoyable one. As for being an unfamiliar character, I actually di...