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by Exbando
Thu Jul 02, 2015 3:13 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4860
Views: 399650

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Hey there, guys! The last time I posted in here was February...2013. I haven't been keeping up in here, unfortunately, and there's been nearly 100 pages added since then. That is insane. I'm not going to be able to read all of that, though, because there aren't enough hours in the day. Sorry, but th...
by Exbando
Wed Apr 03, 2013 10:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction) (U 2/14/13)
Replies: 82
Views: 17845

Re: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction) (U 2/14

I figure I should at least tell you this is still alive, I just have been too busy with school stuff. I've had to write so many essays the past however long it's been that I just hit burn out on writing for a bit. I apologize for not saying anything about it. Classes end next month, I'll try to upda...
by Exbando
Fri Mar 22, 2013 6:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 208585

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 03/16/2013

neio wrote:And why are there picnic tables on the roof if the school discourages going up there?
Emi built them.

I just caught up, and I'm enjoying the story so far. Looking forward to the next part.
by Exbando
Mon Mar 04, 2013 4:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 9562

Re: A Painful Past (OC) CH 2 updated (3/3/13)

I'm noticing a couple things. One is run-on sentences. Like this: She’s almost always yelling or at least talking loud enough for it to pass as yelling except for when she’s bored which isn't often because she always finds her way in to some kind of mischief, she’s short tempered and never has a pro...
by Exbando
Mon Feb 25, 2013 11:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 347
Views: 96457

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route (OCxHisao) [Updated 2/25]

Me likey. Haven't seen Hisao X OC here yet (though I haven't looked that hard). I'm gonna take a wild guess and say Hisao goes to a concert at some point. It only makes sense.
by Exbando
Mon Feb 25, 2013 6:56 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4860
Views: 399650

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Xanatos wrote: @Exbando: That's not nice. A lot of stuff I link is adorable! :P Like this. Lookit that face.
I dunno...that might still be classified as NSFW if taken out of context...I sowwy for being mean...
by Exbando
Mon Feb 25, 2013 6:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lotus Child
Replies: 26
Views: 3262

Re: Lotus Child

I like where this is going. I will definitely keep tabs on this.
by Exbando
Mon Feb 25, 2013 6:44 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4860
Views: 399650

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

EmiIsMoreThAnal wrote:
Whoa there! Where's the NSFW tag!
Thank you for those, now I know where to look when they wear off
The NSFW tag is in the name. I tend to not trust links put up by Xanatos...
by Exbando
Sun Feb 24, 2013 4:26 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4860
Views: 399650

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Sgt Spice wrote:
Xanatos wrote: Some guy mentioned a Rin lookalike in the HBHC a while back. Maybe ask him. :lol:
I remember. But I think that would be too creepy.

"Hey where do you live so I can stalk a Rin lookalike?"
That's not creepy at all. I find that perfectly logical.
by Exbando
Sun Feb 24, 2013 1:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Persistence (OC Story)
Replies: 6
Views: 2267

Re: Persistence (OC Story)

CptSalsa wrote:Also why "Shocchan"? Now that I think of it I actually can't think of a different one.
When I put Shawn into google translate, it came up with Shōn, so I added the -chan where I thought it would be appropriate.
by Exbando
Sat Feb 23, 2013 10:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Persistence (OC Story)
Replies: 6
Views: 2267

Re: Persistence (OC Story)

The characterization so far is adequate: everyone has acted according to canon (Miki being cheerful and outgoing and Misha being... Misha). Not much more to say since you haven't introduced any other existing character in your story. Well, hopefully the next batch he meets will also be in character...
by Exbando
Sat Feb 23, 2013 9:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 366290

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/18]

Triscuitable wrote:i mean im just waiting patiently
two fingers left
You are far more patient than I, for I have already moved to my toes.

Seriously though, take your time. Quality over quantity and what-not.
by Exbando
Sat Feb 23, 2013 7:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Persistence (OC Story)
Replies: 6
Views: 2267

Persistence (OC Story)

I had an idea for a character, and now he has a story. Just so you know, my other fanfic is still alive, but I wanted to start this one before I forgot anything about it. So, without any further ado, here is Persistence. I’m heading towards the school. My pace is slower than usual. Mostly because I...
by Exbando
Mon Feb 18, 2013 3:43 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4860
Views: 399650

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Look up Tisha UnArmed on youtube. She even drives with her feet.
by Exbando
Sun Feb 17, 2013 4:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction) (U 2/14/13)
Replies: 82
Views: 17845

Re: A Familiar Face (Hanako Neutral End Fan Fiction)

Lilly has the tendency to say 'Hisao' in almost all of her lines. I can ignore the 'Hisao' when they first bump into each other but the rest is a bit much. When it's one-on-one, the amount of times a person's name is said is near nonexistent. For instance, I see my friend each and every day because...