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by Oddball
Thu Dec 06, 2018 9:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze [Lilly x OC] - I-2 added 11-27-2018
Replies: 10
Views: 435

Re: Beyond The Haze [Lilly x OC] - I-2 added 11-27-2018

Not too shabby so far. You character's narration has a lot of personality in it and I like the details of how she has to remember her friends and family.
by Oddball
Wed Dec 05, 2018 4:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yuuko Pseudo-route: Can You Read Me?
Replies: 14
Views: 1187

Re: Yuuko Pseudo-route: Can You Read Me?

The material in it seems interesting enough but I have a hard time really getting into it. It's extremely obvious that you're not a native English speaker and your phrasing often feels still and awkward to me. You might want some help with getting your word choices to flow a little better.
by Oddball
Sat Dec 01, 2018 5:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20181203 Cup & Saucer: Rika)
Replies: 1725
Views: 200793

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Cup and Saucer a Rika Fan Route)

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route by Flopsy. This time we look at a rather enjoyable Rika story from an author who was only with us for a short period of time before disappearing. Sadly this means the story isn't finished. Still, I think it's worth a read as the chara...
by Oddball
Mon Nov 19, 2018 12:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff
Replies: 14
Views: 817

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff

An Evening Rendezvous That was a fun energetic story. I loved how you handled Hisao's reaction at the end. Naomi and Natsume sounded a bit too much alike though, almost as if they were both the same character. You might want to work on that part. Also, your story did contain one of my fanfic pet pee...
by Oddball
Sat Nov 17, 2018 3:26 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Halloween submission
Replies: 1
Views: 202

Re: Halloween submission

That's a pretty cool logo.
by Oddball
Sat Nov 17, 2018 1:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/2/18)
Replies: 10
Views: 535

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route

It's a nice start so far. Miki comes off nicely characterized. Much to my surprise, however, the place is pretty packed, having about the same population a typical high school. This is wrong though (although to be fair it could just be Hisao being wrong). The school is somewhere between 200 and 300 ...
by Oddball
Sat Nov 17, 2018 12:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: When the Puddles Dry - Post Rin Neutral/True Ending Epilogue, One Shot(?)
Replies: 9
Views: 482

Re: When the Puddles Dry - Post Rin Neutral/True Ending Epilogue, One Shot(?)

Hisao's voice was very well done, but Iwanako just felt like she was there so he could have somebody to tell his story too. She seemed to have very little presence herself.
by Oddball
Sat Nov 17, 2018 10:43 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Who's storyline moved you the most in Katawa Shoujo?
Replies: 4
Views: 235

Re: Who's storyline moved you the most in Katawa Shoujo?

Hanako's.

I think that story best shows two people that have become very lost finding each other.
by Oddball
Sat Nov 17, 2018 10:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20181203 Cup & Saucer: Rika)
Replies: 1725
Views: 200793

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20181105 Afternoon Astral Projection)

Why is everyone talking about the characters being out of character? It all seems perfectly in character to me. :wink:
by Oddball
Sun Nov 04, 2018 11:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20181203 Cup & Saucer: Rika)
Replies: 1725
Views: 200793

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20181105 Afternoon Astral Projection)

Well, that escalated quickly... I think that was one of the first - if not the first - stories by Kosher, and it did a lot to cement his reputation as the most... unique purveyor of H-stories around here. Personally I'm not the biggest fan of such stories in general, but I've mostly enjoyed those b...
by Oddball
Sat Nov 03, 2018 2:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20181203 Cup & Saucer: Rika)
Replies: 1725
Views: 200793

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Afternoon Astral Projection)

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png For those of you who don't know, our next author has a rather unique reputation for a particular style of story handled in a way that's uniquely his own. It's not going to be up everyone's alley, but for some people it will be very MUCH what they enjoy. To say there'...
by Oddball
Sat Oct 27, 2018 9:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20181203 Cup & Saucer: Rika)
Replies: 1725
Views: 200793

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Birth of a Fighter)

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png Birth of a Fighter by spirizu. Let's read a Jigoro story. On one hand, I like the way the story itself works. It's well written, sets a nice mood, and subtly adds that Hideaki isn't that different from his old man. On the other hand, This makes Jigoro seems a lot old...
by Oddball
Fri Oct 26, 2018 1:10 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4036
Views: 350203

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

I felt we could use a few Halloween-ish images this time of year.
vampire hanako.png
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Satannic Rin.png
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by Oddball
Mon Oct 22, 2018 10:50 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Yamaku Front Gates
Replies: 2
Views: 156

Re: Yamaku Front Gates

Nice little addition you added
by Oddball
Thu Oct 18, 2018 1:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20181203 Cup & Saucer: Rika)
Replies: 1725
Views: 200793

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180924 Sherlock Hisao)

I don't want to be "that guy", but we covered this story in August, a mere 73 days ago.
I have no idea what you're talking about and even if I did, I'm certain it didn't involve me forgetting to delete a bookmark after covering a story. Nope. None at all.