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by Ascended Flutist
Wed Aug 22, 2012 5:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 18529

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 Complete 8/20/12) (For real this ti

Alright, two things. First, I stumbled across many mistakes, small stuff, no biggies, but it forces me to go back and reread passages, not good. On the same note, there are also some passages where the sentence structure is a bit awkward/heavy. I always see what you meant, but I sometimes feel it co...
by Ascended Flutist
Tue Aug 21, 2012 3:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)
Replies: 122
Views: 32155

Re: And to Live in Peace -Post Hanako's Good End- (Ch4 up)

Affirmative sir! Although at a slower pace. It's still far from completed, but I'm making progress. From times to times. When I have the motivation.
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Aug 17, 2012 3:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 403389

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/16)

Meanwhile in a dark and dry cave lit by rare, red candles emitting a feeble, rotting crimson glow "Has Scissorlips released any more chapters of his Suzu series?" A stout hooded figure asks in a fluttery voice. "Yes," answers another voice, coming from a greyish humanoid form. "Bring it to me," say...
by Ascended Flutist
Sat Aug 04, 2012 6:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC Route - Azumi Maeda (8/6)
Replies: 25
Views: 4917

Re: OC Route - Azumi Maeda

I'll do my usual thing, even though this time I cheated and read the whole thing before starting to comment. So it'll be a little different. Dream sequence. I'd say it's a bit long, but I have no right whatsoever to criticize other people's dream sequences when the length of the one I did would make...
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Aug 03, 2012 10:23 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Myshina.
Replies: 55
Views: 5156

Re: Myshina.

I don't go in this section often, so I have trouble keeping track of what's happening, what's the new gig in town and so on. I don't even know why exactly I clicked on this thread. Let's go with boredom. Anyway, when I read a total stranger was being hospitalized because of her jackass boyfriend, I ...
by Ascended Flutist
Fri Aug 03, 2012 4:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 18529

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Chapter Eleven 7/21/12)

Rewriting the entire damn thing takes some courage and will. Goddamn you must be motivated. Anyway, that decision really ups you in my esteem. And you were pretty high already.

I'm thinking this is a tad overkill, but a wise man once said 'The only good kill is overkill'. So have it your way.
by Ascended Flutist
Thu Aug 02, 2012 4:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Touchdown Breakdown (Updated 7/30/2012)
Replies: 47
Views: 9948

Re: Touchdown Breakdown (Updated 7/30/2012)

*points at fic* You're next. All I can do is lie here in bed and count each individual dot on the ceiling until I lose track and start over again. All while replaying this surreal, messed up couple of days over and over in my head. Forwards, backwards, sped, up, slowed down, to the point where I thi...
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 18529

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 : Complete 8/1/12)

Ok, so I failed to release this chapter by my self-imposed deadline. But come on, this chapter is three times longer than the longest chapter I've written so far. It took more time than I had originally planned. Frankly, I'm surprised I was only a day late. Anyway, a big thank you goes out to every...
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 403389

Re: A suzu-suzu Pseudo route (updated 8/1)

This seemed to be built up to be something other than survivor's guilt, so the bulk of your rant somewhat misses the point. But whatever. I enjoyed the chapter immensely and don't want to argue about it, so moving right along . . . If this is the case, I'll apologize, pick up the shattered pieces o...
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 403389

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Well, guilt trips aren't uncommon, especially with family matters. It's not the first time I see fiction using the accidental death of a family member, or any close relative, really, as a fuel for guilt trips. And sure, from an objective standpoint it wasn't her fault. We all know that. But you have...
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Aug 01, 2012 12:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 403389

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

...With only having a single year to emotionally deal with the event, I'm amazed Suzu isn't a lot more like Hanako ._. Well, I think she 'ostriched it down', so to speak. The combined effects of her having a deluxe subscription to dreamland tickets and the fact that she isn't wearing the testimony ...
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Aug 01, 2012 6:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 403389

Re: Understand Me Now

It's summer. I don't mind the extra charge. Since I like doing it anyway. Yeah. http://images.uesp.net/3/36/MS_Calm_Creature.jpg I...You...I...By http://images.uesp.net/7/79/DAEDRIC_V.PNG . By http://images.uesp.net/7/79/DAEDRIC_V.PNG , http://images.uesp.net/a/af/DAEDRIC_A.PNG and http://images.ues...
by Ascended Flutist
Tue Jul 31, 2012 4:09 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4953
Views: 819979

Re: Ask!

Actually asking a question (well, several, but one, really) this time : Regarding the bathrooms in the dorms : Are they situated 1) Between two adjacent rooms? 2) In a room accessible from the corridor? 3) Both of the above? Or is this particular layout left hanging, and can be shaped to suit the wh...
by Ascended Flutist
Tue Jul 31, 2012 3:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 403389

Re: The Last Passenger

Hi. C.a.I.R., like usual. I prod him harder, wiggling the t-rex a little. Hisao groans, and then, eyes still closed, reaches out and wraps his arms around the plushy, pulling it close. Next to me, Miki makes a “pffft” noise. tehehe. “And you apologize too much.” She continues. “Sor--I mean, okay.” A...
by Ascended Flutist
Wed Jul 25, 2012 6:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Just another one-shot compilation thread (new story 11/18)
Replies: 86
Views: 14150

Re: Just another one-shot compilation thread (new story 7/23

It perfectly nails why I've grown to dislike Lilly Incoming late night rant Yep, pretty much. You know, something occured to me a few days ago. At some point, Shizune's route emphasizes on the point of her every 'words' being more thoughtful and composed because of the nature of sign language, yet ...