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Someone's a Code Geass fan!~ suprised you didn't use Nunally. Love the story. I've never seen Code Geass so I actually have no idea what that's referencing... Anyway, very entertaining so far, but I think you go a bit overboard on Hanako's stuttering. I do like how she's one of the only characters ...

An interesting take on this subject, I like how you handled Hanako's internal conflict. Too many writers struggle with that, either making her just a shy girl or focusing on her stuttering as a way to convey her internal situation. I think I'm guilty of that myself. And as usual, your Misha is impec...

I've been busy playing Ghost Recon, but here are two shorter chapters to make up for it. Chapter 7 I broke into a sweat somewhere in my sleep. I usually don’t dream, so I just happened to wake up at four-thirty in the morning glued to my sheets. My room was boiling; summer had finally started to arr...

Chapter 6: Hook I’ve done a lot of things I’m not proud of when chasing a story. I could now add almost killing someone to that list. I kept rationalizing it in my head. She ran from me, she tripped. I needed that information, someone else was dead and their pills stolen by her. Pills that could be ...

This is a short chapter so I've got a few pictures to make up for it. http://i.imgur.com/I7IvH.png Ritsu Tainaka, Investigative Journalist. Chapter 5 I saw the thin girl leaning on the wall in the alley between the school buildings. She held her cigarette daintily between two fingers and flicked the...

Can I just say that I really, really really like this idea? I think it's great to give the side characters the spotlight like this, and especially in such a unique way. I feel like a douche for saying this, but I confess that I haven't had time to read it yet, though. Also, um. I'm kind of--okay, I...

Chapter 4 Mutou’s lecture droned on and on. I wish I didn’t have to be in class, but at least gave me time to think. And opportunity to stare daggers at Lamperouge’s back. I understand he has aphasia, but would it kill him to point out one of the five if they were in room? Sight for Sore Eyes… Suzuk...

Chapter 3: Bridge Turning the corner, I saw the room. Unremarkable and indistinct from the other dorm rooms. No picture or name, as Yamaku custom. But people knew who’s room this was, at least after the poor kid had gone. No flowers or notes, but I suppose that was understandable. Nobody really knew...

Kinda obvious to me, but they sound rather appropriate. Well the idea is that they are five students (and the five KS girls) but Ritsu doesn't necessarily know them. She's run with a different crowd. Hell, the amount to which the girls know each other is up for debate, besides the obvious friendshi...

Thanks for the comments guys. Chapter 2, coming up. Chapter 2: First Verse I was walking through the little town next to Yamaku. It provided things most everyone needed, a convenience store, shops, restaurants, housing for the teachers and staff. The town was grateful to have Yamaku, and most of the...

Obligatory Jacket Blurb: Ritsu Tainaka is a student at Yamaku High, a specialty school for the disabled. But when a new student is found dead in an apparent suicide, Ritsu must journey into the seedy underbelly of the school. Just who was Hisao Nakai? Why does he have five girls overly concerned wit...

You're a beautiful person bro, don't ever let anyone tell you otherwise.

Indeed, and that's I think we should take this as set in the future of Emi's good end. No comment. Still, it should have been easy to put them together in the same scene where we see Emi's mom flirting with the nurse, just a passing mention like Lilly and Hanako were. Maybe if I do Compromised v. 2...

I love the immense awkwardness. Reminds me of high school.

Keep up the good work.

Just a couple of things I wrote. The Girl Who Falls “My, my, isn’t that an interesting costume,” Lilly said as she traced her hands along the seams and ridges of my Halloween costume, which was lying on the bed. “It certainly feel intimidating, though I can’t recall the character. And what is mine s...