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by Jaspirian
Thu Jan 02, 2014 7:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)

Glad to hear it.
by Jaspirian
Tue Dec 31, 2013 9:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)

Absolutely.

Besides, I checked. None of the canon or semi-canon characters have [REDACTED].
by Jaspirian
Tue Dec 31, 2013 7:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)

Glad you liked my Miki. I don't think I could do a route for her--so no disappearances just yet--but I may do another route after this one is finished. Probably a semi-canon character. That's another reason I wouldn't do a Miki; I don't like doing routes other writers have put a lot of work into, li...
by Jaspirian
Tue Dec 31, 2013 2:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)

I knew the beginning would be rough (said so in my intro), but I'm glad it's shaping up. I hope to keep impressing you.
by Jaspirian
Sat Dec 28, 2013 4:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/10)

Mutou is late as usual, so my classmates take the opportunity to yammer on about this, that and the other thing. Me, I’m bored; I suppose I could try to start a conversation with Shizune or Misha but the former has been shooting me death glares all morning. Given how capable the Student Council Pres...
by Jaspirian
Tue Dec 10, 2013 1:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/10)

Less insane without a doubt. How well-adjusted she is remains another matter entirely.

Glad you two are liking it.
by Jaspirian
Tue Dec 10, 2013 5:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/5)

We’re rapidly running out of moon, but there’s still enough light to see by. I change into a swimsuit and head out to the pool, expecting to see a familiar, freckled face awaiting me. Instead the pool seems completely empty. Tonight, however, I know what to look for: after a moment of searching the ...
by Jaspirian
Tue Dec 10, 2013 4:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/5)

Glad you thought it was greta, and I hope to keep you edited through many chapters to come.
by Jaspirian
Sat Dec 07, 2013 5:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 47398

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update 30/11/2013]

I'll look forward to it.
by Jaspirian
Fri Dec 06, 2013 11:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 47398

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update 30/11/2013]

“Yes, I do. I’m guessing you want to know why. Shizune is an old friend... It's odd to hear the middle sentence in casual conversation. “Alright, lets go.” Should be "let's" Of course. Deaf. I like this. He starts riding it around the shed, knocking over a stack of cones in the process. I like this...
by Jaspirian
Fri Dec 06, 2013 11:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/5)

A compromise, then.

I leave him to his dreams and his unreadable expression; maybe someone will eventually figure him out, but I doubt it'll be me.
by Jaspirian
Fri Dec 06, 2013 2:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (11/19)

Both are acceptable. However, if someone else pipes up and says it threw them off, I'd certainly be willing to change it. Just so long as you're not the only one.

Generous. If you can think of a better word I'll use it.

Glad you liked it.

Delicate her hand?
by Jaspirian
Fri Dec 06, 2013 5:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (11/19)

To my surprise, the blue-haired girl that’s always sleeping in the next row is already in class—awake, no less—by the time I arrive. She’s got her head propped up by one hand and seems to be looking nowhere in particular. Her eyes follow me lazily as I walk in and I stop in front of her desk, feelin...
by Jaspirian
Fri Dec 06, 2013 5:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (11/19)

First let me apologize for the long delay. Life came knocking and I made the mistake of opening the door. Introductions are naturally muddled; they've met previously but not spoken to each other. With social conventions previously bypassed, it makes sense that they'd be added as an afterthought. "Se...
by Jaspirian
Tue Nov 19, 2013 5:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 18244

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (11/12)

I’m face to face with the girl I saw in the pool. She’s wearing an irritated expression and she looks me up and down before stepping back with a “hmph.” “I thought it was you. You nearly got away from me in the crowd, but I’m faster than I look.” She folds her arms proudly and it’s all I can do not ...