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by Oddball
Sat May 30, 2020 7:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 14
Views: 1915

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

I went back and re-read your opening. Actually, the opening was so different that I'd forgotten I'd even read any of the story before until I scrolled down and saw a comment I left. You have a very different take on Hisao. In the game he felt more depressed and bitter, but here he seems just straigh...
by Oddball
Thu May 28, 2020 8:48 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: A Dangerously Reassuring Sound; or, why I love Rin
Replies: 1
Views: 240

Re: A Dangerously Reassuring Sound; or, why I love Rin

Interesting take. I do think you're being a bit too harsh on Nomiya though. While he did get caught up a bit much, he seemed fully interested in pushing Rin into stardom not not necessarily for himself, but because she so impressed him. I don't think you should blame him for how bad Rin got either. ...
by Oddball
Thu May 28, 2020 8:41 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Donkey Kenj (free game) updated
Replies: 1
Views: 51

Re: Donkey Kenj (free game) updated

So, what exactly updated?
by Oddball
Wed May 13, 2020 9:00 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1311
Views: 272527

Re: Blooper Reel

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by Oddball
Mon May 04, 2020 11:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Their Future - A Shizune Epilogue (Contains some NSFW) [DISCONTINUED]
Replies: 19
Views: 1496

Re: Their Future - A Shizune Epilogue (Contains some NSFW) [DISCONTINUED]

It's not bad. The story has a lot of energy to it and it flows well, but i think it could stand a few more quiet moments. Right now you've set up a whole lot and I really hope that it all pays off. The idea of Nurse working along Hisao and Misha is interesting if nothing else. Misha does feel a bit ...
by Oddball
Mon May 04, 2020 10:26 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Just a quick opinion about Shizune's route
Replies: 5
Views: 379

Re: Just a quick opinion about Shizune's route

But, again, the examples you gave for the other girls are scenes at or close to the end of their stories, so Shizune is no different in this regard. In general, the most intense parts of a story come at the climax. The rest of the story is needed to build up the necessary groundwork to justify that...
by Oddball
Sat May 02, 2020 10:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: [OUTDATED]
Replies: 10
Views: 657

Re: Hold my Mind - Main Thread

You have a bad habit of not capitalizing your 'I's. You might want to do something about that.

Otherwise, I don't have much to say because there's not much to comment on. Your prologue isn't much longer than your warning and table of contents.
by Oddball
Mon Apr 27, 2020 12:07 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Anyone know when Lilly found out?
Replies: 17
Views: 637

Re: Anyone know when Lilly found out?

And the icing on the cake is that Lilly's route is all about honesty: All choices in her route are about Hisao always telling her everything about himself without reservation, otherwise bye bye good ending. Sometimes I wonder if Suriko was trolling us with this... I don't see why you would think Su...
by Oddball
Sun Apr 26, 2020 8:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20200427 Two Flat Jokes)
Replies: 1830
Views: 272349

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Double shot)

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png Here's a two for one deal for ya' because both of them are short probably a bit too short really. Rookie Error by Revvy and Funny and weird OS. [HisaoXCharacters] by Myshina. Okay technically the story we're reading is Oh Mah Drills~! . Funny and Weird is just the na...
by Oddball
Sun Apr 26, 2020 7:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Old Habits Die Hard (Rin Neutral Ending - Twelve Years Later)
Replies: 6
Views: 534

Re: Old Habits Die Hard (Rin Neutral Ending - Twelve Years Later)

Much better now. There's kind of a nice nostalgic sad feeling where Hisao is wishing for what could have been. I think the ending lets it down though. I have no problems with Rin returning, but I don't see why she would move back in to the altier and the rushing towards her part feels like it's from...
by Oddball
Fri Apr 24, 2020 3:40 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Anyone know when Lilly found out?
Replies: 17
Views: 637

Re: Anyone know when Lilly found out?

Lilly doesn't want to ever be seen as a burden or problem for anyone. So when confronted with a situation where she would let somebody down no matter what she did, she had no idea how to handle it. I think she was holding off in the vain hopes that something would happen where she wouldn't have to m...
by Oddball
Fri Apr 17, 2020 10:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Some Shades of Blue
Replies: 3
Views: 283

Re: Some Shades of Blue

Pretty good story. I really liked hos you handled Misha and Kenji. There was a lot of personality in them without playing too much into their more over the top aspects. The story itself had that a nice wistful everyday sadness to it and captured that feeling of having to say goodbye and move on whet...
by Oddball
Fri Apr 17, 2020 10:25 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Anyone know when Lilly found out?
Replies: 17
Views: 637

Re: Anyone know when Lilly found out?

I've never seen any statement from anyone saying when Lilly found out. The fact that his parents don't mention it isn't a big deal either. He just woke back up. They probably didn't want to say anything to get him worked up. Asking about a blind lady can wait for later. Of course there's also a good...
by Oddball
Wed Apr 15, 2020 2:13 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Who's storyline moved you the most in Katawa Shoujo?
Replies: 10
Views: 1492

Re: Who's storyline moved you the most in Katawa Shoujo?

I’m going to say Lilly’s is #1 to me, as it felt the most leading towards a long-term commitment, possibly marriage. To me, both Hanako's and Lilly's felt this way. The other relationships still left some room for doubt, but with Hanako and Lilly I got the feeling that after what they went through,...
by Oddball
Wed Apr 15, 2020 2:10 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which song moved you the most?
Replies: 139
Views: 30359

Re: Which song moved you the most?

I think Jitter (the theme from Hanako's animation) packs the most emotional punch.

Cold Iron stands out too.

On a more positive side... Concord and Lullaby of Open Eyes.