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by Oddball
Fri Sep 13, 2019 2:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190916 Yields Six Servings)
Replies: 1794
Views: 242609

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Yields Six Servings)

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png You know what time it is! It's cooking Club time!... I mean book club. Actually, you know what? It's both today. Yields Six Servings by themocaw. This story is about Rin, doing a perfectly normal thing. She's cooking. The interesting part is how Rin goes about it and...
by Oddball
Tue Sep 03, 2019 12:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunions (S9 Submission) (Updated 2/4/19)
Replies: 11
Views: 1048

Re: Reunions (S9 Submission) (Updated 2/4/19)

Interesting idea, although Rin feels a bit too normal. I understand how people can change over the years, but there doesn't seem to be too much left of the way she used to act to balance it out and make it feel like her.
by Oddball
Sat Aug 31, 2019 11:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Winter's Blossom (Updated 8/13/19)
Replies: 12
Views: 1179

Re: Winter's Blossom (Updated 8/13/19)

It's a cute story so far. Ikuno and her family are quite adorable. Hisao comes off as a bit too clueless at times and sometimes seems to be the punching bag of everybody and you do dwell a bit too much on the sweater vest thing. I have no idea why everyone feels the need to bring that up. You're als...
by Oddball
Wed Aug 28, 2019 10:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shiina 3
Replies: 2
Views: 488

Re: Shiina 3

Interesting origin of Misha's nickname and hairstyle. I also like the idea of Misha and Shizune trying to attend a birthday party for Hanako and the extra tension that caused, even if it doesn't really fit well with canon. The nickname Hanako-chan feels overly long and clumsy though. I'm usually aga...
by Oddball
Mon Aug 26, 2019 3:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190916 Yields Six Servings)
Replies: 1794
Views: 242609

Re: Yamaku Book Club (works from Cpl Crud)

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png We're going to do something a little bit different this time. We're going to read multiple stories. (it's okay. They're short). On top of that, we're going off forum for them. And for the icing on the cake, we're going to look at something from our of our dear devs. ...
by Oddball
Wed Aug 21, 2019 10:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Da Capo
Replies: 7
Views: 310

Re: Da Capo

Very interesting work.

The idea of starting this story after it's been going on for a while is a nice touch. It skips right off the awkward parts about her figuring out what's going on and gets right to the meat of the story.
by Oddball
Wed Aug 14, 2019 11:36 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1298
Views: 254794

Re: Blooper Reel

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Wed Aug 14, 2019 10:47 am
Is "masterbating" some weird hybrid between "masturbating" and "masterbaiting"? 8)
...


Yes.


That's my answer and I'm sticking to it.
by Oddball
Wed Aug 14, 2019 8:53 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1298
Views: 254794

Re: Blooper Reel

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by Oddball
Sun Aug 11, 2019 1:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190916 Yields Six Servings)
Replies: 1794
Views: 242609

Re: Yamaku Book Club (shit nobody cares about: the game)

https://i.imgur.com/sGUCaOc.png I meant to update this last week, but I hurt my back and wasn't really in a reading mood and I do try to read (or re-read) these stories before I force them on you all. :wink: This time on the book club we have perhaps one of the least appealing titles that I've ran ...
by Oddball
Fri Aug 09, 2019 7:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Saviors from the Flames
Replies: 2
Views: 283

Re: Saviors from the Flames

Generally people here don't like having to go to another site to read things. Why don't you just post your story here?
by Oddball
Sun Aug 04, 2019 3:02 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4940
Views: 735602

Re: Ask!

Lilly gets around campus unaided and she's completely blind.
by Oddball
Sat Aug 03, 2019 11:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Footprints in the Snow - A Fanfiction
Replies: 11
Views: 448

Re: Footprints in the Snow - A Fanfiction

The story sends up a lot of warnings to me. Foreign student, shares many of Hisao's traits... so far though it's nothing horrible. The narrator shift between the first and part of the story and when he has his accident is a bit abrupt though. I'm also curious why you gave his girlfriend essentially ...
by Oddball
Fri Aug 02, 2019 11:37 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4940
Views: 735602

Re: Ask!

"Legally blind" is not the same as completely blind. Kenji can see. He just has really really poor vision.
by Oddball
Fri Aug 02, 2019 11:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Their Future - A Shizune Epilogue (Contains some NSFW) [DISCONTINUED]
Replies: 18
Views: 716

Re: Their Future - A Shizune Epilogue (Contains some NSFW)

I think the closing line about this being home would have worked better if you hadn't already used it when he first arrived.

Other than that, there's not enough here to really judge by yet.
by Oddball
Wed Jul 31, 2019 9:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fallen Leaves & Broken Clocks/A Conversation on the Roof
Replies: 12
Views: 1186

Re: Fallen Leaves & Broken Clocks

Nice story. Shot put very powerful and emotional. Her response that Hisao had been reading too much poetry was a nice one that adds just a slight taste of humor to it. I'm not so sure I like the last line where he say "Saki, I'll see you again soon." i think the story works well enough as being a me...