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Was just about to hit "Submit" on a post about how I figured this was after Hanako's Neutral End and I looked up to the thread title and seen it spelled out right in front of me. Herp-a-derp it's bed time. :lol: I'll try to post the next part at a more reasonable time. I could swear, thou...

And now for Chapter 3! This chapter picks up right where Chapter 2 left off. Previous Chapter -------------------------------- I look to Ms. Satou for support here, but her face only shows surprise. What is there to be surprised about? I look over to the mystery woman, and her face shows the same th...

I'm not sure if you intended this or not, but Hanako covering her face as Hisao sees her for what she might think is the first time in his memory was really powerful for me. I felt so bad for her. She's come such a long way only to meet Hisao all over again. Totally what I meant. Yeah. But, he reme...

I lol'd at your intro. Dunno why, just struck me as funny. >.> Instead of "newness to writing," I get the feeling that you're trying to avoid overly describing things, keeping things short for the most part and going into detail as needed. I like it. :) Only typo I noticed was you said &q...

I figure I should get chapter 2 out now before I get any more ideas and try to change the story more than it needs to be. In this chapter, you're going to see just how stupid our main character can be at times. Previous Chapter -------------------------------- How Dr. Nakano expected me to sleep is ...

I don't know anything about concussions. I think you can (if you want to) mess around with the particulars in order to make it more scientifically accurate without losing any of the actual story, though. Obviously this is just a set-up for a longer narrative. Hisao was in some kind of accident and ...

I had heard that falling asleep when having a concussion was a bad thing, and I didn't want the doctor to just tell him to go to sleep if he had a concussion. Not really... Losing your consciousness is always a bad thing, because an unconscious person is in danger of asphyxiation if not treated pro...

You should get some rest. You do n’t have a concussion, and sleep is important. I guess that's what you meant. It's hard to receive a head injury that causes amnesia and NOT have a concussion. It's like cutting off an arm without bleeding^^° Also, just why are the doctors disappointed that Lilly (L...

Hi everybody. This is my first attempt at a fan fiction. I had the idea for the plot while I was at work today, and I wanted to make it happen, so here is the first chapter. -------------------------------- I’m woken up by some strange mumblings. I can only catch some small snippets of conversation....

@kushiro: I don't think that post size matters in this thread. I didn't go to prom or the senior party at my school. I went to the graduation party for one of my friends, and the kids from my church that happened to graduate the same year as me. I felt that at my graduation party, though, many of th...

I found out about KS through a webcomic called Critical Miss. I'm so glad that I found it, too.

I have to pick Akira. That way, if I have ever have a problem, I can talk to her, and she'll always know how to lighten the mood.

@Hylan: As I have said before, I'm not that great when it comes to relationships. I think that everyone has their own "way" of meeting women. Your friends are apparently good at meeting them on a night out, perhaps you would have better luck meeting someone that you work with or happen to ...

Just finished reading through the entire story, so I'll just go through the thoughts that I had during each part (since I wasn't around when you were writing it). Reconciliation: Retelling the ending from Hanako's perspective...interesting Hanako's a writer now? I guess it is easier to type things t...

@Wakagana: I was in an online relationship (if you can call it that) before. It was in middle school over RuneScape. I don't think it lasted longer than a week before we were never online at the same time and I just forgot what the username was. @kushiro: I feel like my story is actually pretty tame...